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Bonfires and Marshmallows
Out shine the shadows.
Let them
lurk while you live.
Also laugh a lot
they hate that.
Let them
lurk while you live.
Also laugh a lot
they hate that.
Published 26th May 2022
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26th May 2022 4:53am
26th May 2022 5:27am
26th May 2022 8:27am
Ooh what a fantastic vignette!
Love the way the metaphors intertwine.
I left thinking that whatever you think that poem was about, it's not!
I love bonfires. And marshmallows on a stick are my fave, especially when burnt and crunchy so the title pulled me right in.
Evenings at the bonfire are magical and the shadows of the flames as well as those behind us, coupled with those in the head are absolutely special magical moments.
Hat tip on this one. I reckon it's a bloody genius write.
Al
Love the way the metaphors intertwine.
I left thinking that whatever you think that poem was about, it's not!
I love bonfires. And marshmallows on a stick are my fave, especially when burnt and crunchy so the title pulled me right in.
Evenings at the bonfire are magical and the shadows of the flames as well as those behind us, coupled with those in the head are absolutely special magical moments.
Hat tip on this one. I reckon it's a bloody genius write.
Al
26th May 2022 11:54am
I agree with AL! This is pure genius work! Excellent illustration as well. I applaud you!
26th May 2022 3:03pm
Hello Nikki,
Great. I reminds me the saying "When you weep no one cares. When you laugh people get worried."
Love,
KS
Great. I reminds me the saying "When you weep no one cares. When you laugh people get worried."
Love,
KS
26th May 2022 8:56pm
26th May 2022 10:57pm
The demons live inside us...maybe our whole life purpose is to drag them around and force them to witness our stoic benevolence. They really do hate that, too!
Maybe we can make this REALm into a heaven for us and a complete hell for them.
This poem is short & witty like your style but it's also all business.
Maybe we can make this REALm into a heaven for us and a complete hell for them.
This poem is short & witty like your style but it's also all business.
27th May 2022 2:24am
Hi Nik!!
So that pic is intense and so vibrant. I actually examined for a few moments
before I read your poem. Well as I'm sure you can tell - I do laugh a lot. heheh
I agree with this. Live and tell the shadows to take a hike.
So that pic is intense and so vibrant. I actually examined for a few moments
before I read your poem. Well as I'm sure you can tell - I do laugh a lot. heheh
I agree with this. Live and tell the shadows to take a hike.
7th Jul 2022 3:40pm
