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Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:06pm
Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:26pm
It doesn't take much to get that fountain flowing...
But fountain drinks just taste better for some reason, right?
And...
Have to put that fire out somehow lest you burn to ashes...
We just can't have that can we?
You might just still be useful yet. :p
But fountain drinks just taste better for some reason, right?
And...
Have to put that fire out somehow lest you burn to ashes...
We just can't have that can we?
You might just still be useful yet. :p
Re. Wet
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23rd Jun 2022 9:15pm
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Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:29pm
Haha, it always is damnit... but I like it so there.
Pay me back in full always... * going to stop before I get myself in 'trouble' * too late I am sure. lol
Now what is this conference on my calendar...
Yeah I bet you know. :p
Pay me back in full always... * going to stop before I get myself in 'trouble' * too late I am sure. lol
Now what is this conference on my calendar...
Yeah I bet you know. :p
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24th Jun 2022 2:08am
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 2:32am
Haha, the brolly. Yes, I don't want you to drown. I still have uses for you yet...
Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:20pm
I'll be there to make you happy. You need to love yourself into orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:31pm
I can always count on you Francisco. These insatiable needs... I live for orgasmic bliss. And a few other things... :p I knew you could appreciate the angst of needing orgasmic bliss in the middle of the day. And every other time as well. :p
Re: Re. Wet
I will be their with remote control to the vibrating thong/panties you are wearing. I will be setting the remote to high so you can good and relaxed.
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Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 10:55pm
Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 1:24am
Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:25pm
Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:34pm
LOVE the 'absolutely awesome' Ron. I knew you could appreciate.
I try to never wear light colors. Just saying. lol
Sometimes you just have to get up and that can be embarrassing.
Or bare-assing I suppose depending on where you are at in the process of clean-up. lol
I try to never wear light colors. Just saying. lol
Sometimes you just have to get up and that can be embarrassing.
Or bare-assing I suppose depending on where you are at in the process of clean-up. lol
Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:31pm
A picture is worth a thousand words, however the 14 words and this picture speaks all languages. Lol
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Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:37pm
Well hey there ZZ. I think it's important to speak as many languages as possible but passion is the most important of all. I am so glad you can hear me so clearly. ;) It can be hard to deal with sometimes but oh so worth it... so hard... :p
Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:54pm
Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 10:50pm
I would much rather have someone else do the 'walking', and I would be 'walking' a lot too. lol Some trails are just the best you are ever going to go on. There is always terrain that needs to be explored over and over again. But hey you got to go with what you have at the time. And there are so many fantasies in my head that are set off so easily, just ... * nevermind, innocent look *
Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 9:56pm
hello beautiful Kristina so sexy...
lovely wet, my pet
creamy essence aroused from intimate sessions
desire is bound
sexual freedom is found
while sitting at desk dreaming 💕
lovely wet, my pet
creamy essence aroused from intimate sessions
desire is bound
sexual freedom is found
while sitting at desk dreaming 💕
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Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 10:54pm
Geez, crimsin I mean I was almost to a point where I could get up from my desk. And look what you went and did. You really do have a dark side. (and I like it, maybe too much. :p). So very sexy... what a response. What did I say on 'Repeat you sins...' "Can a comment become a response, yes it can... So often..." This is definitely a response of the best kind. Just damn, you cannot help but write something beautiful can you?
Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 10:56pm
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Re: Re. Wet
23rd Jun 2022 11:01pm
You know it Jay. The best thirst quencher you can get. Lots of fluids, minerals, cream, me. Always ready to serve some electrolytes to keep you strong. Need you strong and I am good that way. I hate when people are thirsty. :p
Re. Wet
I think in general few people will object to such a site. The rascal in me is thinking "wet" could refer to other things, like water crashing against the rock wall here at my brother's house in Hawaii, or even the two dogs.
Of course the graphic leaves no doubt.
Of course the graphic leaves no doubt.
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 2:36am
Haha, I am sure somebody will object but ho-hum some people just don't know how to have fun. :p I have needs! I am here to make you think Jazz and I love how you think. But yes I still wanted to leave you with no doubt. lol I think there can be no doubt especially if you know me. Sometimes you just have to write stuff out and well... * nevermind, innocent look * Perhaps I say too much... ;p
Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 10:09pm
I have found writing out things first is a better plan compared to acting without thought.
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Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 3:41am
Oh my, Kristina💞 Ya might wanna put a towel on your chair 😈 This is delicious.
Bravissima, BD.
Bravissima, BD.
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 1:44pm
Hey there GW, but I want to feel the leather damnit. lol (or fake leather :p) You know be able to rock my hips rubbing. * nevermind, innocent look * I want to have to clean up after. I want to see my thoughts covering it and have to mop them up remembering what just happened. Towel cums later. :p
Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 4:59pm
Okay now you're just tempting me to make my faux leather all slick 'n' sticky 🥰
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 5:05pm
It needs conditioning, so much conditioning to keep it young and make it last forever... ;)
Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 5:52pm
Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 5:56am
Dear K,
🌊
This felt like a tidal wave of passion. Although, if you’re experiencing this kind of pleasure at work I kind of want to know what you do and who sits beside you? 🤔😉
A lot felt in a few very well appointed words. 😊
H🌷
🌊
This felt like a tidal wave of passion. Although, if you’re experiencing this kind of pleasure at work I kind of want to know what you do and who sits beside you? 🤔😉
A lot felt in a few very well appointed words. 😊
H🌷
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 1:47pm
Damn tidal waves of passion keep trying to drown me, but I will not go down easily. lol Oh, I can experience this kind of pleasure anywhere, I have a really dirty mind and... I stopped trying to get that thing clean a long time ago - not that I ever really tried very hard - or maybe I did. lol Need those breaks throughout the day. Well, there is this guy at the office who is always coming over to ask me for something. :p But I must resist the hand on the shoulder and all that. I wonder what do you think I do? ;) That's probably not it. :p Sometimes you don't need words to say something right... ;) I love seeing you Honoria. Your presence is always wonderful. X
Re. Wet
Anonymous
24th Jun 2022 6:59am
Sly, erotic wit seductively tucked within a classic form....the best of all worlds! The more you write, the more polished your work becomes! Thoroughly enjoyable! -Ted
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 1:57pm
Sly erotic wit, you know it Ted. ;) I love bringing the best of all worlds. Whether you want me to press submit or if you want me to whip you senseless. I am your girl. :p I want to make Bangkok say Damn! What the hell is happening over there. Yeah, it's going to be great - taking a piece of you in those underground alleys. Just saying. :p
Re: Re. Wet
Anonymous
24th Jun 2022 3:25pm
It's still my goal to have you cloned. :-)
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 3:29pm
That mold broke along with my filter I suppose. And some cloning is illegal, not sure the world could handle that. lol
Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 7:24am
Every man on the planet wants to be that man. Well damn, I'm now jealous of half the human race. An inspired tease. Witch.
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 2:06pm
I love it when every man wants to be that man. I am all about inspiring people. ;) Jealousy, oh god let's not talk about that subject. It's like a mindfield that I trip and stumble through trying not to hit one of those but not knowing where they are can be hard. It can be a really strong emotion to feel from someone. I have not found the spell to correct that one yet. Your witch.
Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 5:21pm
Since you've asked for honest critique, I'll give it: I like the poem. It's a good haiku, a thumbnail portrait of an emotional/erotic response to a thought of someone. The mixing of bold and italicised text and the accompanying stock image spoil the effect, though, for me. If it doesn't do that for other readers, that's great! You can take or leave my comment as you please, of course. And to reiterate, I do like the poem, I just wish that it was allowed to breathe without all these special effects getting in the way, so to speak.
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 5:32pm
Hey there Casted, I do see your point and I appreciate your honest opinion. For me, I like the formatting and including the image but that's definitely not to say I do not understand what you are saying regarding let the words speak for themselves. It's certainly something to consider. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. It's like how some old movies without the special effects are better than new ones. Different trains of thought.
Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 5:36pm
Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 5:47pm
Sometimes people say things just to be mean with no other value than to try and make you feel small but that's very different than constructive criticism. Thank you for being considerate and offering value.
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 7:09pm
Stirring, stirring. Maybe it's because I thought you left me and I was really sad about that. :p It's so nice to see you back again. Stay a while... I promise there is plenty to get soaked about. Just saying... I hope you are doing well and glad you stopped by... :)
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Re: Re. Wet
24th Jun 2022 7:12pm
Well damn, that was unexpected. lol But I love it... Stay horny and keep coming to see me. :p You know it always be weird, but a damn fun ride... There is no denying that.
Re. Wet
"GULP!" 😳
Hm? I can only imagine what the reaction of Karai Haciemon, the creator of the Senryu, would be if he had the pleasure of reading this most vividly visual, fabulous little erotic masterpiece, so delectably inscribed in his famous form.
If one were to replace the face of the lovely model with your blissfully engaging countenance, imagining it's your succulence being felt … there would be no limit to one's height of sensual arousal.
How could there be adequate words to express the lush sensation of masculine gratitude I feel … a question I cannot answer, except to say,
"Thank you ever-so warmly, beautiful Kristina!" ⁓ Richard🖌
Hm? I can only imagine what the reaction of Karai Haciemon, the creator of the Senryu, would be if he had the pleasure of reading this most vividly visual, fabulous little erotic masterpiece, so delectably inscribed in his famous form.
If one were to replace the face of the lovely model with your blissfully engaging countenance, imagining it's your succulence being felt … there would be no limit to one's height of sensual arousal.
How could there be adequate words to express the lush sensation of masculine gratitude I feel … a question I cannot answer, except to say,
"Thank you ever-so warmly, beautiful Kristina!" ⁓ Richard🖌
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Re: Re. Wet
25th Jun 2022 2:40pm
Well I love your reaction Richard. :p And I would love to his as well, that would be something. Now I know who the creator of the Senryu is. I always want to give you vivid visuals, sometimes you can do that in few words with the right subject matter. :p Drawing fabulous little erotic masterpieces, that's some art I love. And I absolutely hate to limit one's height of sensual arousal. Especially my own but that's definitely no issue there.
You have expressed your masculine gratitude perfectly; and my feminine being loves to hear it so much. The combination of feminine and masculine energies is the best feeling in the world. Thank you for coming by and gracing me with your words. You have left me smiling this morning and I can definitely use that. :)
You have expressed your masculine gratitude perfectly; and my feminine being loves to hear it so much. The combination of feminine and masculine energies is the best feeling in the world. Thank you for coming by and gracing me with your words. You have left me smiling this morning and I can definitely use that. :)
Re. Wet
25th Jun 2022 2:57pm
The tiny thought can initiate the greatest of response...I'll put on my trench coat
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Re: Re. Wet
25th Jun 2022 3:07pm
I know you can imagine the real thoughts beyond this tiny thought. ;) Yes, put on the trench coat because my fantasies get crazy. Acting them out can be dangerous. :p And the forecast always calls for rain. Lots of rain, and a storm like you have never seen... But storm chasers get what they asked for and more. ;)
Re. Wet
25th Jun 2022 11:27pm
Re: Re. Wet
26th Jun 2022 00:10am
It's bring extra towels to work day. You know that Billy. lol But it sure is easier working from home isn't it. Still there is always so much excitement in knowing you might get caught. :p Just saying... Because sometimes you just can't wait.
Re. Wet
30th Jun 2022 11:21am
wow miss KX
this 14 word wonder really pulled the crowd in (or pulled them off?)
just proves how far erotica goes on this site...........
:)
this 14 word wonder really pulled the crowd in (or pulled them off?)
just proves how far erotica goes on this site...........
:)
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Re: Re. Wet
30th Jun 2022 12:58pm
You can say a lot in 14 words, you can say even more with no words at all sometimes. :p I love the wow... That's always such a lovely response to get, means you really got it. ;) Not sure there was much wiggle room on this one though, well wiggling in the chair but you know what I mean. Let's keep going far...
Re. Wet
1st Jul 2022 3:59pm
So you know what it's like when you cannot leave your desk for reasons other than a schedule. lol
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Re: Re. Wet
1st Jul 2022 5:50pm
I love being the 'reason' that someone cannot leave their desk. :p Keep them there all night working on my assignments. I can think of so many and each one strands me at my desk. ;)
Re: Re. Wet
10th Jul 2022 00:50am
Haha, yes what could be sweeter than the kind of torture that keeps you stuck at chair fully immersed in the naughtiest thoughts imaginable. I know I get stuck at my chair a lot. lol Thanks for stopping by and giving me your thoughts. :)
Re. Wet
Anonymous
10th Jul 2022 3:10am
Good Poem Excellent Write Would Love Too Read More Sometime :)
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Re: Re. Wet
10th Jul 2022 2:46pm
Hey Casey, you know what I am talking about. ;) Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. I look forward to reading you as well. Welcome to DUP. :)
Re. Wet
31st Jul 2022 00:04am
Cleaning up never sounded like so much fun.
Powerful punch within a few lines.
Well done.
Powerful punch within a few lines.
Well done.
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Re: Re. Wet
31st Jul 2022 9:41pm
Not sure about the cleaning up part but causing the mess sure is so much fun. lol Yes, it did not take many lines to communicate what I wanted here. Yes, been here for sure... That was the inspiration. lol :p Really happy you liked it, I hope it drew a really nice picture for you Wally.
Re. Wet
9th Aug 2022 9:36pm
I'm glad you told me about this one. *whew* What a hot drop of ink you created Kris! With that pen you are W-onderful, E-lectrifying, T-alented ;)
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Re: Re. Wet
9th Aug 2022 9:50pm
This is a favorite for me. ;) Because I so often * nevermind, innocent look * I prefer this one over the Tanka. Haha, that's so awesome W-onderful E-lectrifying T-alented... Love it!!! I am sure you have been stuck at the desk before... Like when the administrative assistant comes around, short skirt, high heels... and drops something. And you want to get up and help but... well... yeah... maybe take that phone call instead. ;) Thanks so much for stopping in to feel the wetness...