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Nightmare
Darkness like a curtain fall
Covering the world
With its sinister fold
A hungry specter's on the prowl
They say it’s a fictional monster
Don’t be scared
Don’t be afraid
Its just a fluffy kitten;
Out of the dark
A scream a growl
A howling evil shrieks
Gone the kitten in a crunch
of grinding gnashing teeth
Dawn comes in eerie glow
Lighting a piece of ribbon
Blood spattered on the snow.
Covering the world
With its sinister fold
A hungry specter's on the prowl
They say it’s a fictional monster
Don’t be scared
Don’t be afraid
Its just a fluffy kitten;
Out of the dark
A scream a growl
A howling evil shrieks
Gone the kitten in a crunch
of grinding gnashing teeth
Dawn comes in eerie glow
Lighting a piece of ribbon
Blood spattered on the snow.
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18th Mar 2012 12:30pm
DEFINITELY A WINNER
Anonymous
18th Mar 2012 2:10pm
Grace
That competition was one I did not have a feel for....but you have made a wonderful poem...and in every poetic way...I think it is a winner
Cheers
Kitty
That competition was one I did not have a feel for....but you have made a wonderful poem...and in every poetic way...I think it is a winner
Cheers
Kitty
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re: DEFINITELY A WINNER
18th Mar 2012 3:37pm
Thank you Kitty dear. Actually I was very dolefully looking at my competition. Not many seems interested in them. I saw this one and I thought I would try my hand on it. A few minutes, and I got this scary thoughts. Initially it was a fluffy kitten turning into a Minotaur or Cerberus but did not sound right somehow...so I did not give evil a face, just a lot of sounds...:D glad you read it though.
:)
18th Mar 2012 6:20pm
re: :)
18th Mar 2012 8:47pm
Chilling!!!
18th Mar 2012 7:19pm
re: Chilling!!!
18th Mar 2012 8:48pm
hmmm.....
18th Mar 2012 8:08pm
re: hmmm.....
18th Mar 2012 8:49pm
I am so glad you dropped in and read the poem, Chrisella Payne. Thanks for leaving your comments.
Nightmare
18th Mar 2012 8:38pm
re: Nightmare
18th Mar 2012 8:50pm
bad dreams....
19th Mar 2012 4:02am
is it just a dream
when you feel the need to scream
& with blood in the snow
that lump in the throat will just grow
into something which its not
but its just a dream...& bad 1s are seldom forgot.....
when you feel the need to scream
& with blood in the snow
that lump in the throat will just grow
into something which its not
but its just a dream...& bad 1s are seldom forgot.....
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re: bad dreams....
19th Mar 2012 5:48am
Dear goodest: the growling and the groaning, the gnashing of teeth could be in waking dreams. The blood on the snow could be reality...but nightmares are nightmares: they dont draw us quarters. Thank you Goodest for reading...and leaving your kind comments.
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19th Mar 2012 8:09am
I fear that kitty.
Not the greatest competition, but you made a great poem from it Grace. Nice job!
Not the greatest competition, but you made a great poem from it Grace. Nice job!
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re: ...
19th Mar 2012 8:14am
It can read two ways, MrAlptraum: Kitty eating or kitty eaten. LoL! Thank you for reading and commenting.