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Pseudologia Fantastica
All those words
and cheery promises
seem like the truth
until your pants are
off, then you lay
in the lie that's
been sold to you.
☆
and cheery promises
seem like the truth
until your pants are
off, then you lay
in the lie that's
been sold to you.
☆
Published 8th Dec 2021
Author's Note
My photo from an old kids book titled In A Pumpkin Shell.
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8th Dec 2021 1:53pm
Sounds like a promise of a lifetime of love that ends up being one night of lust...
8th Dec 2021 2:18pm
8th Dec 2021 4:26pm
Dear N,
If this doesn’t sound exactly like every experience I had in college…I’m always awed by your genius for targeting an experience or idea and writing about it so succinctly! I also love the picture with this write. It made me think just how much promises of love are exactly like unicorns. Nonexistent. Great write. H🌷
If this doesn’t sound exactly like every experience I had in college…I’m always awed by your genius for targeting an experience or idea and writing about it so succinctly! I also love the picture with this write. It made me think just how much promises of love are exactly like unicorns. Nonexistent. Great write. H🌷
8th Dec 2021 4:56pm
9th Dec 2021 1:48am
Love the whole fantasy of it all.
The picture and words.
Always a short strong truth:)
Love these little dittys of yours
The picture and words.
Always a short strong truth:)
Love these little dittys of yours
9th Dec 2021 2:16am
10th Dec 2021 4:18am
10th Dec 2021 1:38pm
14th Dec 2021 4:32pm
hello nikkimoe!!! strong,passionate and wise words.. and I love the first comment by Lament4GenX.
Congratz!!!!!!
I really love this poem.....
Congratz!!!!!!
I really love this poem.....
15th Dec 2021 11:46pm
16th Dec 2021 9:46pm
Unicorns and lies. Fantastic fantasies and fanatic fallacies.
Nicely done nikki.
Nicely done nikki.
16th Dec 2021 10:39pm
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