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Garbled (NaPoWriMo 2022 #9)
Muddled
befuddled
words,
mismatched,
mis-spelt,
fumbling fingers
to the brain,
how do spell
- how do you spell
'repetition' again?
Do the 'i's have it
or is it e-ward?
Any why can't I
bloody well type,
tippy tap
click clack,
the right keys
geez cheese louise!
Chalk it up
to my mind
brittle as
crumbling cheese;
though not
an illness
-thank the stars.
The lesson here,
to stop
a bit
more,
even metaphors
need time to breathe.
befuddled
words,
mismatched,
mis-spelt,
fumbling fingers
to the brain,
how do spell
- how do you spell
'repetition' again?
Do the 'i's have it
or is it e-ward?
Any why can't I
bloody well type,
tippy tap
click clack,
the right keys
geez cheese louise!
Chalk it up
to my mind
brittle as
crumbling cheese;
though not
an illness
-thank the stars.
The lesson here,
to stop
a bit
more,
even metaphors
need time to breathe.
Published 9th Apr 2022
| Edited 10th Apr 2022
Author's Note
Entry 9 for NaPoWriMo 2022. Sometimes I'm writing all the right letters, not necessarily in the right order.
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