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The tao of two hearts
Damp hair
glistens
catching the light
cresting dark waves
framing chiseled stone
a heartbeat's skip
maybe two
as I catch my breath
snuggling down further
appreciating the depth
of tenderness
Clean freshness wafts
everywhere
pulling a long inhale,
I feel you chuckle
Strong hands
caress my back;
play with my ear
in favorite choice tease fashion
My legs tuck in
toes curled
burrowing into the crook
of your own crossed legs
warming them
by your heat
head, leaning
against your chest
Being cradled
and stroked
calms and quiets
no words exchanged
or needed
Learned relaxation
slowly travels
throughout
natural movement
rocks us both
into a higher state
Our
zen
of
togetherness
sets in
Turning off
life's carousel
taking in
deep sensory stimulus
opening up
allowing
us,
to
just be.
glistens
catching the light
cresting dark waves
framing chiseled stone
a heartbeat's skip
maybe two
as I catch my breath
snuggling down further
appreciating the depth
of tenderness
Clean freshness wafts
everywhere
pulling a long inhale,
I feel you chuckle
Strong hands
caress my back;
play with my ear
in favorite choice tease fashion
My legs tuck in
toes curled
burrowing into the crook
of your own crossed legs
warming them
by your heat
head, leaning
against your chest
Being cradled
and stroked
calms and quiets
no words exchanged
or needed
Learned relaxation
slowly travels
throughout
natural movement
rocks us both
into a higher state
Our
zen
of
togetherness
sets in
Turning off
life's carousel
taking in
deep sensory stimulus
opening up
allowing
us,
to
just be.
Author's Note
aftercare's bliss
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Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 1:56pm
Romance is perfect when blended with spiritualism, tease and element of playfulness. Your piece sets the right mood for those moments and follow the trail that goes down in the silence of joy and contentment. I think love is in the air where you come out with such great intellect. Love your poetry and love you as well for the core of my heart.
KS
KS
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
Hi, KS :)
I really enjoyed your thoughtful comments. I'm deeply appreciative that you found something that struck a chord, within. You, taking the time to visit; imparting your thoughts, is impactful and truly meaningful to me. Your show of support is something that I don't take for granted and I'm so humbly grateful to receive.
Thank you-🙏🏻
... it's t's my true pleasure to have been given the opportunity to ser that part of your heart.
All my warmest regards,
🌹-B
I really enjoyed your thoughtful comments. I'm deeply appreciative that you found something that struck a chord, within. You, taking the time to visit; imparting your thoughts, is impactful and truly meaningful to me. Your show of support is something that I don't take for granted and I'm so humbly grateful to receive.
Thank you-🙏🏻
... it's t's my true pleasure to have been given the opportunity to ser that part of your heart.
All my warmest regards,
🌹-B
Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 2:06pm
Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
You honor me with such beautiful kindness...
All my deepest thanks, poet
For everything - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
xoxo
All my deepest thanks, poet
For everything - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
xoxo
Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 3:34pm
Aftercare the most important tine of the day, the stillness, the to steal your words the JUST BEING of ut all
This my gorgeous girl is perfect, just like you
Love and light
Ron xx
This my gorgeous girl is perfect, just like you
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 9:39pm
What's perfect here, are your incredibly kind and generous words of wisdom, my dearest Knight.
To be held so cradled within the arms of known completion in unspoken understanding, is what it really is all about...Imo.
I am so grateful and overjoyed that you share in that knowledge, too.
All my warmest affections from across the pond -
🌹 - 💙
B
To be held so cradled within the arms of known completion in unspoken understanding, is what it really is all about...Imo.
I am so grateful and overjoyed that you share in that knowledge, too.
All my warmest affections from across the pond -
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 8:13pm
So true, as the Bard of Avon said, "To be or not to be." Out of this comes a new oneness that is far stronger than the first bindings. Another great write from my Princess. Thanks, xoxoxoxo (O)
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 11:09pm
Well Oral,
Your lovely comments are truly one of a kind and leave me utterly aglow and deeply appreciative. It's a path towards a joint understanding and enlightenment can fuse their souls and mutal desires... hopefully intensifying and solidifying that 'oneness'...
From multitudes of thanks and joy, I send out to you my very best wishes ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹-💙
B
Your lovely comments are truly one of a kind and leave me utterly aglow and deeply appreciative. It's a path towards a joint understanding and enlightenment can fuse their souls and mutal desires... hopefully intensifying and solidifying that 'oneness'...
From multitudes of thanks and joy, I send out to you my very best wishes ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 11:33pm
Each moment, each thought, each breath, each memory, each word, each dream brings the sealing of bonded hearts closer and closer--THEN ONENESS...Hugs, peace, and love (O)
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 11:52pm
You expertly express the ultimate devoted hope, dear bard.
Oneness, unbreakable.
🌹 - 💙
xo
Oneness, unbreakable.
🌹 - 💙
xo
Re. The tao of two hearts
23rd Feb 2022 9:58pm
Dear, Lady Blue
I enjoy, very much, this tender and deeply romantic piece. The comfort and acceptance is palpable...I can feel the heat of human contact I find much peace in Taoism and I feel the same peace reading this poem.
Bravissima, Goddess BB🌹 🐻💞🐰
I enjoy, very much, this tender and deeply romantic piece. The comfort and acceptance is palpable...I can feel the heat of human contact I find much peace in Taoism and I feel the same peace reading this poem.
Bravissima, Goddess BB🌹 🐻💞🐰
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You make me soar,high knowing that you've found a beautiful sense of comfort and peace within my writing, dear BB. I love the sweet, sexy security that climbing into the lap of my lover, instills. Writing from that place of truth laced with ardent hope is where I often find my way to penning a piece that feels truly authentic. My humanity on the page.... I'm so delighted you felt me there, as well.
Your visits are always looked forward to and I'm so terrifically grateful that you take the time to share your thoughts with me. You only make me better, my dear poet 🙏🏻
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
😘🐻🐰🐻🐰😘
xo
B
Your visits are always looked forward to and I'm so terrifically grateful that you take the time to share your thoughts with me. You only make me better, my dear poet 🙏🏻
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
😘🐻🐰🐻🐰😘
xo
B
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
Hey there, Skyblue2 :)
My smile is wide and my heart full, after reading your amazingly thoughtful and kind words of supportive feedback.
To be so cradled - each, by the other... physically, emotionally and mentally; to the point where words aren't needed, only touch, is transcendent.
It's an intense warmth of connected oneness, that I had hoped would come across and I now feel supremely successful with that desire, knowing your thoughts.
I'm overjoyed you felt the piece worked as a whole and that you could feel the emotional elements emanating.
Thank you so much for visiting, for the generous list add and for leaving me with your takeaway. It means a lot to me and definitely helps me to grow as a writer.
It's been a lovely pleasure meeting you 🦋
Much love and humble appreciation,
🌹-B
Update :11:44am EST
(Omg!! ... Tim... lol.. I just now saw it's you... hahaha... You're so cheeky! Thanks for the lovely sentiments)
My smile is wide and my heart full, after reading your amazingly thoughtful and kind words of supportive feedback.
To be so cradled - each, by the other... physically, emotionally and mentally; to the point where words aren't needed, only touch, is transcendent.
It's an intense warmth of connected oneness, that I had hoped would come across and I now feel supremely successful with that desire, knowing your thoughts.
I'm overjoyed you felt the piece worked as a whole and that you could feel the emotional elements emanating.
Thank you so much for visiting, for the generous list add and for leaving me with your takeaway. It means a lot to me and definitely helps me to grow as a writer.
It's been a lovely pleasure meeting you 🦋
Much love and humble appreciation,
🌹-B
Update :11:44am EST
(Omg!! ... Tim... lol.. I just now saw it's you... hahaha... You're so cheeky! Thanks for the lovely sentiments)
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24th Feb 2022 5:44pm
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
24th Feb 2022 5:56pm
Re. The tao of two hearts
24th Feb 2022 2:11am
Two hearts becoming one in hot passionate sex. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
24th Feb 2022 5:09pm
Two hearts bonding by the touch of holding one another... ;)
Your visits are appreciated, Francisco... thanks so much!
Your visits are appreciated, Francisco... thanks so much!
Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
24th Feb 2022 9:21pm
Re. The tao of two hearts
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Feb 2022 6:38am
24th Feb 2022 6:37am
''Our
zen
of
togetherness
sets in
Turning off
life's carousel
taking in
deep sensory stimulus
opening up
allowing
us,
to just be. ''
Exquisitely erotic and loving
Excellent dismount
zen
of
togetherness
sets in
Turning off
life's carousel
taking in
deep sensory stimulus
opening up
allowing
us,
to just be. ''
Exquisitely erotic and loving
Excellent dismount
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
Hi, Naajir :)
I'm so happy you stopped by to visit and that you enjoyed yourself, reading. The intense love and connection described within, means even more to me when I know just how deeply felt and appreciated it is by other readers. That truly means the world to me.... I'm humbled, completely.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts - 🙏🏻
It's a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm so happy you stopped by to visit and that you enjoyed yourself, reading. The intense love and connection described within, means even more to me when I know just how deeply felt and appreciated it is by other readers. That truly means the world to me.... I'm humbled, completely.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts - 🙏🏻
It's a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The tao of two hearts
24th Feb 2022 8:24am
Deep sigh and a flood of oxytocin...
I feel very privileged to visit places, such as these,
via your beautiful poetry.
I feel very privileged to visit places, such as these,
via your beautiful poetry.
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
24th Feb 2022 5:31pm
I'm so lucky to have you along for the delicious journey, my dear Cipher - 💙
((Biggest hugs))
You've made my afternoon!
Thanks for that.
🌹-B
x
((Biggest hugs))
You've made my afternoon!
Thanks for that.
🌹-B
x
Anonymous
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24th Feb 2022 12:24pm
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
Thank you, Jay.
Your thoughts and opinions are some of my most cherished, so I'm deeply appreciative that you decided to stop by and take the time you have.
I'm so glad you found a bit of beauty here and that my writing was indeed RL worthy.
My gratitude is all yours, dear poet 🙏🏻
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B
Your thoughts and opinions are some of my most cherished, so I'm deeply appreciative that you decided to stop by and take the time you have.
I'm so glad you found a bit of beauty here and that my writing was indeed RL worthy.
My gratitude is all yours, dear poet 🙏🏻
Much love,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The tao of two hearts
24th Feb 2022 3:20pm
The perfect weekend begins and ends just like this....why not enjoy the journey?
Without this part, what's in between is just role playing.
Without this part, what's in between is just role playing.
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24th Feb 2022 3:49pm
Re. The tao of two hearts
24th Feb 2022 9:46pm
Now this… is what I am searching for… lovely poetic capturing… with all of the hallmarks of a skilled romantic poet… bravo B…
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
You and me both, my friend 🙏🏻
If I can vividly dream it, hopefully I can find it's existence in real life, too. Let optimism reign!! ;)
Thanks so much for reading, the generous list add and for understanding my headspace, LilD.
I cherish you.
Best wishes on your Caribbean holiday 🏖 🛳
🌹-🌊
xo
If I can vividly dream it, hopefully I can find it's existence in real life, too. Let optimism reign!! ;)
Thanks so much for reading, the generous list add and for understanding my headspace, LilD.
I cherish you.
Best wishes on your Caribbean holiday 🏖 🛳
🌹-🌊
xo
Re. The tao of two hearts
28th Feb 2022 5:13pm
Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
28th Feb 2022 6:58pm
Mmmm..... lovely.
I'm so delighted that you think so, KP
Thank you - 💙
🌹 - B
x
I'm so delighted that you think so, KP
Thank you - 💙
🌹 - B
x
Re. The tao of two hearts
11th Mar 2022 9:58pm
Gotta love the bonding, it's sensual and spiritual, no words needed, just two bodies, two souls connecting in all kinds of levels.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
12th Mar 2022 00:06am
Thanks for reading, Walter.
I'm glad you like it and could feel those emotions come through.
Much appreciated.
I thank you for the nod.
🌹 - B
x
I'm glad you like it and could feel those emotions come through.
Much appreciated.
I thank you for the nod.
🌹 - B
x
Re. The tao of two hearts
14th Mar 2022 11:26pm
Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
14th Mar 2022 11:45pm
Thanks for the visit, LV!
I'm so pleased you enjoyed.
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm so pleased you enjoyed.
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The tao of two hearts
11th Jul 2022 5:28am
Velvet,
This is steamy luv in its finest. The two alone together within the comfort of their own agreement of each's ah need. This lust for this passion awakened for the two by the two. And, it's sweet to the two and only they know if there are more. 🍑🍓🥓🥝🛳️🌌🌃🌎🌏😁😆😄😃😀💯💯💯💯💋👍💪🦾👐👐👍👍👍✊.
This is steamy luv in its finest. The two alone together within the comfort of their own agreement of each's ah need. This lust for this passion awakened for the two by the two. And, it's sweet to the two and only they know if there are more. 🍑🍓🥓🥝🛳️🌌🌃🌎🌏😁😆😄😃😀💯💯💯💯💋👍💪🦾👐👐👍👍👍✊.
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Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
11th Jul 2022 11:10am
Yessss!!!
I agree with your enthusiasm, Birchel!!
It's about as close as two people can get; feeling each other's emotional states and mingling them together as one.... being comforted by one another on an existential level... closer than just fucking.... or words... joined together in an union of hearts and souls.
One of my most intimate and favorite poems, too.
I'm beyond delighted that you found worthy and excitement, reading.
Thank you, B.
What a tremendously awesome compliment /feedback.
(*・‿・)ノ⌒*:・゚✧
I agree with your enthusiasm, Birchel!!
It's about as close as two people can get; feeling each other's emotional states and mingling them together as one.... being comforted by one another on an existential level... closer than just fucking.... or words... joined together in an union of hearts and souls.
One of my most intimate and favorite poems, too.
I'm beyond delighted that you found worthy and excitement, reading.
Thank you, B.
What a tremendously awesome compliment /feedback.
(*・‿・)ノ⌒*:・゚✧
Re: Re. The tao of two hearts
11th Jul 2022 2:19pm
U are welcome and thank u so much for finding this compliment so touching to u.
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