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Do you remember the rivers of blood?
Do you remember the rivers of blood?
Sunset in crimson clouds ...
It's time to forget about sweet love,
Put an end to those dreams.
I am in a black dress in front of you.
And a sword glittering in your hands.
Well, well, get up! Get ready for battle!
Kill, or I will burn your ashes.
Swinging your sword, I will strike the ground, -
Raw flesh will unfold.
Now I will not heed your words,
You cannot prick me.
I get a little closer.
Corset ... Untied lace ...
Here are two hands slipped below
And a black dress at the feet.
I go down on my knees ...
And kisses again and again.
Like a poison running through a vein,
Blind passion spoils my blood.
Taking off your clothes with jerks,
I will subjugate the body to you.
You will again be somewhere in between:
Not underground, not on earth.
Digging with sharp nails, torment
me mercilessly.
Touching my skin with your lips,
You absorb my blood into yourself.
In the stillness of the night there are only moans,
wheezing,
Lingering cry of wild pain
For my insatiable flesh
There was always so little will ...
Blood communion binds the soul
And now - the last movement,
The whole body tightly brought together.
The last breath of exhaustion,
And this viscous warmth ...
You are next to me, breathing heavily,
You lie, I am unable to rise.
Eyes half closed
Can't resist me.
I bend over for the sword.
A moment - and he is in me.
Fresh scarlet blood gushes with a spring,
And all that was behind.
Eyes half-closed
From the pain they opened wide,
And a tear of glass on the cheek ...
Finally you move to preserve me in this state
My glances rushed to the floor.
Hands bound at your mercy, hanging, waiting
I remember the rivers of blood,
Sunset in crimson clouds ...
But I will not forget that passion,
In our remaining dreams.
Sunset in crimson clouds ...
It's time to forget about sweet love,
Put an end to those dreams.
I am in a black dress in front of you.
And a sword glittering in your hands.
Well, well, get up! Get ready for battle!
Kill, or I will burn your ashes.
Swinging your sword, I will strike the ground, -
Raw flesh will unfold.
Now I will not heed your words,
You cannot prick me.
I get a little closer.
Corset ... Untied lace ...
Here are two hands slipped below
And a black dress at the feet.
I go down on my knees ...
And kisses again and again.
Like a poison running through a vein,
Blind passion spoils my blood.
Taking off your clothes with jerks,
I will subjugate the body to you.
You will again be somewhere in between:
Not underground, not on earth.
Digging with sharp nails, torment
me mercilessly.
Touching my skin with your lips,
You absorb my blood into yourself.
In the stillness of the night there are only moans,
wheezing,
Lingering cry of wild pain
For my insatiable flesh
There was always so little will ...
Blood communion binds the soul
And now - the last movement,
The whole body tightly brought together.
The last breath of exhaustion,
And this viscous warmth ...
You are next to me, breathing heavily,
You lie, I am unable to rise.
Eyes half closed
Can't resist me.
I bend over for the sword.
A moment - and he is in me.
Fresh scarlet blood gushes with a spring,
And all that was behind.
Eyes half-closed
From the pain they opened wide,
And a tear of glass on the cheek ...
Finally you move to preserve me in this state
My glances rushed to the floor.
Hands bound at your mercy, hanging, waiting
I remember the rivers of blood,
Sunset in crimson clouds ...
But I will not forget that passion,
In our remaining dreams.
Written by
KristinaX
Published 21st Dec 2021
Author's Note
Thank you so much Poetspeak for allowing me to use one of your incredible original paintings to compliment and enhance this.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Do you remember the rivers of blood?
A freaking beautiful piece of dark erotica Lady, there's a ton that can be said about it. But freaking tight is all that needs saying by us
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21st Dec 2021 9:46pm
Hell yes! I always adore getting a freaking tight I_IS_ME. And 'a freaking beautiful piece of dark erotica' really makes me so happy. There is definitely a lot that can be said, I do love how you see the deeper meanings and symbolism. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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21st Dec 2021 9:24pm
Great job beautiful dark and erotic, Christmas came early
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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21st Dec 2021 10:04pm
You deserve the very best Christmas gifts Ron. I feel like Christmas came early for me too because you like it. ;) I was reluctant to post it but you also made me feel better about that too. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
Re. Do you remember the rivers of blood?
21st Dec 2021 10:50pm
Thrilling passion and gore story
I've read these before by you
I come and go in a trance often bleeding from the heart ...
How does one reconcile the gushing blood in a river of pain and sanctity ? True vampirism with bdsm death squads.
I'm thrilled and scared reading you but with a thickening in my man part.
Parts and labor, a day in the life of KristinaX
Thanks for using my ruddy blood painting, you've done it a phenomenal justice....
BIG LUSH RED LIKE
I've read these before by you
I come and go in a trance often bleeding from the heart ...
How does one reconcile the gushing blood in a river of pain and sanctity ? True vampirism with bdsm death squads.
I'm thrilled and scared reading you but with a thickening in my man part.
Parts and labor, a day in the life of KristinaX
Thanks for using my ruddy blood painting, you've done it a phenomenal justice....
BIG LUSH RED LIKE
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21st Dec 2021 11:43pm
Ah yes, what could be more passionate than gore?
Let's just call it the blood and pain series.
Pain is the most honest feeling. It can definitely put you in a trance...
Those rivers of pain have a way of reconciling themselves. And vampires have a way of going where the blood is. The BDSM death squads too.
Thrilled and scared, I do love a strong response.
The parts and labor are still under warranty. But you break it, you...
Thank you so much for letting me use it. I am so happy you like what I did with it. ;)
Love the BIG LUSH RED LIKE 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
Let's just call it the blood and pain series.
Pain is the most honest feeling. It can definitely put you in a trance...
Those rivers of pain have a way of reconciling themselves. And vampires have a way of going where the blood is. The BDSM death squads too.
Thrilled and scared, I do love a strong response.
The parts and labor are still under warranty. But you break it, you...
Thank you so much for letting me use it. I am so happy you like what I did with it. ;)
Love the BIG LUSH RED LIKE 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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21st Dec 2021 11:39pm
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22nd Dec 2021 00:08am
Hey Marks! It's great to hear from you. ;) Your comment is precious to me 😍, Thank you! :) 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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23rd Dec 2021 00:28am
Re. Do you remember the rivers of blood?
21st Dec 2021 11:59pm
How can one resist...sword raised high ready to slay and succumb to the luscious libation of blood...tied to every move perpetuated, sliced to precision in the imperfection of knight... epic dearest Kristina xo
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22nd Dec 2021 00:50am
Oh yes! How can you resist Tim? sword raised high and ready to slay*. Blood is the most passionate wine isn't it? So thick and full of life. And there is definitely time to be tied, every move calculated. ;) sliced to precision.... getting a Jack the Ripper feel. lol. Absolutely love epic, thank you so much! xo 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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22nd Dec 2021 00:32am
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22nd Dec 2021 1:00am
I do love the darkness Adagio, I know you do too so I really love that you liked it. :) Thank you so much for stopping by and giving me your thoughts. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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22nd Dec 2021 00:37am
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22nd Dec 2021 1:16am
Damnit Francisco, I love that so much. :) And I love sharing my dark with you. ;) Thank you for the wonderful comment. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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22nd Dec 2021 2:10am
Oh how your words make me want to... well that would require an 'extreme content' warning. ;) you sure did take the fast track to the dark side of my mind. Thoroughly distracted by all the possibilities.
You are such a tease, can't wait. ;) And I am so happy you loved it!
Much love back, <3 xoxo 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
You are such a tease, can't wait. ;) And I am so happy you loved it!
Much love back, <3 xoxo 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
Re. Do you remember the rivers of blood?
22nd Dec 2021 2:10am
Hi K!!
Swords and blood and erotica. The battle lines have been drawn and lets do this.
Such a great read amiga. Loved the suspense of it and the tone - sustained through
the whole piece. And what can I say about the picture. In a weird way with red it
is just what the vampire would want in his stocking for Christmas. LOL
Well done amiga:)
Swords and blood and erotica. The battle lines have been drawn and lets do this.
Such a great read amiga. Loved the suspense of it and the tone - sustained through
the whole piece. And what can I say about the picture. In a weird way with red it
is just what the vampire would want in his stocking for Christmas. LOL
Well done amiga:)
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22nd Dec 2021 2:38am
Hey there Adelphina, I am so happy to see you. Swords and blood and erotica, what could possibly go wrong? lol Absolutely let's do this. Always ready for a crazy sexy duel. ;) I really debated if I should post this one or not so I appreciate your thoughts on it so much. And I love how you skillfully turned this into a Christmas poem, that's brilliant. Love it! :p 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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22nd Dec 2021 3:13pm
Interesting and original phrasing, that's me Ted. ;) I am so happy you could understand me and empathize with the message. Thank you for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. :) 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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22nd Dec 2021 3:24pm
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22nd Dec 2021 3:30pm
Hey LDF! I love that the rivers of blood were flowing, vivid, and kept your attention. :) Thank you so much for the comment and giving me your thoughts. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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23rd Dec 2021 1:17pm
Hey there PQ, I am so happy you liked my bloody ink straight from the vein or is it that time of the month. :p Thank you so much for stopping by and giving me your thoughts. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
Re. Do you remember the rivers of blood?
23rd Dec 2021 2:15pm
A captivating piece. I can feel your warm blood flowing down my sharp teeth and into my throat as my valiant sword pricks you over and over as you quiver shake and scream bound in the ropes of passion. What a way to start the day - Thank you
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23rd Dec 2021 3:08pm
I am here to captivate, the feeling of warm viscous fluids that flow down the throat is mesmerizing... drinking in the sweet nectar. ;) Leaving enough to ensure the sword is ready for battle. How the mighty sword can bring one to their knees quivering, shaking, and screaming... forever bound by it's power. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
Re. Do you remember the rivers of blood?
24th Dec 2021 6:23pm
The dark princess sacrifices herself at the vampire’s altar seeking eternal immortality. Not only your soul but your carnal flesh are willingly given for the “swordman’s” pleasure, and in-turn yours. A small price to pay for eternal passion and bondage. 🧛♀️
Happy Holidays. 🦌🎄
Happy Holidays. 🦌🎄
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25th Dec 2021 4:56pm
Sometimes the sacrifice is worth the pain. Seeking eternal immortality in the arms of another. Wanting to live that passion forever. It's so hard to resist a skillful swordman's blade. ;) My mind is so tied up with the thoughts of this beautiful bondage.
Merry Christmas and happy holidays... Leo. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
Merry Christmas and happy holidays... Leo. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
Re. Do you remember the rivers of blood?
26th Dec 2021 5:59am
You scare me, draw me in, losing myself in your dreams and prose. My soul, tattered and frayed, dissolving, becoming smoke, carried on the whispered breath of desire. Cell by cell, molecule by molecule, I feel the excruciating pain of... nothingness, becoming something... else, the beginning at a new beginning, the world inverse, upside down, pain becomes desire, blood becomes love. Your power scares me, as I caress the fire of your soul, rising from the ashes of desire, reborn. [New poem, yet something more]
There is magic in this poem, but I don't think of white or black magic, this is earth magic and the beating heart of creation itself.
There is magic in this poem, but I don't think of white or black magic, this is earth magic and the beating heart of creation itself.
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26th Dec 2021 8:43pm
You certainly know how to leave me speechless with the depth of your feelings. I love that you share them with me. I suppose I can be quite scary at times. Anyway, I will take you in and let you share in my dreams... to lose yourself with me for a moment. I can also feel the pain cell by cell, molecule by molecule. It is as if you read my mind, pain becomes desire, blood becomes love. Sometimes I scare myself and the fire of my soul burns me. Ah a new poem, I will certainly look forward to immersing myself in that. There is always magic in your words. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
Re. Do you remember the rivers of blood?
31st Dec 2021 1:15am
Kristina,
I want to thank you for participating in this comp with this excellent piece. My partner and I were in awe of the erotic, vampiric tones that encompassed Anne Rice's style and writings.
I always look forward to your offerings here at DUP. They always bring an intrigue and curiosity, and it's proven number of reads, comments and RL additions.
Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and have a Happy New Years.
Sincerely,
W
I want to thank you for participating in this comp with this excellent piece. My partner and I were in awe of the erotic, vampiric tones that encompassed Anne Rice's style and writings.
I always look forward to your offerings here at DUP. They always bring an intrigue and curiosity, and it's proven number of reads, comments and RL additions.
Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and have a Happy New Years.
Sincerely,
W
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You are so welcome, I don't normally participate in comps but I did love the subject matter. I thought maybe I could get things started since there were no submissions and I had just wrote this one. The submissions that followed were truly something and made me feel intimidated to have entered. But it makes me really happy to know that you and your partner liked it.
That means more to me than you know. For the most part I am hesitant to post so I appreciate everyone's input and thoughts so much. I would not consider myself a writer per se and there are things here that have been really difficult for me but there are also so many wonderful people. And you are an amazing influence and really made me feel accepted from the very beginning.
I hope you and yours are having a very Happy Holidays and have a wonderful New Year. xo
Thank you so much for all your support and kindness. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
That means more to me than you know. For the most part I am hesitant to post so I appreciate everyone's input and thoughts so much. I would not consider myself a writer per se and there are things here that have been really difficult for me but there are also so many wonderful people. And you are an amazing influence and really made me feel accepted from the very beginning.
I hope you and yours are having a very Happy Holidays and have a wonderful New Year. xo
Thank you so much for all your support and kindness. 🩸🦇🌃⛓️
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14th Jan 2022 5:22pm
Whoooweee Kristina…….hot hot hot…….my river isn’t blood but it sure is silky lavender…….enjoyed this juicy ink……purple luv & hugs xo :)
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18th Jan 2022 5:21pm
Oh, how you caress me with the silky lavender flow of your feelings. Your words make my river of blood seethe with passion, I love how you can feel my words and I am so happy you enjoyed this one. I always adore purple luv and hugs. :) 🩸🦇🌃⛓️