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Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
My ear 'pon your chest
Each beat, an unspoken bequeathal
Humming warmth of skin on skin
Gentle fingers find comfort nestled in chest hair
I whimsically trace intentional letters
over spent flesh and taught nipples
Oh, that smile
Darling, it's beam burns evident
You softly breathe out my name
in a tone reserved only for me
Our skin pebbles of proud gooseflesh
Your hand weaves through my hair
brushes some away, bettering your view
while absent-minded caresses of my nape
incur sweet beckoning sighs
My leg drapes languidly over yours
as my sated inner warmth
presses and confirms all that is so cherished
Willful fingertips do random exploration
as whisper-purred croons
approvingly echo songs of pleasure
Tantalizing musk weighs the air
scented of deepest desires
fulfilled to the height of fulfillment
A slight breeze from above
cools and soothes
restfully relaxed— grey turns black
then morphs into well earned sleep.
Dreams
intermix
combine
and
commingle
in preparation
for all
that's
still
to come.
Author's Note
©Blu2022
a pared down rewrite
a pared down rewrite
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Savouring ad libitum
6th Jul 2022 12:53pm
This is heavenly, absolutely beautiful to share such a moment. Blue you smashed this clean out the ball park. I'd only say it needs you to read it
Loved every morsel
Love and light
Ron xx
BRAVO BRAVO 👏 BRAVO 👏
Loved every morsel
Love and light
Ron xx
BRAVO BRAVO 👏 BRAVO 👏
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
6th Jul 2022 2:37pm
You're far too kind, my dear knight.
Your enthusiasm is infectious and I feel exceptionally lucky to that you have found such emotion and joy, when reading.
I hope to possibly record this later tonight, depending on the amount of time left in the day.
Thank you for everything....
it means a lot to me.
🌹-💙
B
Your enthusiasm is infectious and I feel exceptionally lucky to that you have found such emotion and joy, when reading.
I hope to possibly record this later tonight, depending on the amount of time left in the day.
Thank you for everything....
it means a lot to me.
🌹-💙
B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
6th Jul 2022 1:00pm
Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
6th Jul 2022 1:11pm
Thanks so much for stopping by, A.
It's been a while and I'm truly glad to see you and get your feedback.
Much obliged, my friend
🌹 - B
It's been a while and I'm truly glad to see you and get your feedback.
Much obliged, my friend
🌹 - B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
Anonymous
6th Jul 2022 1:58pm
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Thanks for stopping by, S
I agree, there's nothing like those little dreamy intimate moments after such heated exchanges... basking in one another until sleep takes hold.
Those are the kind of moments that you want to go on and on...I'm thrilled you found some allure, that does my heart some good this morning.
Much obliged and much love,
🌹 - B
I agree, there's nothing like those little dreamy intimate moments after such heated exchanges... basking in one another until sleep takes hold.
Those are the kind of moments that you want to go on and on...I'm thrilled you found some allure, that does my heart some good this morning.
Much obliged and much love,
🌹 - B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
6th Jul 2022 5:30pm
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6th Jul 2022 8:29pm
Yesss!
Now that's exactly what I had hoped a response would be!! Loved that, Slip.
Thank you so much for your wonderfully apt and kind words. I'm entirely grateful.
It's nice seeing you 🦋
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
Now that's exactly what I had hoped a response would be!! Loved that, Slip.
Thank you so much for your wonderfully apt and kind words. I'm entirely grateful.
It's nice seeing you 🦋
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
Anonymous
6th Jul 2022 7:31pm
An enjoyable read! Liked the suspenseful format at the end, too. Always look forward to reading you-
T
T
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
6th Jul 2022 8:23pm
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- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
6th Jul 2022 7:39pm
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
Thanks for soaking in some of my delicious dreams and heartfelt fantasies, dear Jay.
It really is a wonderful feeling to know that you found a bit of something that potentially spoke to you... how my incredibly cool.
I adore hearing from you and I appreciate you taking the time to visit..... I've missed you!
Hope you are well, my dear poet
🌹 - 💙
B
It really is a wonderful feeling to know that you found a bit of something that potentially spoke to you... how my incredibly cool.
I adore hearing from you and I appreciate you taking the time to visit..... I've missed you!
Hope you are well, my dear poet
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
6th Jul 2022 11:14pm
Hello B,
This is a classic poem. The words set the tone, music and coherence between the lovers. I love the selection of words, very creative and impressive. They evoke emotions of high tune like a fountain and then come down like a stream in the plain. Love it.
KS
This is a classic poem. The words set the tone, music and coherence between the lovers. I love the selection of words, very creative and impressive. They evoke emotions of high tune like a fountain and then come down like a stream in the plain. Love it.
KS
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
6th Jul 2022 11:40pm
Ahhhh... your ethereal words are truly thoughtful and wonderfully considerate.
I am absolutely all smiles, reading your descriptive imagery my little poem evoked.
What a great compliment, my friend!
Thank you.
I'm sincerely grateful
🌹
**✿❀(*⋆‿⋆*)❀✿**
I am absolutely all smiles, reading your descriptive imagery my little poem evoked.
What a great compliment, my friend!
Thank you.
I'm sincerely grateful
🌹
**✿❀(*⋆‿⋆*)❀✿**
Re. Savouring ad libitum
7th Jul 2022 00:24am
Love all day and night long enjoy the wild ride of orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
8th Jul 2022 6:31am
For as long as I'm willing and able, at least!
Thanks for the drop by, Francisco. I am thankful for you and appreciate your readership, my charmer!
🌹 B
Thanks for the drop by, Francisco. I am thankful for you and appreciate your readership, my charmer!
🌹 B
Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
9th Jul 2022 00:31am
I'll be your sexy charmer all day and night you beautiful strong smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
9th Jul 2022 4:17am
haha.... I give you total kudos for your amazing sticktoitiveness, Francisco!!
haha... thanks, buddy!
🌹 - 💙
haha... thanks, buddy!
🌹 - 💙
Re. Savouring ad libitum
7th Jul 2022 12:04pm
Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
You ask and you shall receive... ;)
Glad you enjoyed the recording like you do, it feels even more special, right!?!... Especially when so kindly asked... I think that help to add a little gusto behind my words.
Damn, right! ;p
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, my dear
You constantly make my day.
🌹 - 💙
Glad you enjoyed the recording like you do, it feels even more special, right!?!... Especially when so kindly asked... I think that help to add a little gusto behind my words.
Damn, right! ;p
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, my dear
You constantly make my day.
🌹 - 💙
Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
8th Jul 2022 6:52am
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8th Jul 2022 6:56am
Re. Savouring ad libitum
7th Jul 2022 3:53pm
Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
8th Jul 2022 6:36am
Glad you enjoyed reading /listening Birchel.
Thank you for stopping by to say so and for adding me to your reading list... it means a lot.
Sometimes it feels so nice to understood for being real without the need of any theatrics or wordy gimmicks... I appreciate that open communication, so thanks for you appreciating it, too.
Take care of yourself out there!
🌹 - B
Thank you for stopping by to say so and for adding me to your reading list... it means a lot.
Sometimes it feels so nice to understood for being real without the need of any theatrics or wordy gimmicks... I appreciate that open communication, so thanks for you appreciating it, too.
Take care of yourself out there!
🌹 - B
Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
8th Jul 2022 7:30am
Re. Savouring ad libitum
Anonymous
7th Jul 2022 4:11pm
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My dear dear soul brother!
Well it's not as sexy as having an accent that's for sure!! ;p
Yet, I'm so very heartened you found pleasure in the spoken word version, too. -x
Welcome to my own honest and clear reality....There's no bullshit here. No pretense nor any siren-speak. Only the stark truth of emotion.
The beautiful exhaustion of being driven to the point where you're only next move is the warm blanket of sleep wrapped up in the arms of your lover.... Ohhh sigh!! Even if I wake up like a starfish hogging all the covers myself... (whoops 🤭 did I burst the romantic bubble 🗯 ?!?)
Hahaha... Still, falling asleep that way is often the most loveliest little dreamy cocoon... Mmmm!...
Your heart, words and true light of inspiration/understanding mean more than words can convey....
Thank you for seeing me like you do.
Much returned love from across the pond,
✲゚。.(✿╹◡╹)ノ☆.。₀:*゚✲゚*:₀。
-B
Well it's not as sexy as having an accent that's for sure!! ;p
Yet, I'm so very heartened you found pleasure in the spoken word version, too. -x
Welcome to my own honest and clear reality....There's no bullshit here. No pretense nor any siren-speak. Only the stark truth of emotion.
The beautiful exhaustion of being driven to the point where you're only next move is the warm blanket of sleep wrapped up in the arms of your lover.... Ohhh sigh!! Even if I wake up like a starfish hogging all the covers myself... (whoops 🤭 did I burst the romantic bubble 🗯 ?!?)
Hahaha... Still, falling asleep that way is often the most loveliest little dreamy cocoon... Mmmm!...
Your heart, words and true light of inspiration/understanding mean more than words can convey....
Thank you for seeing me like you do.
Much returned love from across the pond,
✲゚。.(✿╹◡╹)ノ☆.。₀:*゚✲゚*:₀。
-B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
7th Jul 2022 6:56pm
Hoi hoi,
Ahhhhh…., the last six words: the cherry on the cake!
Love it!
Kind regards, Gus
Ahhhhh…., the last six words: the cherry on the cake!
Love it!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
8th Jul 2022 6:58am
Ohhh, they are very much so aren't they, Gus!!
It's sometimes that forgotten anticipation that waits on the other side of awake, that can bring even bigger shivers and goosebumps!!!
Thank you for feeling that little additional cherry essence and for enjoying the cake as a whole!
I appreciate you taking the time by stopping by to say so, you're always welcomed here, my friend.
It's a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
It's sometimes that forgotten anticipation that waits on the other side of awake, that can bring even bigger shivers and goosebumps!!!
Thank you for feeling that little additional cherry essence and for enjoying the cake as a whole!
I appreciate you taking the time by stopping by to say so, you're always welcomed here, my friend.
It's a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
7th Jul 2022 8:43pm
your voice adds a richly seductive dimension....sheer pleasure listening...more to come you say..wonderful...L
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
8th Jul 2022 7:22am
Hey there, Lawrence ;)
I'm a constant work in progress and I've been trying to hone my spoken word skills for months and months now, on DUP, so your thoughtful feedback is music to my ears!
I'm soaring!
I'm overjoyed that you felt the pleasure I had hoped to very much convey.... thank you for sharing those thoughts, my dear poet.
It's deeply and humbly appreciated.
🌹 B
I'm a constant work in progress and I've been trying to hone my spoken word skills for months and months now, on DUP, so your thoughtful feedback is music to my ears!
I'm soaring!
I'm overjoyed that you felt the pleasure I had hoped to very much convey.... thank you for sharing those thoughts, my dear poet.
It's deeply and humbly appreciated.
🌹 B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
8th Jul 2022 00:11am
Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum
or the hole story... ;p
I hope to covey that one, it's a doozy. (at least for me)
Thanks for the lovely visit, RT
I do so look forward to them and you.
🌹 - B
I hope to covey that one, it's a doozy. (at least for me)
Thanks for the lovely visit, RT
I do so look forward to them and you.
🌹 - B
Re. Savouring ad libitum
8th Jul 2022 4:14am
This is so atmospheric, so warm and sultry... very inviting.
"You softly breathe out my name
in a tone reserved only for me
That tone, that tone, that tone... just thinking about it is enough for gooseflesh, isn't it? That line resonated with me so much it carried me through the rest of the poem keeping me company.
Good stuff here, and your reading of it was lovely to listen to. :-)
"You softly breathe out my name
in a tone reserved only for me
That tone, that tone, that tone... just thinking about it is enough for gooseflesh, isn't it? That line resonated with me so much it carried me through the rest of the poem keeping me company.
Good stuff here, and your reading of it was lovely to listen to. :-)
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Two of my most favorite words sultry and inviting!
Yes!
Thanks for your understanding in regards to our absolute solidarity of 'tone' and it's affects!
I think we have possibly discussed our Kryptonite around this before, but it totally bears repeating — It's THAT voice/timbre, isn't it!?!? Like a 'bring me to my knees' kind of sexy as fuck, tone that just completely has me all willing putty... ha!... Yep.. that damn tone!! ;p
I love (and I mean love) how it feels to hear my name uttered like that, that alone, literally has me teetering... I think we get so sucked into and used to using pet names, that when my actual name is used so fucking earnestly in that manner it feels almost like a Pavlovian response.... where I instantly salivate....It's just so hot.
I'm appreciative of your kinship and kind feedback, PS. It's a day made brighter knowing that the SW version comes across how I hoped; it's been a long journey trying to figure out my groove there, so much obliged!
It's a pleasure to see you, always.
Thank you again for stopping by,
🌹 - B
Yes!
Thanks for your understanding in regards to our absolute solidarity of 'tone' and it's affects!
I think we have possibly discussed our Kryptonite around this before, but it totally bears repeating — It's THAT voice/timbre, isn't it!?!? Like a 'bring me to my knees' kind of sexy as fuck, tone that just completely has me all willing putty... ha!... Yep.. that damn tone!! ;p
I love (and I mean love) how it feels to hear my name uttered like that, that alone, literally has me teetering... I think we get so sucked into and used to using pet names, that when my actual name is used so fucking earnestly in that manner it feels almost like a Pavlovian response.... where I instantly salivate....It's just so hot.
I'm appreciative of your kinship and kind feedback, PS. It's a day made brighter knowing that the SW version comes across how I hoped; it's been a long journey trying to figure out my groove there, so much obliged!
It's a pleasure to see you, always.
Thank you again for stopping by,
🌹 - B
Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
8th Jul 2022 8:13am
The eroticism behind your voice is very beautifu....
This is very intriguing
This is very intriguing
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
8th Jul 2022 8:52am
What an enormously lovely compliment, thank you for saying so.
Intrigue was definitely something that I hoped to weave into spoken word 'being'
I'm delighted you felt it and deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me, POft!
🌹 - 💙
B
Intrigue was definitely something that I hoped to weave into spoken word 'being'
I'm delighted you felt it and deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me, POft!
🌹 - 💙
B
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8th Jul 2022 5:34pm
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
8th Jul 2022 5:47pm
Wow!!
That's high praise, indeed.
I humbly thank you, my lovely friend.
It's taken me a while to get even remotely comfortable with recording SW versions of my poems, so you really have me beaming with that feedback, T.
To be heard as enticing is exactly what I hoped.
It's awesome you felt that was conveyed.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
That's high praise, indeed.
I humbly thank you, my lovely friend.
It's taken me a while to get even remotely comfortable with recording SW versions of my poems, so you really have me beaming with that feedback, T.
To be heard as enticing is exactly what I hoped.
It's awesome you felt that was conveyed.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
11th Jul 2022 5:13am
Dearest Lady Blue,
This beautifully composed masterpiece is replete with three of my favorite things; romance, sensuality, and deep passion.
My favorite romantic passage "You softly breathe out my name
in a tone reserved only for me."
You already know my favorite sensual passage "Tantalizing musk weighs the air
scented of deepest desires."
And this passage is so vivid in its deep passion and so comforting. I can feel the heat "my sated inner warmth
presses and confirms all that is so cherished"
Your reading conjured your magicsl head-ta-toe tingles. I'm adding it to my BB YouTube passion-playlist.
Bit of a disappointing revelation...I have very little chest hair 🤠
Bravissima mia bella conejita 🐻💞🐰
This beautifully composed masterpiece is replete with three of my favorite things; romance, sensuality, and deep passion.
My favorite romantic passage "You softly breathe out my name
in a tone reserved only for me."
You already know my favorite sensual passage "Tantalizing musk weighs the air
scented of deepest desires."
And this passage is so vivid in its deep passion and so comforting. I can feel the heat "my sated inner warmth
presses and confirms all that is so cherished"
Your reading conjured your magicsl head-ta-toe tingles. I'm adding it to my BB YouTube passion-playlist.
Bit of a disappointing revelation...I have very little chest hair 🤠
Bravissima mia bella conejita 🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
11th Jul 2022 5:17pm
Again , I'm humbly grateful for the above feedback and I do apologize for any misunderstanding, I was sincerely earnest, in my previous communication; I have no expectations nor should any undo pressure apply, whatsoever. You are you, this amazingly unique individual and that is lovely. I do understand that there's a shelf life for everything...like I said, no worries. I deeply deeply appreciate your kind words here... I am utterly unworthy. You're far too generous and I'm wholly undeserving...
All I know how to say is thank you and please be well and be safe out there.
-B
All I know how to say is thank you and please be well and be safe out there.
-B
Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
11th Jul 2022 8:08pm
Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
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11th Jul 2022 7:42pm
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
11th Jul 2022 7:51pm
Omg.... You're so psychic... I was just beating myself up (like silly Blue's do!) and silently and desperately needing a little pick me up and *poof* here you are with your lovely and blush inducing comments.... that l simply adore to pieces!!
Thank you, for my own little moment of pure bliss right now... *swoon....
🌹-💙
(◍•ᴗ•◍)♡ ✧*。
Thank you, for my own little moment of pure bliss right now... *swoon....
🌹-💙
(◍•ᴗ•◍)♡ ✧*。
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11th Jul 2022 8:10pm
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
19th Jul 2022 5:54am
You are simply lovely, dear S
I am fortunate beyond my ability to convey properly, that we fluttered into each other's DUP lives early on in your serendipitous return. I think maybe it was the beginning of May, when I responded to a poem title that cracked me up!! I can't remember exactly but it was something like "I thought I was a good poet until I read The Poets on DUP" or something like that!!! Omg, it makes me howl, it's sooo funny. From then I on, I knew... I also like to think that I was one of the first to see what a bright warm soul it was, that had returned. ;) Little did I know that you and your big hearted goodness would be part of what I look forward to daily, when I sign on.
Thank you for sharing yourself, being crazy cool with me, clicking so well and for not only caring about T&A.....( well, not ALL the time...)
I adore you and I'm rooting for you, always.
Endless kisses and hugs,
🌹 - 💙
s/s
(◦’ ⌣ ’(’ᴗˉ✿)♡
I am fortunate beyond my ability to convey properly, that we fluttered into each other's DUP lives early on in your serendipitous return. I think maybe it was the beginning of May, when I responded to a poem title that cracked me up!! I can't remember exactly but it was something like "I thought I was a good poet until I read The Poets on DUP" or something like that!!! Omg, it makes me howl, it's sooo funny. From then I on, I knew... I also like to think that I was one of the first to see what a bright warm soul it was, that had returned. ;) Little did I know that you and your big hearted goodness would be part of what I look forward to daily, when I sign on.
Thank you for sharing yourself, being crazy cool with me, clicking so well and for not only caring about T&A.....( well, not ALL the time...)
I adore you and I'm rooting for you, always.
Endless kisses and hugs,
🌹 - 💙
s/s
(◦’ ⌣ ’(’ᴗˉ✿)♡
Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
11th Jul 2022 8:45pm
Your voice is like music for the heavens that stretch the imagination in more ways than one.
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Re: Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
11th Jul 2022 8:49pm
That's one of the best compliments, I've ever received... wow.
I'm deeply and humbly glad you liked what you heard.
🌹 💙
Thank you for visiting, CS.
It's always a treat.
-B
I'm deeply and humbly glad you liked what you heard.
🌹 💙
Thank you for visiting, CS.
It's always a treat.
-B
Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
31st Jul 2022 7:45am
My skittles, my M&Ms, my popcorn, all on the floor!
And that's all I'm going to say.
And that's all I'm going to say.
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31st Jul 2022 8:18am
Re. Savouring ad libitum (+Spoken Word)
28th Aug 2022 9:27pm
The comingling of your voice and words makes for a rapture of sensual beauty that enfolds me like a silk dream. This is a romantic passion beyond the moon or stars. Each syllable touches me like a lover. And I never wanted the dream to end.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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28th Aug 2022 9:46pm
You're the total definition of delight!! I am seriously feeling spoiled and it's impossible to deny — you are irresistible!... and I can help but to utterly indulge. ;p...Thank you for showering me with your passion, zeal and true loveliness!
I am surprised to see you travel back through my poems yet, grinning ear to ear!
You are amazing, thank you, John.
Much love and my most heartfelt appreciation ✨
xoxo
-Susan
I am surprised to see you travel back through my poems yet, grinning ear to ear!
You are amazing, thank you, John.
Much love and my most heartfelt appreciation ✨
xoxo
-Susan