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DANCING RAINDROPS
REMEMBERING
As I lie alone on the
soft bearskin rug
watching the dancing
orange, white and
gray flames dance
and ascend up the chimney;
the raindrops dancing
on the tin roof, my mind
fills with the memories
of the times we both
were lying naked in
this same spot; the times
when our bodies freely
explored every pleasure
known as well as creating
some new and daring ones.
As I drift deeper into my
memory vault my hand
gently greets your friend...
he is alive and standing tall.
Meet me at the Kissing
Place and we'll listen to
the dancing raindrops.
OKAY?
As I lie alone on the
soft bearskin rug
watching the dancing
orange, white and
gray flames dance
and ascend up the chimney;
the raindrops dancing
on the tin roof, my mind
fills with the memories
of the times we both
were lying naked in
this same spot; the times
when our bodies freely
explored every pleasure
known as well as creating
some new and daring ones.
As I drift deeper into my
memory vault my hand
gently greets your friend...
he is alive and standing tall.
Meet me at the Kissing
Place and we'll listen to
the dancing raindrops.
OKAY?
Published 7th May 2022
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7th May 2022 3:53pm
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12th Feb 2023 4:03am
". . . and we'll listen to the dancing raindrops." Such a beautiful image you paint with your words. I love everything about he rain. :)
This is so romantic and dreamy.
This is so romantic and dreamy.
28th Mar 2023 3:54am
Lying in front of the dancing flames in he fireplace, our hearts beating in the rhythm of the rain drops on the tin roof...Yes, the rain is magic. Hugs and peace Oral, xoxo
28th Mar 2023 4:02am
Oh, my ! Such a beautiful, magical moment indeed. The sound of the rain, as lovers collide. The symphony is so satisfying.
Hugs, Brandy
Hugs, Brandy
28th Mar 2023 4:14am
As the wind through the trees
join the erotic evening
of dreams coming true
and riding rainbows
glowing in our hearts;
our bodies sing in
the rain, that happy feeling
will last forever...
join the erotic evening
of dreams coming true
and riding rainbows
glowing in our hearts;
our bodies sing in
the rain, that happy feeling
will last forever...
28th Mar 2023 4:29am
As the wind moves through the trees,
a whisper dances upon the skin,
and a soft moan escapes luscious lips
While riding rainbows,
the excitement grows,
and lovers know
The rain is falling . . .
a whisper dances upon the skin,
and a soft moan escapes luscious lips
While riding rainbows,
the excitement grows,
and lovers know
The rain is falling . . .
