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Turn off my Mind
My gaze, like a reflection of wild lightning,
I bite my lips incessantly into blood
Thunderclaps in my heart, only I remember you,
Tsunamis cover again and again ...
With you, heaven, in which it is impossible,
With you, hell, which I drink greedily
Desires in my chest sound to shiver,
Take my wrists, drink the blood! I beg you!
Tie me up, kissing without breathing,
Rip off quickly, not sparing clothes
Come on! Turn off my mind!
By mercilessly leading to a breakdown
Kiss me, pinning me to the wall tighter,
What control?! I'm sending everything to hell!
You, like a drug, will flow through my veins,
In your arms I am passionately dying
I want you! Take it! You see? Crying ...
In reality, this does not happen ...
I have hidden my tears for a long time,
All the cells are starving for you ...
Fragments of phrases excite without limit,
How good ... You kill in a whisper!
I always wanted this kind of death,
Come on, Darling, sharper! Do not be sorry!
Your gaze paralyzes in sweet pain,
Your breath fills with ether
I want you, perhaps against my will,
I will repeat again: "I'm yours"
I bite my lips incessantly into blood
Thunderclaps in my heart, only I remember you,
Tsunamis cover again and again ...
With you, heaven, in which it is impossible,
With you, hell, which I drink greedily
Desires in my chest sound to shiver,
Take my wrists, drink the blood! I beg you!
Tie me up, kissing without breathing,
Rip off quickly, not sparing clothes
Come on! Turn off my mind!
By mercilessly leading to a breakdown
Kiss me, pinning me to the wall tighter,
What control?! I'm sending everything to hell!
You, like a drug, will flow through my veins,
In your arms I am passionately dying
I want you! Take it! You see? Crying ...
In reality, this does not happen ...
I have hidden my tears for a long time,
All the cells are starving for you ...
Fragments of phrases excite without limit,
How good ... You kill in a whisper!
I always wanted this kind of death,
Come on, Darling, sharper! Do not be sorry!
Your gaze paralyzes in sweet pain,
Your breath fills with ether
I want you, perhaps against my will,
I will repeat again: "I'm yours"
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
12th May 2022 9:48pm
Hey there molon, I am so happy I could share a little nostalgia with you; thanks for missing me. ;) It is amazing how incredibly fast this year has passed, although in certain aspects time has moved slowly for me as well. Anyway, it's been very challenging but I am hanging in there. I hope you are doing wonderfully. xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
12th May 2022 9:17pm
Oh to have your mind silenced, the peace made by the passion and pain
Great read matey
Love and light
Ron xx
Great read matey
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
12th May 2022 9:49pm
Oh yes! For me it is absolutely required or else I go even more crazy and that's not good. :p I have needs! And silencing my mind is an absolute necessity. I missed your love and light! Much love and light back to you. xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
12th May 2022 9:31pm
Where have YOU been ??
Jeez, I tried to save this Swamp alone
No frigging fun
You're prettier too so nobody pays me any mind
Riveting and bold in your dark flagrant style
Biting lips to blood
Too close to home
Feel like I'm reborn with your pen gracing our chamber of sin
BIG LIKE
Jeez, I tried to save this Swamp alone
No frigging fun
You're prettier too so nobody pays me any mind
Riveting and bold in your dark flagrant style
Biting lips to blood
Too close to home
Feel like I'm reborn with your pen gracing our chamber of sin
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
12th May 2022 10:00pm
Missed me? Oh boy, that is hard a question to answer. It's exhausting trying to explain where I have been. Sometimes I just need to throw on a sun dress and wade through the swamp. I like the snakes and spiders... the water and the sun too... and sometimes its peaceful. You are the mayor, everyone pays attention to you; I am just hiding over here in my corner.
Oh yes! dark flagrant - that sounds like me. Always biting my lip either in pleasure, pain, or to keep myself from saying something weird. (it rarely works for that)... I miss the chamber sometimes and always looking for the sin.
BIG LIKE the BIG LIKE, missed those. :)
xoxo 💖
Oh yes! dark flagrant - that sounds like me. Always biting my lip either in pleasure, pain, or to keep myself from saying something weird. (it rarely works for that)... I miss the chamber sometimes and always looking for the sin.
BIG LIKE the BIG LIKE, missed those. :)
xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
12th May 2022 10:24pm
Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
12th May 2022 10:33pm
Hey there Francisco, I am a match and I am here to set you (and everything else) on fire. ;p As always, thank you so much for the encouragement. xoxo 💖
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12th May 2022 10:52pm
Re. Turn off my Mind
13th May 2022 6:10am
Hi Kristina!!!
Your poem is super duper hot (as always) but more importantly I'm so happy to see you post something.
Has your stamp of sensuality with a bit of edginess.
Always a pleasure to read chica:)
Your poem is super duper hot (as always) but more importantly I'm so happy to see you post something.
Has your stamp of sensuality with a bit of edginess.
Always a pleasure to read chica:)
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
13th May 2022 3:19pm
Super duper hot just like you... ;) I hope you have been doing great and it's so nice to see you. It does feel like forever since I posted anything. In some ways time has passed incredibly fast although certain aspects seem ever so slowly dealing with life's challenges. Thank you so much for taking the time to read me, say hello, and your wonderful thoughts. :) xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
13th May 2022 4:03pm
What a thrill to see you in my updates today, and even more of a thrill to read your unabashed passion. Damn, girl!! Thank you for turning my mind off of everything for a few moments... 🔥🔥🔥
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
13th May 2022 8:09pm
Hey BT! It's a thrill for me to hear from you. :) I love that I could turn your mind off for a few moments and you could share in my passion with me. Thank you so much for stopping by and giving me your thoughts! Your comment took my mind off things for a moment too and made me smile. xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
14th May 2022 6:59pm
The longing to be taken by a vampire like lover has come back. Pining for the darkness and eternal lust; take you away from the day to day drudgery.
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
15th May 2022 00:55am
Oh the longing is always there my dear DaVinci... Always... Pining for it. I don't know what I would do without such an escape but I know it would be really bad. :p xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
16th May 2022 2:48am
"You kill in a whisper"
What an insanely great line!
I love the build up of the angst in this. The frustrations of wanting to be broken into and given raw emotions in their physical forms.
This is awesome.
What an insanely great line!
I love the build up of the angst in this. The frustrations of wanting to be broken into and given raw emotions in their physical forms.
This is awesome.
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
16th May 2022 2:46pm
Oh Styx... You kill me in a whisper with your wonderful comment. I am so happy you were able to connect with this one. Breaking through the barriers, unleashing that raw emotion that overpowers everything else and fully possesses in physical rapture is the greatest escape. xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
16th May 2022 5:45pm
This poem makes me whole. This hidden part of my soul. Drawn to your darkness, I'm bath in light. Witch.
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
16th May 2022 6:03pm
A witch casting her spell on you to make you whole and reveal that hidden part of the soul she so desperately desires. Allowing it to get lost in her darkness while consuming the light... xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
Submitting to life allows it to dominate those relinquished powers, those unrequited arenas of self-control.
Finding anything or anyone that can take up that slack, is a gift to ourselves. Letting go is an ultimate act of bravery.
Respect earns that. But even so, it takes self-honesty to let go. It's a commitment to our own humanity. It's all romance until expectations hit. And reality. And we think we're ready. And the facade falls. And we become weightless. Formless. And then, at the edge, we fall. And reality becomes our lifeline.
Finding anything or anyone that can take up that slack, is a gift to ourselves. Letting go is an ultimate act of bravery.
Respect earns that. But even so, it takes self-honesty to let go. It's a commitment to our own humanity. It's all romance until expectations hit. And reality. And we think we're ready. And the facade falls. And we become weightless. Formless. And then, at the edge, we fall. And reality becomes our lifeline.
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
19th May 2022 00:32am
Sometimes there is a sort of salvation to be had in submission. To no longer require to be in control, to feel that external power taking it inside completely.
It takes the right kind of person to fill that void in us and in themselves with you. Being able to let go and make the darkest of fantasies come true is a decadent treat that pushes the senses beyond that which is normal. It does take bravery to go there.
Respect and honesty is essential for such a level of commitment. It's one thing to think you are ready and quite another to actually go there allowing yourself to fall but at some point you must try to keep a grasp of reality. Or perhaps that is just what we tell ourselves in order to be defined. xoxo 💖
It takes the right kind of person to fill that void in us and in themselves with you. Being able to let go and make the darkest of fantasies come true is a decadent treat that pushes the senses beyond that which is normal. It does take bravery to go there.
Respect and honesty is essential for such a level of commitment. It's one thing to think you are ready and quite another to actually go there allowing yourself to fall but at some point you must try to keep a grasp of reality. Or perhaps that is just what we tell ourselves in order to be defined. xoxo 💖
Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
19th May 2022 3:21am
Perhaps....and then...there is a power exchange in negotiation....risk and development.
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Re. Turn off my Mind
12th Jun 2022 8:48am
Mercy! But don't stop! Ever! Reading you does an old man like myself good LOL! Keep writing and keep posting. I like reading you. Will return to read more soon. And again, stop saying you are not a poet :) Hope all's well. (Hits the cold shower)....whew!
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Re: Re. Turn off my Mind
12th Jun 2022 2:20pm
aha, yes I would have you begging for mercy Michael. lol I am here to do you good or kill you trying. The shock of a cold shower is good for you. But the heat generated by having someone else in there with you, now that's just hot. I am not a poet. :p Sorry you made me. Always breaking the rules. This really is such a sweet comment, Thank you so much! xoxo 💖
Re. Turn off my Mind
27th Jun 2022 6:59pm
Ooh, there is a certain kind of surrender that burns so good. so passionate especially when you say "All the cells are starving for you ..."
This kind of lust, relinquishing all of the self for another dives into the depths and it makes for great poetry.
Dare I ask if this would be a spoken piece later on? The DUP and YouTube community may come in masses ;-) but I think inquiring minds want to know..
Amazing work K, you really know how to set the place on fire.
This kind of lust, relinquishing all of the self for another dives into the depths and it makes for great poetry.
Dare I ask if this would be a spoken piece later on? The DUP and YouTube community may come in masses ;-) but I think inquiring minds want to know..
Amazing work K, you really know how to set the place on fire.
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27th Jun 2022 7:12pm
Oh yes! when someone can take you in their hands and you can be anything for them unleashing the true potential of every cell to feel everything. That is the kind of lust and passion I have to dive into the depth and to be the depths.
I had not thought about that... Hmmmm... Who knows anything is possible I suppose. Come in masses, you are so silly - but I love it. Sure you can listen to me? I do have one newer audio one.
I missed you so much Wally. I am so happy you caught up with me. :p
You know I like burning things down but that's supposed to be our secret damnit!
I just want to strike a match in your soul, nothing less. xoxo 💖
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5DBuIhr1Id4
I had not thought about that... Hmmmm... Who knows anything is possible I suppose. Come in masses, you are so silly - but I love it. Sure you can listen to me? I do have one newer audio one.
I missed you so much Wally. I am so happy you caught up with me. :p
You know I like burning things down but that's supposed to be our secret damnit!
I just want to strike a match in your soul, nothing less. xoxo 💖
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5DBuIhr1Id4