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Thoughts From A Rose
Published 14th Jun 2022
Author's Note
For the June Haiku theme: Thorns
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/5726/
Observational and surprisingly introspective
"My daggers beckon
a cunning line of defense
Is your blood worthy?"
©Blu2022
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/5726/
Observational and surprisingly introspective
"My daggers beckon
a cunning line of defense
Is your blood worthy?"
©Blu2022
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14th Jun 2022 8:26am
14th Jun 2022 9:29am
Wise words, dear poet ...I concur..
Nimbleness as well as strength of character, perhaps?...lol.. I only tease It's more metaphoric. as I surround myself with this protective barrier... is anyone really wanting to brave entry??.... or something along those lines... hahaha..
Love the comments and deeply cherish the visit
🌹-🖤
B
Nimbleness as well as strength of character, perhaps?...lol.. I only tease It's more metaphoric. as I surround myself with this protective barrier... is anyone really wanting to brave entry??.... or something along those lines... hahaha..
Love the comments and deeply cherish the visit
🌹-🖤
B
Very nice and concise. I love the visual imagery which you
placed accompanying your words. Beautifully done
placed accompanying your words. Beautifully done
14th Jun 2022 9:26am
Hey Archie ;)
What a tremendously uplifting comment... I'm so glad you enjoyed the visual and the haiku as a whole! It's been awhile and it's always so nice to hear from you...
Be careful of those thorns!.. lol
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B
What a tremendously uplifting comment... I'm so glad you enjoyed the visual and the haiku as a whole! It's been awhile and it's always so nice to hear from you...
Be careful of those thorns!.. lol
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B
14th Jun 2022 9:05am
14th Jun 2022 9:24am
Purity of heart,
glows within you like starlight
proof, glimmers through ink
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xo
glows within you like starlight
proof, glimmers through ink
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xo
Anonymous
- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
14th Jun 2022 9:29am
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14th Jun 2022 10:06am
I did know about the Rose moon or strawberry moon!! ... Hopefully I'll be able to see it tonight, if the clouds cooperate!!
I agree, total kismet and meant to be...
Thank you so much for reading and feeling this little haiku like you did. I'm grateful for the list add and your visits as a whole... always!!
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🌹B
I agree, total kismet and meant to be...
Thank you so much for reading and feeling this little haiku like you did. I'm grateful for the list add and your visits as a whole... always!!
💙-
🌹B
Anonymous
14th Jun 2022 9:39am
This is an interesting take on the masculine,
feminine dynamic,
The feminine shields themselves and is coy
The masculine has to brave the thorns the traps, the tricks and offer up something of themselves for the reward,
A troupe as old as time.
feminine dynamic,
The feminine shields themselves and is coy
The masculine has to brave the thorns the traps, the tricks and offer up something of themselves for the reward,
A troupe as old as time.
I'm glad the metaphor translated and you found it of interest.
In my mind, I was thinking less feminine traps or tricks and more self security and protection. (yes, I have those damn walls built!!) ... Wondering if there would ever be anyone willing or wanting to bleed for her... or something like that.... being the goth romantic that I am.....hahaha
It's basically the same I realize, my thoughts are just less hard and slightly more pathetic, I guess... lol.. 😏
Thank you for sharing your own viewpoint, Gaps.
Your succinctness is 👌🏻 spot on and enlightening.
🌹 - B
In my mind, I was thinking less feminine traps or tricks and more self security and protection. (yes, I have those damn walls built!!) ... Wondering if there would ever be anyone willing or wanting to bleed for her... or something like that.... being the goth romantic that I am.....hahaha
It's basically the same I realize, my thoughts are just less hard and slightly more pathetic, I guess... lol.. 😏
Thank you for sharing your own viewpoint, Gaps.
Your succinctness is 👌🏻 spot on and enlightening.
🌹 - B
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Jun 2022 10:08am
14th Jun 2022 10:04am
Traps, tricks, walls, all in my mind similar feminine metaphors,
walls and guarding is probably a better realisation of my thought,
However they in my mind remain the same concept,
The masculine has to be willing to risk and sacrifice to get past the walls to be able to reach the beating heart of the feminine.
There’s plenty willing and wanting, but you asked the question….
Are they worthy?
How much blood are they willing to spill to get to the core….
It’s the dance
the driver and motivation
of sex
of status
of what we are as humans….
It is the dark curled desire beating behind the thorns
the fragility that is there
willing to open
wanting to open
almost pleading
that some one be worthy
to tear open their own flesh to reach the core of who and what the feminine is….
walls and guarding is probably a better realisation of my thought,
However they in my mind remain the same concept,
The masculine has to be willing to risk and sacrifice to get past the walls to be able to reach the beating heart of the feminine.
There’s plenty willing and wanting, but you asked the question….
Are they worthy?
How much blood are they willing to spill to get to the core….
It’s the dance
the driver and motivation
of sex
of status
of what we are as humans….
It is the dark curled desire beating behind the thorns
the fragility that is there
willing to open
wanting to open
almost pleading
that some one be worthy
to tear open their own flesh to reach the core of who and what the feminine is….
I admit, I do love where your mind takes you... if only my own internal impetus was as deep and as requiring.... alas, I'm simpler and far less poetic...*sigh... Hahaha.
I wasn't negating your own thoughts /headspace, just clarifying my own. My personal reality is, as a woman- I've seen and experienced how we can get an enormously bad wrap, when we are simply trying to be careful and cautious. I personally feel that there's a huge difference between trying to trap and trick someone intentionally vs protecting myself from getting hurt and being wary and honest because of that. It's about truthfulness and decent character and maybe goes to the heart of the individual.
Gender wasn't in my thoughts and isn't a huge concern, as I am fluid there.. Being attracted to the individual, and having hope that a special person finds their way to lower my defenses...perhaps trusting someone enough to offer navigation past that built up thorny exterior....
Yes, I did ask the question...I am deeply grateful for the additional ponder, in your response, there.
and btw, I sincerely don't mean to be contrary.... I know your feedback comes from a good place as does my interaction with it.... No hurt feelings or misunderstandings from me.
So let me say, it really all boils down to me absolutely agreeing with your 'are they worthy?'... (because, yeah... that's the real meat and potatoes!)
Especially your last bit—
"It is the dark curled desire beating behind the thorns
the fragility that is there
willing to open
wanting to open
almost pleading
that some one be worthy
to tear open their own flesh to reach the core of who and what the feminine is…."
Omg, Yessss, Gaps... Yesss.... beautifully and so very poetically put!!
Thanks so so soooo much for taking the time.
Again, I am thankful you're here to open up different lines of thought, it really helps to see another valid and strong perspective.
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
I wasn't negating your own thoughts /headspace, just clarifying my own. My personal reality is, as a woman- I've seen and experienced how we can get an enormously bad wrap, when we are simply trying to be careful and cautious. I personally feel that there's a huge difference between trying to trap and trick someone intentionally vs protecting myself from getting hurt and being wary and honest because of that. It's about truthfulness and decent character and maybe goes to the heart of the individual.
Gender wasn't in my thoughts and isn't a huge concern, as I am fluid there.. Being attracted to the individual, and having hope that a special person finds their way to lower my defenses...perhaps trusting someone enough to offer navigation past that built up thorny exterior....
Yes, I did ask the question...I am deeply grateful for the additional ponder, in your response, there.
and btw, I sincerely don't mean to be contrary.... I know your feedback comes from a good place as does my interaction with it.... No hurt feelings or misunderstandings from me.
So let me say, it really all boils down to me absolutely agreeing with your 'are they worthy?'... (because, yeah... that's the real meat and potatoes!)
Especially your last bit—
"It is the dark curled desire beating behind the thorns
the fragility that is there
willing to open
wanting to open
almost pleading
that some one be worthy
to tear open their own flesh to reach the core of who and what the feminine is…."
Omg, Yessss, Gaps... Yesss.... beautifully and so very poetically put!!
Thanks so so soooo much for taking the time.
Again, I am thankful you're here to open up different lines of thought, it really helps to see another valid and strong perspective.
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
14th Jun 2022 2:50pm
14th Jun 2022 3:13pm
You really made my day... thanks again, Jackie!
I really felt it, too... It's new and refreshing to have someone really dive in... I am so glad and appreciative that Gaps does that with me....but, you know me, I'm a total pleaser and I worry if I offend and come across as too abrasive ... Which is far far far from how I feel or want to be felt.
Lol... I'm always overthinking!...
I really felt it, too... It's new and refreshing to have someone really dive in... I am so glad and appreciative that Gaps does that with me....but, you know me, I'm a total pleaser and I worry if I offend and come across as too abrasive ... Which is far far far from how I feel or want to be felt.
Lol... I'm always overthinking!...
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Jun 2022 8:02pm
14th Jun 2022 4:44pm
Gendering it is more to do with the conceptualisation of my thoughts, even in plants female plants have a feminine trait being selective in how they’re pollinated so intelligence and choice isn’t a factor it seems to be a natural law…..
Women can be masculine
Men can be feminine
The sex of the individual is different from the gendered perspective so it falls in line that a man may have the same types of defence mechanisms that branch into the feminine spectrum of action.
The bad rap is in my experience from people that don’t understand why women have to be and are in general more cautious than men, and more selective.
Sex has more consequences for a woman, men can walk away
If there is pregnancy a woman aside from abortion or adoption can not.
Men tend on average to be %30 stronger than women because testosterone
Women to be smaller and significantly less explosive
Biological facts that make the world on average more dangerous for a woman…
I’m 6ft 2
290lbs
I walk around every day knowing that there are few men that stand a chance with me in a fight and significantly less women because of my lifestyle, training and physical strength
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“trying to trap and trick someone intentionally vs protecting myself from getting hurt and being wary and honest because of that. It's about truthfulness and decent character and maybe goes to the heart of the individual.”
I will concede this to a point
When I say traps and tricks they also fall under defensive walls,
But women tend to use verbal traps as a way of ruling out a potential partner because the potential partner is not sophisticated enough to pass these “tests” Getting past linguistic traps is a sign of intelligence, intelligence is sexy, is desirable and helpful in a partner.
tricks tend to be in the form of saying a soft no, to see if a potential partner understands the work they have to put in and is willing to do so,
A soft no is complex as hell to play with but I digress too much going there…
“truthfulness and decent character and maybe goes to the heart of the individual.”
These are the other reasons for testing an individual and should be a staple of human interaction.
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“I sincerely don't mean to be contrary.... I know your feedback comes from a good place as does my interaction with it.... No hurt feelings or misunderstandings from me”
Be contrary, question double check, risk misunderstandings, how are we supposed to think and explore ideas if we don’t take risk, I have a difference of opinion with who I was 10 years ago, so your differing opinion and thoughts are expected and encouraged, I’m grateful for them, they help me see my own opinion through someone else’s eyes.
Sometimes it’s the only way to change our own thinking or in the process illuminate something unseen for someone else.
Women can be masculine
Men can be feminine
The sex of the individual is different from the gendered perspective so it falls in line that a man may have the same types of defence mechanisms that branch into the feminine spectrum of action.
The bad rap is in my experience from people that don’t understand why women have to be and are in general more cautious than men, and more selective.
Sex has more consequences for a woman, men can walk away
If there is pregnancy a woman aside from abortion or adoption can not.
Men tend on average to be %30 stronger than women because testosterone
Women to be smaller and significantly less explosive
Biological facts that make the world on average more dangerous for a woman…
I’m 6ft 2
290lbs
I walk around every day knowing that there are few men that stand a chance with me in a fight and significantly less women because of my lifestyle, training and physical strength
—————————————————————
“trying to trap and trick someone intentionally vs protecting myself from getting hurt and being wary and honest because of that. It's about truthfulness and decent character and maybe goes to the heart of the individual.”
I will concede this to a point
When I say traps and tricks they also fall under defensive walls,
But women tend to use verbal traps as a way of ruling out a potential partner because the potential partner is not sophisticated enough to pass these “tests” Getting past linguistic traps is a sign of intelligence, intelligence is sexy, is desirable and helpful in a partner.
tricks tend to be in the form of saying a soft no, to see if a potential partner understands the work they have to put in and is willing to do so,
A soft no is complex as hell to play with but I digress too much going there…
“truthfulness and decent character and maybe goes to the heart of the individual.”
These are the other reasons for testing an individual and should be a staple of human interaction.
—————————————————————
“I sincerely don't mean to be contrary.... I know your feedback comes from a good place as does my interaction with it.... No hurt feelings or misunderstandings from me”
Be contrary, question double check, risk misunderstandings, how are we supposed to think and explore ideas if we don’t take risk, I have a difference of opinion with who I was 10 years ago, so your differing opinion and thoughts are expected and encouraged, I’m grateful for them, they help me see my own opinion through someone else’s eyes.
Sometimes it’s the only way to change our own thinking or in the process illuminate something unseen for someone else.
14th Jun 2022 4:49pm
14th Jun 2022 2:09pm
Or on the flip side, are you worthy for I to spill my blood to pass your defense. A little blood spill in order to feed the beast is more than a fair trade! : )
14th Jun 2022 2:28pm
I think shared blood is totally acceptable, dear Leo... Especially when it's 'ours'...(Mwahahahaha....)
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I use to love the write haikus I think you did a fine job here the question in question is apropos, in my opinion ☺️
I know right—? Hahah since when can i speak on a collage level 😂😂😂😂
Great piece great presentation Blue 🌹
Love ❤️ Jackie xoxoxo
I know right—? Hahah since when can i speak on a collage level 😂😂😂😂
Great piece great presentation Blue 🌹
Love ❤️ Jackie xoxoxo
14th Jun 2022 3:06pm
Thanks Jackie!
I deeply appreciate the thoughtful response and you're always a welcomed help to me...We are great at bouncing ideas off of each other and you contribute with your killer and very helpful life experience... I mean that alone, is with a college degree in my opinion!!
I'm glad you enjoyed my little haiku! They're always catnip for me when Webmiss updates the monthly themes... lol... I've been slacking off recently, so I thought I'd give it a go!
Loves you, my dear!!
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x
I deeply appreciate the thoughtful response and you're always a welcomed help to me...We are great at bouncing ideas off of each other and you contribute with your killer and very helpful life experience... I mean that alone, is with a college degree in my opinion!!
I'm glad you enjoyed my little haiku! They're always catnip for me when Webmiss updates the monthly themes... lol... I've been slacking off recently, so I thought I'd give it a go!
Loves you, my dear!!
🌹 - 💙💚💙💚💙
x
14th Jun 2022 3:13pm
Wowzers Blue, picture speaks just by its self, then you add your brilliant created words to it and blood drips upon your page, I’m lost for words, RL for me for sure, purple luv & hugs xo :)
14th Jun 2022 3:23pm
Your purple luvs & hugs make for a great day brightener, dear lady!!
You had me @ 'Wowzers'!!...
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Loved reading your kind words and I'm beyond thrilled that you enjoyed, fg. All my deepest thanks for the generous list add and for you taking the time with me... I love feeling your purple power and it's infectious beautiful nature!
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x B
You had me @ 'Wowzers'!!...
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Loved reading your kind words and I'm beyond thrilled that you enjoyed, fg. All my deepest thanks for the generous list add and for you taking the time with me... I love feeling your purple power and it's infectious beautiful nature!
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x B
14th Jun 2022 4:46pm
Sorry gorgeous I liked it then got caught. I love it quite dark, seductive, almost Vampire. The image is gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
14th Jun 2022 10:21pm
Like I say, always... It's about your enjoyment, dearest Knight.
We share an affinity for the rose. Mine being very personal because it's literally who I am... lol.
So, I'm wonderfully appreciative that we have the same joy or maybe the love of personifing it's beautiful (and sometimes dangerous) characteristics into our varying poems.. can't ask for better company!!
Loads of thanks, love and hugs and kisses... You're awesome, my lovely friend 🙏
Nice new avatar, btw... You're looking great!!
🌹-🖤
B
We share an affinity for the rose. Mine being very personal because it's literally who I am... lol.
So, I'm wonderfully appreciative that we have the same joy or maybe the love of personifing it's beautiful (and sometimes dangerous) characteristics into our varying poems.. can't ask for better company!!
Loads of thanks, love and hugs and kisses... You're awesome, my lovely friend 🙏
Nice new avatar, btw... You're looking great!!
🌹-🖤
B
14th Jun 2022 5:52pm
I like how this emphasizes the thorn
aspect of the rose...
Like perhaps the internal consciousness
of the rose is purely an awareness of its thorns...
Nice word choice on "cunning"...
It further surfaces the idea of a rose
having consciousness...
I also like the similarity to the word: cutting.
Creates and almost optical illusion,
that promotes deeper thinking...
And then...
Is your blood worthy?
Like pain as a truth teller.
And... Rose as conscious entity.
Sources of pain as conscious entities...
Knowing you better than you
know yourself...
Waiting to teach you about yourself....
Cool, thought provoking ink B.
aspect of the rose...
Like perhaps the internal consciousness
of the rose is purely an awareness of its thorns...
Nice word choice on "cunning"...
It further surfaces the idea of a rose
having consciousness...
I also like the similarity to the word: cutting.
Creates and almost optical illusion,
that promotes deeper thinking...
And then...
Is your blood worthy?
Like pain as a truth teller.
And... Rose as conscious entity.
Sources of pain as conscious entities...
Knowing you better than you
know yourself...
Waiting to teach you about yourself....
Cool, thought provoking ink B.
Well hello there, my dear Cipher!! ;)
Yes, 'thorn' is this months haiku theme, so I'm glad that came across without me actually saying 'thorn' which is what I was hoping to accomplish...
It's often one or two 'juicy' words that I know that I can be attracted by, so I love that cunning spoke to you in the way that it did for me too!!
The metaphor, in my mind was personifying the rose as a symbol for my own self protection and search of a willing soul .. I love your thoughts, though... of the rose having a conscious mind... and how killer that wouldbe in expanding the metaphor even further.... beyond my own petty internal struggles.... that's too too cool...what an inspired thought... wow!
Pain is intricate and can 100% be a teacher of many many things... both good and bad....the value of possibly penetrating that or even better... Ascension... ascending to a higher plane all together.... mind blowing... 🤯
Man, C..
I am completely swept away by where you thought traveled upon my little 17 syllables... and Damn, if it wasn't an utterly incredible experience hitching a ride, along with ....
You've really made me feel accomplished and truly consequential. I can't thank you enough for that immense uplift and welcomed shot of creative juju!! ...
Much love, my dear.... sincerely.
🌹-💙
xo
B
Yes, 'thorn' is this months haiku theme, so I'm glad that came across without me actually saying 'thorn' which is what I was hoping to accomplish...
It's often one or two 'juicy' words that I know that I can be attracted by, so I love that cunning spoke to you in the way that it did for me too!!
The metaphor, in my mind was personifying the rose as a symbol for my own self protection and search of a willing soul .. I love your thoughts, though... of the rose having a conscious mind... and how killer that wouldbe in expanding the metaphor even further.... beyond my own petty internal struggles.... that's too too cool...what an inspired thought... wow!
Pain is intricate and can 100% be a teacher of many many things... both good and bad....the value of possibly penetrating that or even better... Ascension... ascending to a higher plane all together.... mind blowing... 🤯
Man, C..
I am completely swept away by where you thought traveled upon my little 17 syllables... and Damn, if it wasn't an utterly incredible experience hitching a ride, along with ....
You've really made me feel accomplished and truly consequential. I can't thank you enough for that immense uplift and welcomed shot of creative juju!! ...
Much love, my dear.... sincerely.
🌹-💙
xo
B
You are always worth it my sweet sexy woman. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
14th Jun 2022 11:25pm
That's very kind of you to say, Francisco... thanks for that and for your lovely continued readership. I really do appreciate it.
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15th Jun 2022 00:44am
15th Jun 2022 1:21am
15th Jun 2022 5:20am
This is one awesome warning of I'm your destruction. And this question, is your blood really worthy of this death u know u can't escape
15th Jun 2022 6:06am
Birchel!
You're a fantastic voice to have visit. Yes, the question of worth looms large, indeed ... It definitely feels like it can become inescapable, at times.... You are correct....What a poignant and profound insight.... I thank you for sharing it with me. All my gratitude for the RL add and your generous comments...
Here's to being safe and productive, my friend 🙏
🌹 - B
You're a fantastic voice to have visit. Yes, the question of worth looms large, indeed ... It definitely feels like it can become inescapable, at times.... You are correct....What a poignant and profound insight.... I thank you for sharing it with me. All my gratitude for the RL add and your generous comments...
Here's to being safe and productive, my friend 🙏
🌹 - B
15th Jun 2022 7:41am
U are welcome on the thank u. And, I truly enjoy reading your works. Even if they were college style thesis, your opinion upon is vibrancy and vividity.
15th Jun 2022 6:09am
The presence of a defense leads me to remember Sting writing: "And if I built this fortress around your heart
Encircled you in trenches and barbed wire
Then let me build a bridge
For I cannot fill the chasm
And let me set the battlements on fire"
Encircled you in trenches and barbed wire
Then let me build a bridge
For I cannot fill the chasm
And let me set the battlements on fire"
He's a wordsmith after my own heart, Jazz... Thank you for sharing those lyrics, they definitely made an impact tonight that I wholly appreciate.
It's always a pleasure to get your feedback and I'm truly grateful to you for taking the time to leave it.
Much love, good tunes and warm wishes,
🌹 - 💙
B
It's always a pleasure to get your feedback and I'm truly grateful to you for taking the time to leave it.
Much love, good tunes and warm wishes,
🌹 - 💙
B
15th Jun 2022 9:50pm
Dear BV,
Jesus! 5 minutes late to the party and there’s hardly any room for a girl to gush! I’m in the cheap seats here for commenting! 😉
The metaphor is fantastic, naturally, but you’ll have known this or your genius would have never allowed you the write in the first place. What’s really more to the point is YES my blood is totally worthy! 😊❣️Awesome. Plain and simple. H🌷
Jesus! 5 minutes late to the party and there’s hardly any room for a girl to gush! I’m in the cheap seats here for commenting! 😉
The metaphor is fantastic, naturally, but you’ll have known this or your genius would have never allowed you the write in the first place. What’s really more to the point is YES my blood is totally worthy! 😊❣️Awesome. Plain and simple. H🌷
16th Jun 2022 5:31pm
Hee hee hee 🤭
Omg... You're hysterical!! Ahhh yes... That is the point... you're astute and 100% correct - Worthiness!!... and I have absolutely no doubt you are, completely!! ;)
I'm so grateful you take the time to leave your much loved aura and insightfulness here with me. It's so very motivational and hugely inspiring.
(btw , you'd never be in the cheap seats, dear lady; there would be a front row seat waiting with your name on it .... always!)
Much love and endless reverence,
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B
Omg... You're hysterical!! Ahhh yes... That is the point... you're astute and 100% correct - Worthiness!!... and I have absolutely no doubt you are, completely!! ;)
I'm so grateful you take the time to leave your much loved aura and insightfulness here with me. It's so very motivational and hugely inspiring.
(btw , you'd never be in the cheap seats, dear lady; there would be a front row seat waiting with your name on it .... always!)
Much love and endless reverence,
🌹 - 💙
B
*Is your blood worthy?* Good question... It's singing the blues...
It reminds me of song "Shocked" performed by Joe Cocker:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X42eyIzRTRc
(Quotes)
Now I was blown up, I picked my phone up... Operator said to me
Save your dime, there's nobody on the line... Call back later if you please
I've been told there's a thorn in every rose
I've been told there's a thorn in every rose
I sure found out, girl I found out... "
... ...
It reminds me of song "Shocked" performed by Joe Cocker:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X42eyIzRTRc
(Quotes)
Now I was blown up, I picked my phone up... Operator said to me
Save your dime, there's nobody on the line... Call back later if you please
I've been told there's a thorn in every rose
I've been told there's a thorn in every rose
I sure found out, girl I found out... "
... ...
Wow... those lyrics are totally apropos!! I never looked at it like that before, but it is kinda like the blues, innit!?.... Clever thought process, Marks. I like that a lot. I love Joe Cocker's voice, there's such substance and heart in that gravely grit.
I thank you for sharing the link and for taking the time to leave your thoughts. I'm beyond grateful and so delighted that you found resonance and a little comparison, too all via my haiku. You made me feel like I accomplished what I hoped for.
It's always such a treat to see you 🦋
Much love, my friend
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B
I thank you for sharing the link and for taking the time to leave your thoughts. I'm beyond grateful and so delighted that you found resonance and a little comparison, too all via my haiku. You made me feel like I accomplished what I hoped for.
It's always such a treat to see you 🦋
Much love, my friend
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B
18th Jun 2022 00:47am
