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Intoxicating
I put
To my lips
Every kind of liquor,
Simply
Trying
To replicate
Your
Intoxicating kiss…
But,
It’s all
Amiss.
To my lips
Every kind of liquor,
Simply
Trying
To replicate
Your
Intoxicating kiss…
But,
It’s all
Amiss.
Published 7th Aug 2022
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7th Aug 2022 7:51am
Dear tmw,
You’ve created an incredible image in your write of grief and those awful feelings of loss that alcohol only numbs topically. I admire how much you’ve said with such brevity. Great piece.
H🌷
You’ve created an incredible image in your write of grief and those awful feelings of loss that alcohol only numbs topically. I admire how much you’ve said with such brevity. Great piece.
H🌷
7th Aug 2022 8:09am
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7th Aug 2022 1:04pm
