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Flirt
You bit your
bottom lip
and did
that thing
where you
smile
and dart your eyes
down
before making
bold contact.
It makes me wonder
what your
lower lip
feels like
in my teeth.
Makes me wonder
if the skin
on the side of
your neck,
on the top
of your breasts,
on the inside
of your thigh,
is just
as
soft.
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Re. Flirt
14th Jul 2022 2:07pm
Ahem. Ma’am. I’m going to need a cold shower. And with something so simple! Ha!
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Re: Re. Flirt
14th Jul 2022 4:46pm
NICE! Now we're all imagining you in the shower... oh, just me?
(wink)
Thanks for the r/r
(wink)
Thanks for the r/r
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Re. Flirt
Anonymous
14th Jul 2022 4:15pm
Pfft. For fucks sake, Betty. Leave room for Jesus.
… I jest.
The queer in me enjoyed this poem. If Jesus was queer, I’m sure he’d enjoy it too.
One quick edit: you’ve got “and dart yours eyes” which just needs a quick fix :)
Cheers and stuff
-M
… I jest.
The queer in me enjoyed this poem. If Jesus was queer, I’m sure he’d enjoy it too.
One quick edit: you’ve got “and dart yours eyes” which just needs a quick fix :)
Cheers and stuff
-M
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Re: Re. Flirt
Hay-suess, the dude from Miami who drives the pickup truck? That Jesus? Shit, girl, there's room for him. Call him on over. My bed is the land of equal opportunity.
:)
Thanks for the catch. Got that fixed.
I'm glad you and Queer Jesus dig it.
:)
Thanks for the catch. Got that fixed.
I'm glad you and Queer Jesus dig it.
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14th Jul 2022 4:18pm
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16th Jul 2022 1:10pm
Omg… I think my brain just exploded… wait that wasn’t my brain? Oh shit!
:)
Gracias Bonita!
:)
Gracias Bonita!