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Tracing Poems
Have you ever spent the time
to tease and please a woman
to truss her down
indulge in her?
see her writhe
test her limits with textures
on flesh
trace a poem on her clit
with your tongue
something to make her wet
then whisper it in her ear
while she begs
to partake of
each orgasm that slicks her
walls
as she readies for the moment
of your entrance
so she may indulge in feeling you
numb her
from all
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control
for once
take her mind from her
so she can be free
to tease and please a woman
to truss her down
indulge in her?
see her writhe
test her limits with textures
on flesh
trace a poem on her clit
with your tongue
something to make her wet
then whisper it in her ear
while she begs
to partake of
each orgasm that slicks her
walls
as she readies for the moment
of your entrance
so she may indulge in feeling you
numb her
from all
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control
for once
take her mind from her
so she can be free
Published 20th Jun 2022
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20th Jun 2022 4:35am
man I needed this tonight
my mind fucks with me too much
I do need a man in control to quiet my demons
this is freaking hot ❤️
my mind fucks with me too much
I do need a man in control to quiet my demons
this is freaking hot ❤️
25th Jun 2022 3:44am
Glad you found the heat,
Sometimes we need someone to
quiet them
Thanks for the read
Sometimes we need someone to
quiet them
Thanks for the read
20th Jun 2022 8:02am
"as she readies for the moment
of your entrance "
This is one of my favorite thing, and a good mention of it will always get my attention. This piece is nectar for bees around here, I think, teasing with poetry during sex... buzz fucking buzz, gasps. :-) Do you take requests for which poems, or is that tormentor's choice? :D
of your entrance "
This is one of my favorite thing, and a good mention of it will always get my attention. This piece is nectar for bees around here, I think, teasing with poetry during sex... buzz fucking buzz, gasps. :-) Do you take requests for which poems, or is that tormentor's choice? :D
20th Jun 2022 8:24am
20th Jun 2022 2:24pm
Paint my ass black and yellow and hand me a blindfold!
The description of the bondage relationship; the power exchange, the assumption of control, is so spot on. Finding what the bottom needs and then taking responsibility to give it… owning her experience, removing the illusion of control and redefining what she WILL feel. (Chef’s kiss)
Stand outs:
(Holy shit)
test her limits with textures
on flesh
(Who the fuck are you to write this next line? This is the sexiest line ever written. The imagery. Omg.)
trace a poem on her clit
with your tongue (Omg!)
…. Hold on… have to process…
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control
for once
take her mind from her
so she can be free
Chills. That is so. damn. badass.
Well done.
(Nice to see you found the rope.)
The description of the bondage relationship; the power exchange, the assumption of control, is so spot on. Finding what the bottom needs and then taking responsibility to give it… owning her experience, removing the illusion of control and redefining what she WILL feel. (Chef’s kiss)
Stand outs:
(Holy shit)
test her limits with textures
on flesh
(Who the fuck are you to write this next line? This is the sexiest line ever written. The imagery. Omg.)
trace a poem on her clit
with your tongue (Omg!)
…. Hold on… have to process…
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control
for once
take her mind from her
so she can be free
Chills. That is so. damn. badass.
Well done.
(Nice to see you found the rope.)
25th Jun 2022 4:04am
