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poetry, therapy for the mad
shadowed faith and die
it hurts to feel this alive
passions peak love and hate...divine
to feel this strongly, god I dig it
the highs so awesome
the grey so melancholy
I wouldn't want to change it
to understand one you must experience the other
the blue days full of sunshine
feeling good and connected
then the bad days come and I feel adrift
alone in the madness
these days even the music rifts fail me
so I sail the written pages
and hope words don't fail
cut, slash and burn
feel it in my gut and yearn for better days
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Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 6:00am
Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 6:07am
hello dearest poet better days my friend thank you for the love it's deeply felt ❤️
Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 7:01am
days like these can let us know we are alive and ready for more experiences
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Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 9:26pm
good afternoon dearest James thank you yes I agree they let us know we are alive...have a beautiful day today 💕
Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 7:04am
Dear B,
Yes! So divinely said. From start to finish this is the poet’s poetic soul.
Really beautiful write. H🌷
Yes! So divinely said. From start to finish this is the poet’s poetic soul.
Really beautiful write. H🌷
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Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 9:27pm
hello beautiful Honoria thank you graciously for the love on this write it's deeply felt... have a wonderful day today ❤️
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27th Jul 2022 7:46am
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Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 9:28pm
good afternoon dearest Sawyer I hope you're having a good day thank your for the beautiful comment 💕
Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 10:56am
Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 9:29pm
hello dearest Poet thank you graciously for the love her it's felt have a beautiful day today 💕
Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 2:11pm
Yes, you've hit the nail on the head... and so beautifully! I've finally found a therapist who understands that I want to cope better with life, but without numbing & flattening myself. I love and need the rollercoaster too much...
For me it's music more than words lately, but I trust my words will come back someday as the madness ebbs and flows...
❤️k
For me it's music more than words lately, but I trust my words will come back someday as the madness ebbs and flows...
❤️k
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Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
27th Jul 2022 9:32pm
hello beautiful poetess you know there is a wave in the mental health system where people who are different are not treated like they are sick but just different and even people with Schizophrenia are going without meds and living with the symptoms...I for one being on meds can attest the meds don't cure you of the voices any way...I love the feeling to and appreciate what the voices tell me mine are helpful... thank you lovely one for your beautiful thoughts 💕
Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
28th Jul 2022 9:17pm
Hey there lovely lady,
Your powerful pen and true natural talents have a magical bit of soothsaying feel to me. I say that because it feels like you've taken some of my most hidden hurts of self, along with some life drawn curses and reflected upon them within the framework of your poem.... eerily so. I feel comforted in that, if that makes sense
I fully empathize and share in your thoughts and emotional release. Your work is so touching, open and achingly honest.... thank you for that, Bren.
I appreciate it and you, so very much.
🌹-🖤💙
B
Your powerful pen and true natural talents have a magical bit of soothsaying feel to me. I say that because it feels like you've taken some of my most hidden hurts of self, along with some life drawn curses and reflected upon them within the framework of your poem.... eerily so. I feel comforted in that, if that makes sense
I fully empathize and share in your thoughts and emotional release. Your work is so touching, open and achingly honest.... thank you for that, Bren.
I appreciate it and you, so very much.
🌹-🖤💙
B
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Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
28th Jul 2022 11:26pm
good afternoon beautiful Blue and hello first let me say I'm very happy to see you back I missed seeing you here and feared when I didn't see you...it was eerie without your voice the place needs you... thank you graciously lovely one for the beautifully thoughtful comment on this I appreciate you seeing a magical quality in my writes as I do pick up on things in the universe and put it to pen I think that's where my magic comes out is in my writings this one is how I feel but a lot of them are channeling...it's both beautiful and painful you relate to this as you know these powerful feelings are both...I'm so happy to see you I cherish you 💕
Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
29th Jul 2022 5:22pm
When you have such intense feelings that they manifest in every way possible; the love and hate, the sadness and passion, the pain and everything else finds its way into everything. And I feel so fortunate to share in yours because I think your darkness is so beautiful, but your light too. You may feel most comfortable in the darkness but you also light the way with the intensity of your words. And when you have that intensity it shows in all extremes, in everything. But when you can share that intensity with another you can make them feel so many things. Your words never fail, they burn with passion in all the best ways.
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Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
30th Jul 2022 00:21am
hello beautiful Kristina thank you graciously lovely one for encouraging my darkness once there was a wave here of poets that were drawn to my light then taken aback by my dark it's been a long time since I've let it go full force...I think it is time to just be me...I cherish your thoughts on this 💕
Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
30th Jul 2022 00:24am
Just be you, because you are beautiful. I want to see all the darkness but there is plenty of light too for people who like that sort of thing. :p <3
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Re: Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
30th Jul 2022 00:42am
thank you lovely one I will do my best yes. I am both I try to temper the two I have been known to let the dark run a muck then my soft side is quiet inside... so I have to reign it in...you're beautiful to me Kristina 💕
Re. poetry, therapy for the mad
30th Jul 2022 6:39am
my brain is shitshow, that smells like roses, sometimes they are fresh, sometimes they are rotting. love you, B<3
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