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The dance
I fell into the sultry smoke
Of her heavenly eyes
Hoping for a chance to see
Her fleeting flirtatious smile
She guides my hands to her hips
In an effortless slow motion way
And we glide thru the stars
In a soft hypnotic sway
Of her heavenly eyes
Hoping for a chance to see
Her fleeting flirtatious smile
She guides my hands to her hips
In an effortless slow motion way
And we glide thru the stars
In a soft hypnotic sway
Published 21st Jan 2022
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Anonymous
21st Jan 2022 00:45am
Hi Kaden.A lovely,flowing piece.
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21st Jan 2022 1:36am
21st Jan 2022 3:47am
Very nice dude. You should score some points with whoever she is.
Awesome write.
Awesome write.
21st Jan 2022 10:24am
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
23rd Jan 2022 00:40am
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