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Artful Ascension
Hardening my shell
restricting perfectly rigid,
the lust that gathers
to coil tight inside this belly
Ideas of sultry magic
flutter entice each sense
percolating sheer fuck-want
nearly tasting sugar'd epiphany
Stirred madness
molds artful mastery
beckoning bold obsession
tempting so easily
Pinprick'd dusk
strobes a razor's edge of darkness
triggering nerves
How they dance en masse!
O' sweetest pain
Electrified!
weaving a wandering path
twisting 'round peaks
Pleasurable apexes sweetly sting
"Oh. God. Yes."
internal thrums
whisper-roar in clear delicate pleas
The breadth of physical composure
buckles beautifully
by word—by thought
by every entrenched idea
Seeds planted, germinate proudly
edging every second
precious and absolutely wicked
are the tides I galloping ride
A bitten tongue aches phantasmic
clenched-clinging to reality
... just barely
confirmation rings out
cry
after
cry.
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Re. Artful Ascension
1st Apr 2022 11:45am
OMG THIS IS MIND-BLOWING ABSOLUTELY SUPER HOT. WORKS PERFECTLY WITH THE BUMP N GRIND TRACK
HELL GIRL.YOU MADE A OLD MAN BLUSH
FANTASTIC GORGEOUS FANTASTIC
RON
HELL GIRL.YOU MADE A OLD MAN BLUSH
FANTASTIC GORGEOUS FANTASTIC
RON
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Re: Re. Artful Ascension
1st Apr 2022 12:36pm
You're too too much.... Lol...
Thank you for your wonderfully exciting comments, Ron. It's a sincere morale boost to read of your joy and especially of your blushes... Haha.
This piece had been taking up space in my drafts, as I was never really sure about it. Thanks for appreciating it like you have and infusing me with a bit of confidence. That's beyond cool
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for your wonderfully exciting comments, Ron. It's a sincere morale boost to read of your joy and especially of your blushes... Haha.
This piece had been taking up space in my drafts, as I was never really sure about it. Thanks for appreciating it like you have and infusing me with a bit of confidence. That's beyond cool
Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
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Re: Re. Artful Ascension
2nd Apr 2022 4:34pm
Re. Artful Ascension
1st Apr 2022 7:06pm
And the Oscar and Emmy go to amazing Ms. Princess Blue for an out-of-this-world masterpiece of writing, interpreting, and reading "Artful Ascension." Dim the lights, chill the wine, tonight a goddess will ascent to paradise. Bravo. A++++ Hugs and love, (O)
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Awww... You're truly awesome, Oral!!
All my humble appreciation and gratitude for such generous and kind feedback.
Your comments make me feel like I was able to really convey properly my own mental imagery allowing it to come alive. I'm so deeply thankful you were able to connect with that conveyance!
Much love and respect, my dear bard.
🌹 - 💙
—B
All my humble appreciation and gratitude for such generous and kind feedback.
Your comments make me feel like I was able to really convey properly my own mental imagery allowing it to come alive. I'm so deeply thankful you were able to connect with that conveyance!
Much love and respect, my dear bard.
🌹 - 💙
—B
Re. Artful Ascension
1st Apr 2022 7:08pm
And the Oscar and Emmy go to amazing Ms. Princess Blue for an out-of-this-world masterpiece of writing, interpreting, and reading "Artful Ascension." Dim the lights, chill the wine, tonight a goddess will ascent to paradise. Bravo. A++++ Hugs and love, (O)
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Re. Artful Ascension
2nd Apr 2022 00:09am
You are minding blowing us into giving you orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman. Enjoy orgasmic bliss.
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2nd Apr 2022 4:56pm
Re. Artful Ascension
2nd Apr 2022 9:55am
Sultry & smooth...
You have truly turned your voice into an instrument.
An element, even...
Powerful stuff, B.
You have truly turned your voice into an instrument.
An element, even...
Powerful stuff, B.
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Re: Re. Artful Ascension
2nd Apr 2022 4:56pm
Your thoughtfulness is beyond compare, my friend! Thank you for sharing your mind's eye. I'm thrilled you felt this reading had some heft.
I'm relieved, in all honesty... Lol...
Much love and appreciation.
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm relieved, in all honesty... Lol...
Much love and appreciation.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Artful Ascension
2nd Apr 2022 10:20am
A sensual tour de force... the back and forth... erotic stream of conscious that brought me in... swept me away... great write B...
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Re: Re. Artful Ascension
2nd Apr 2022 4:33pm
You have me absolutely grinning from ear to ear. Thank you for inadvertently instilling a much-needed confidence boost this morning, LilD
I'm so glad you were swept away with me!! *wink
🌹-💙
B
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I'm so glad you were swept away with me!! *wink
🌹-💙
B
x
Re. Artful Ascension
3rd Apr 2022 3:01pm
A masterful depiction from an insider’s viewpoint. Truly erotic art.
The voice of the poet angelic. Tried to imagine how the pitch and delivery would change in reality as the descripted journey progressed.
The voice of the poet angelic. Tried to imagine how the pitch and delivery would change in reality as the descripted journey progressed.
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Hey there, Leo
I've missed your visits and hope you are doing well, honing your investigative skills, daily. 😏 🕵️
Ahhh... I do so love where your thoughts took, you.. . Thinking of you imagining and pondering irl happenings, brings a smile to my face, indeed.
I'm delighted you felt the eroticism within my timbre.
Thank you for the insight and warmth... I deeply appreciate it, my friend 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B
I've missed your visits and hope you are doing well, honing your investigative skills, daily. 😏 🕵️
Ahhh... I do so love where your thoughts took, you.. . Thinking of you imagining and pondering irl happenings, brings a smile to my face, indeed.
I'm delighted you felt the eroticism within my timbre.
Thank you for the insight and warmth... I deeply appreciate it, my friend 🙏
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Artful Ascension
4th Apr 2022 7:32pm
Dear BV,
So this is what it’s supposed to be about! 🤔
It’s all become clear to me now 🤓
Very tasteful and artistically written. As always the formatting is perfect. There’s a flow that gives this such a great rhythm while you read it. Terrific write. H🌷
So this is what it’s supposed to be about! 🤔
It’s all become clear to me now 🤓
Very tasteful and artistically written. As always the formatting is perfect. There’s a flow that gives this such a great rhythm while you read it. Terrific write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Artful Ascension
5th Apr 2022 4:50am
Thank you for the kind words. It's wonderful that you felt the creative arousal.
Welcome to DUP
I hope you enjoy your time here
🌹 - B
Welcome to DUP
I hope you enjoy your time here
🌹 - B
Re. Artful Ascension
5th Apr 2022 7:18am
Complementary, yet separate. Words read, and words said. Breath saved, and breath shaved.
Words craved on the page and in the ear....bonfires written, and bonfires felt directly against the skin....
Intertwined experiences.
Breath helt and breath felt... breath...rebreathed.
Exothermic and endothermic... warm...inviting....air.
Words craved on the page and in the ear....bonfires written, and bonfires felt directly against the skin....
Intertwined experiences.
Breath helt and breath felt... breath...rebreathed.
Exothermic and endothermic... warm...inviting....air.
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Re: Re. Artful Ascension
9th Apr 2022 12:14pm
I definitely love breathing and exhaling my particular warmth...
An invitation ... warmer and warmer .. inviting... me.... In.
I'm beyond delighted that you felt correctly,various invitations sent as well as those exothermic and endothermic reactions....
🔥 🔥 🔥
-B
An invitation ... warmer and warmer .. inviting... me.... In.
I'm beyond delighted that you felt correctly,various invitations sent as well as those exothermic and endothermic reactions....
🔥 🔥 🔥
-B
Re. Artful Ascension
8th Apr 2022 7:25am
It's a toss up between the voice and the effects on screen that adds that temptation to the piece. We assure you that we listen more than once and read more than one, there's this feeling of being invited by a female vampire, a very sexy female vampire. That you know is really going to hurt you good, but you can't resist the temptation is to much. The music there we couldn't place and our brain stashes everything not known in the porn aisle. Now when we hear it we're thinking of sneaking to watch some vintage porn, dang now we want to watch some old porn. Tight work Lady, dang this maybe our longest comment ever, but you deserved it with this piece
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Lol... This might be the longest comment I think I've read of yours, Me! Thanks for the thoughtful response. I'm definitely glad it sparked some of those reactions, as I hoped it would. I'm also really stoked that you found that essence of sensuality - bordering sleazy... (my words!) Because I love that mixture, myself... Mmm.... *wink
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. It was an amazing bit of feedback!
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. It was an amazing bit of feedback!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Artful Ascension
9th Apr 2022 3:48am
You are a walking, talking, w⁵⁵⁵riting ⁵⁵, my sweet. Cry after cry indeed. I wish my reality was as luscious as your imagination (?)...Not to say your words based on truth...Anyway5⁵⁵⁵5⁵⁵þ
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Re: Re. Artful Ascension
9th Apr 2022 12:17pm
You are a beacon and true beauty, dear Margo.
I am soooo enamored with this comment... I'm all smiles!!
I adore you and your eyes /ears upon my page.
Thank you for being here.
Much love and my deepest appreciation
🌹 - 💙 - 💖
-B
I am soooo enamored with this comment... I'm all smiles!!
I adore you and your eyes /ears upon my page.
Thank you for being here.
Much love and my deepest appreciation
🌹 - 💙 - 💖
-B
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13th Apr 2022 11:33pm
Re. Artful Ascension
17th Apr 2022 6:50am
Re: Re. Artful Ascension
17th Apr 2022 7:04am
Hey there, P_O_H:)
I'm glad you found my spoken word/poem adequate and could see beauty within.
Much obliged,
🌹 - B
I'm glad you found my spoken word/poem adequate and could see beauty within.
Much obliged,
🌹 - B
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11th May 2022 4:39pm
Re. Artful Ascension
5th Aug 2022 5:16am
Oh, mercy this was a delight to the senses and the mind. I loved every feeling as you took me to the edge and beyond. Your voice reading was heaven on earth. Your intonations were the perfect accentuation of each cry. Like a Shangri la of desire's sweet epiphany, you brought me into your world where stars blossom in a forever of melody. I loved every scintillation of your lilt as I surfed the beauty of your free spirit.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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My giggle that sprang forth reading "Oh,mercy" was one I know you would have completely and utterly enjoyed, my dear poet. I am all smiles that I could delight so thoroughly! I gladly take you along, to ride my spiritual waves, learning nuances and intricacies with each wave swell, eventually cresting and gloriously crashing against the shore.... of full understanding. ;p.. What a set that would be!!
Thank you for coming along this poetic journey.
It makes me a better writer to take in and process your tremendous feedback.... It's a deep pleasure
xoxo
-Susan
Thank you for coming along this poetic journey.
It makes me a better writer to take in and process your tremendous feedback.... It's a deep pleasure
xoxo
-Susan
Re. Artful Ascension
5th Aug 2022 10:55pm
Susan, the art of your words is an echo of ancient literature. Reminds me of stories I translated from the Latin in college. You put class into your story poems.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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I will be getting around to fully replying soon, dear John.... just quickly wanted to thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for your amazing and cherished readership. Your thoughts and opinions truly allow me to shine my very brightest.
All my love... - 🌹
xo
All my love... - 🌹
xo
Re: Re. Artful Ascension
6th Aug 2022 1:53am
I am so happy my comments pleased you. There is nothing I like better than pleasing my poet woman. ;-)
Xo
John
Xo
John
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6th Aug 2022 9:58am
Re. Artful Ascension
7th Aug 2022 3:29am
Re: Re. Artful Ascension
7th Aug 2022 5:38am
Hee hee...
(blushes)
You're awesome.
Thanks for the confidence boost, Lj
I'm really glad you enjoyed
-♡
x
(blushes)
You're awesome.
Thanks for the confidence boost, Lj
I'm really glad you enjoyed
-♡
x