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Chance beckoning of hidden scars and the cosmic relief of destined bloodletting
like a dulled
razor
slicing
across
supple pale skin
marking me
indelibly
coveted scars
pleas that silently plead
prayers
chance-made
ones
i scoffed
at praying for
answered
with leathered profundity
sharpened thoughts
so sharp
rip open
again...
and again
pain(s)
perfectly imbues
an unbelieved of
fate
with
wicked promise
.
.
.
i bleed
from
wounds
that have
always
been
there
undiscovered
'till,you
let it all.....spill forth
Published 6th Dec 2021
Author's Note
The thoughts behind ancient bloodletting were to withdraw blood to prevent or attempt to cure illness... Finding a remedy by a bit of exsanguination, was common practice.
Just some metaphoric musing around that idea...
©Blu2021
Just some metaphoric musing around that idea...
©Blu2021
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6th Dec 2021 10:44am
The metaphor and the practice
...job B.
On a side note you're spot on re the ancient art of purification by blood letting...reminds me of the Chinese wet-cupping and the ancient Middle Eastern Hijama therapies.
Brave ink S.👍
...job B.
On a side note you're spot on re the ancient art of purification by blood letting...reminds me of the Chinese wet-cupping and the ancient Middle Eastern Hijama therapies.
Brave ink S.👍
You're astute in your reminding, CF... just a little historical reading on my end.... lol..
Thanks for stopping by, saying hello and the generous 'atta girl'... it's very much appreciated, my friend 🙏
I hope you and yours are doing well -
Warmest regards and Season's Greetings
🌹 - B
x
Thanks for stopping by, saying hello and the generous 'atta girl'... it's very much appreciated, my friend 🙏
I hope you and yours are doing well -
Warmest regards and Season's Greetings
🌹 - B
x
6th Dec 2021 1:14pm
Wow at first I thought it was about self harming made me wobble. I'm glad you put a explanation on it gorgeous
Great write, great read
Love and light
Ron xx
Great write, great read
Love and light
Ron xx
Hey there, Ron
I can totally see where an idea of self harm applying to this, as well.... So that's wasn't too crazy of a notion at all. I felt it was a bit too ambiguous, hence that little description of where my mindset was... I'm glad you took the time to read and I always deeply adore your feedback... Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me.... It's a pleasure to know you enjoyed.
Be well, dear friend 🙏
🌹 - B
x
I can totally see where an idea of self harm applying to this, as well.... So that's wasn't too crazy of a notion at all. I felt it was a bit too ambiguous, hence that little description of where my mindset was... I'm glad you took the time to read and I always deeply adore your feedback... Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me.... It's a pleasure to know you enjoyed.
Be well, dear friend 🙏
🌹 - B
x
6th Dec 2021 1:27pm
bloodletting
of the poison
preventing
awareness....
true suffering
drip by
bloody drip
salvation....
discover
the wounds
that hold you back
viscous taste....
of truth
through
singular pain
freedom ....
finally
found and
accepted
in scars....
that you
now have
learned to
love ....
of the poison
preventing
awareness....
true suffering
drip by
bloody drip
salvation....
discover
the wounds
that hold you back
viscous taste....
of truth
through
singular pain
freedom ....
finally
found and
accepted
in scars....
that you
now have
learned to
love ....
6th Dec 2021 6:21pm
Your poetry replies are seriously putting my little writes to shame!! Just so freaking awesomely conveyed and layed out, Colin... you just get it.
I can't thank you enough for that. It's a wonderful feeling—to be understood.
All my warmest gratitude and deep appreciation,
for everything... dear soul.
🌹-💙
xoxo
—B
I can't thank you enough for that. It's a wonderful feeling—to be understood.
All my warmest gratitude and deep appreciation,
for everything... dear soul.
🌹-💙
xoxo
—B
6th Dec 2021 4:49pm
Love the visual imagery
So many ways to loose or give
People are hailed when they donate
People are sympathised with when cut
They are cheered when they cut down a thug
But when they learn of your deviant ways
They are abhorred and shun your ways
They do not see the love you feel
For the One who fulfills your needs.
💜💜💜
So many ways to loose or give
People are hailed when they donate
People are sympathised with when cut
They are cheered when they cut down a thug
But when they learn of your deviant ways
They are abhorred and shun your ways
They do not see the love you feel
For the One who fulfills your needs.
💜💜💜
6th Dec 2021 6:27pm
You are fully and 100% correct, my friend! We are, more often than not, judged way too harshly when brave enough to admit or individual proclivities or peccadillos... Usually by those who are hiding the worst of the worst... lmao!! I have no worries nor care about that fear of 'damnation' by those who might sling uninformed cruelty or judgments my way.... I know myself and those closest to me. Only goodness and compassion flow in abundance here... I deeply appreciate your thoughtful comments and valuable insights.
Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.... I fully appreciate it.
🌹B
x
Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.... I fully appreciate it.
🌹B
x
Anonymous
6th Dec 2021 6:22pm
Visually brilliant Artwork...
Compliments your excellent words here as you describe the ancient art of purging one's self....
I admired the way you kept it personal, then introduced another who shared/ prompted said purge.
Elegantly passionate as always....
Deeply involving to read.
🖤🥀
Compliments your excellent words here as you describe the ancient art of purging one's self....
I admired the way you kept it personal, then introduced another who shared/ prompted said purge.
Elegantly passionate as always....
Deeply involving to read.
🖤🥀
6th Dec 2021 6:34pm
To alleviate pain in whatever form or fashion one finds that's healthy, constructive and even erotic, is truly positive and of valuable worth, in my eyes. Even if it's outside whatever a typical 'mainstream' ideology thinks...just my weirdo 2 cents... lmao.
Thank you for sharing such immersive kind words. I deeply thank you. - x
My heart is full knowing that there are those of like mindedness.....🥀
🌹-💙
x
Thank you for sharing such immersive kind words. I deeply thank you. - x
My heart is full knowing that there are those of like mindedness.....🥀
🌹-💙
x
Anonymous
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6th Dec 2021 6:51pm
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6th Dec 2021 8:39pm
Hey there, lovely lady! ;)
There are times (not many) when inspiration strikes from the most random places, and a pen might unintentionally unveil what usually is kept deeply guarded and otherwise a topic not tackled.... In those instances, I try to just let it flow....if possible. An essence of truth behind the words , even if unusual or uncomfortable, I feel it is always alluring and palpably felt. I know that I'm definitely drawn to reading that type of writing from others. I hope to be as open as possible, sometimes I'm successful and other times, no so much.... hahaha.... I think it's one of the keys to growth in general...
-Long winded reply over-.... 😁 lol...
I am so appreciative of your visit and the thoughtfulness of your sentiments. I humbly thank you for sharing your thoughts and the generous list add, as well.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
There are times (not many) when inspiration strikes from the most random places, and a pen might unintentionally unveil what usually is kept deeply guarded and otherwise a topic not tackled.... In those instances, I try to just let it flow....if possible. An essence of truth behind the words , even if unusual or uncomfortable, I feel it is always alluring and palpably felt. I know that I'm definitely drawn to reading that type of writing from others. I hope to be as open as possible, sometimes I'm successful and other times, no so much.... hahaha.... I think it's one of the keys to growth in general...
-Long winded reply over-.... 😁 lol...
I am so appreciative of your visit and the thoughtfulness of your sentiments. I humbly thank you for sharing your thoughts and the generous list add, as well.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Feb 2022 2:45pm
6th Dec 2021 9:46pm
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6th Dec 2021 9:47pm
6th Dec 2021 9:24pm
Your blood has purified by my love for you, LOL. Ancient ways always wanted to cure illness by purifying blood. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
7th Dec 2021 5:25am
lol... You're a pistol, Francisco, I'll give you that!! haha... Thanks for the lovely sentiments.... I appreciate you.
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
7th Dec 2021 7:47am
6th Dec 2021 9:56pm
good afternoon beautiful Blue first let me say this is very deep
it really continues to trip me out when we are on similar wavelengths
this made me think of my poem plead I caught your title and i had to check out when you wrote this
somehow woman we seem to be connected...
this is so freaking great❤
it really continues to trip me out when we are on similar wavelengths
this made me think of my poem plead I caught your title and i had to check out when you wrote this
somehow woman we seem to be connected...
this is so freaking great❤
I adore you and simply bow down in complete reverence 🙇🏻♀️
To say that I'm honored by your words, is to put it mildly, Brenda. All my warmest gratitude exudes in nothing but it's purest sincerity. It's such a treat to read your poems and feel deep solidarity without an once or iota of anumius. It's how women are supposed to support one another. It's refreshingly awesome and I cherish it through and through.
Always in your corner, my friend 🙏
Sending love and well wishes your way ✨
🌹 - B
x
To say that I'm honored by your words, is to put it mildly, Brenda. All my warmest gratitude exudes in nothing but it's purest sincerity. It's such a treat to read your poems and feel deep solidarity without an once or iota of anumius. It's how women are supposed to support one another. It's refreshingly awesome and I cherish it through and through.
Always in your corner, my friend 🙏
Sending love and well wishes your way ✨
🌹 - B
x
6th Dec 2021 10:59pm
Masochism uses pain in a controlled environment with a trusted operator, not unlike a doctor operating on a patient.
Catharisis at the tip of one's tipping point is like a runner being in the zone.
Only the experience knows for sure what is felt and learned. Those who don't understand may judge the process but watch boxing, football, or martial arts and see that pain as only part of the sports process.
Your exhibiting in words what is experienced in private is a gift for those who see it for what it is.
Catharisis at the tip of one's tipping point is like a runner being in the zone.
Only the experience knows for sure what is felt and learned. Those who don't understand may judge the process but watch boxing, football, or martial arts and see that pain as only part of the sports process.
Your exhibiting in words what is experienced in private is a gift for those who see it for what it is.
I do so love giving out gifts that are unique and cherished by those who can fully and deeply appreciate them.... ;)
Thank you for sharing the ability you so keenly have of reaching into where I'm somewhat teetering and unsure, to generously lend a steadying hand.
I can't thank you enough - 💙
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
Thank you for sharing the ability you so keenly have of reaching into where I'm somewhat teetering and unsure, to generously lend a steadying hand.
I can't thank you enough - 💙
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
7th Dec 2021 9:16am
Words can be sculptural, and I appreciate your ability to shine light on the inclusions buried within a translucent subject.
Hi, RT :)
You leave me wowed with such delicious, unique vocabulary words. (my catnip!) Almost making me lose focus, missing out on your intended message..... Doh!.. I like the idea of words being finessed.... of molding or bending them into a construct or whatever particular form or fashion is pertinent ... 'sculptural'.... nicely put.
It's definitely awesome to be appreciated and I wholeheartedly thank you for that and for the visit in general. I am an odd duck, and that's what makes me beam— knowing you've been kind enough to be present....and giving my little poems a gander, is a nice second...
;)
I hope you are well...
🌹 - 💙
B
You leave me wowed with such delicious, unique vocabulary words. (my catnip!) Almost making me lose focus, missing out on your intended message..... Doh!.. I like the idea of words being finessed.... of molding or bending them into a construct or whatever particular form or fashion is pertinent ... 'sculptural'.... nicely put.
It's definitely awesome to be appreciated and I wholeheartedly thank you for that and for the visit in general. I am an odd duck, and that's what makes me beam— knowing you've been kind enough to be present....and giving my little poems a gander, is a nice second...
;)
I hope you are well...
🌹 - 💙
B
8th Dec 2021 5:30am
7th Dec 2021 11:05am
The painting, in the opening image is gorgeous and provocative.
The title, yes, the title. The title makes me think of how scars
are, perhaps like bones, in that they grow back stronger?
Or in this case, the skin becomes tougher and more difficult to cut.
(Scars are made of fibers and not skin cells and are therefore stronger?)
Well... In that case, I think of how scars seem to summon us
to test them, perhaps, test their strength...
Or, alternatively, we have a self destructive impulse through which we seek ruination, perhaps.
Or... We simply understand the process of healing,
the value of bloodletting.
In this case I think that such a thing would be associated with a more, overtly ritualistic process,
either innovated within the self, instinctually, or influenced by outside sources.
... The opening seems to speak of scars, not yet made,
but perhaps having always existed, which I would tend to agree with.
I do think that our scars were always there, even before they were there.
But the dulled razor indicates either the initial implement,
or the implement as having been used, either in the same scar or other scars.
I do like the provocative nature of these possibilities,
draws me in and makes me think.
[Pleas that silently plead]
Interesting... Like the scars perhaps have something to say,
something for you to do, or both of these things and other things...
[prayers]
Prayers [Answered with leathered profundity]
That's very interesting.
Like depths that get deeper as they become worn by time and tide.
Receiving the same answer.
That, in itself, would be torturous, because we would not ask,
more than once, if we didn't want a different answer.
Therefore we are receiving the unwanted answer, over and over.
Echoes of anguish.
[Sharpened thoughts] in contrast to the dulled razor...
Yes. What comes after can be more potent than what came before.
The primal part of ourselves experience the initial event,
while our executive functions take it from there, and... Take it from there. :)))
[an unbelieved of fate]
I feel like this connected to the prayers, reluctantly made...
Like when there is certain sorts of pain,
everything is equally true and equally false.
Making for an interesting state of being.
Maybe like being distanced from the self,
while our primal aspects and executive aspects run amok.
[wicked promise]
Yes.
[i bleed
from
wounds
that have
always
been
there
undiscovered
'till,you]
Such a cool ending.
For me this reads like bloodletting, via a modern or post modern paradigm,
which, to me, is extremely relevant.
This is wonderful, B.
The title, yes, the title. The title makes me think of how scars
are, perhaps like bones, in that they grow back stronger?
Or in this case, the skin becomes tougher and more difficult to cut.
(Scars are made of fibers and not skin cells and are therefore stronger?)
Well... In that case, I think of how scars seem to summon us
to test them, perhaps, test their strength...
Or, alternatively, we have a self destructive impulse through which we seek ruination, perhaps.
Or... We simply understand the process of healing,
the value of bloodletting.
In this case I think that such a thing would be associated with a more, overtly ritualistic process,
either innovated within the self, instinctually, or influenced by outside sources.
... The opening seems to speak of scars, not yet made,
but perhaps having always existed, which I would tend to agree with.
I do think that our scars were always there, even before they were there.
But the dulled razor indicates either the initial implement,
or the implement as having been used, either in the same scar or other scars.
I do like the provocative nature of these possibilities,
draws me in and makes me think.
[Pleas that silently plead]
Interesting... Like the scars perhaps have something to say,
something for you to do, or both of these things and other things...
[prayers]
Prayers [Answered with leathered profundity]
That's very interesting.
Like depths that get deeper as they become worn by time and tide.
Receiving the same answer.
That, in itself, would be torturous, because we would not ask,
more than once, if we didn't want a different answer.
Therefore we are receiving the unwanted answer, over and over.
Echoes of anguish.
[Sharpened thoughts] in contrast to the dulled razor...
Yes. What comes after can be more potent than what came before.
The primal part of ourselves experience the initial event,
while our executive functions take it from there, and... Take it from there. :)))
[an unbelieved of fate]
I feel like this connected to the prayers, reluctantly made...
Like when there is certain sorts of pain,
everything is equally true and equally false.
Making for an interesting state of being.
Maybe like being distanced from the self,
while our primal aspects and executive aspects run amok.
[wicked promise]
Yes.
[i bleed
from
wounds
that have
always
been
there
undiscovered
'till,you]
Such a cool ending.
For me this reads like bloodletting, via a modern or post modern paradigm,
which, to me, is extremely relevant.
This is wonderful, B.
OHHH MYYYY GODDDDD!
This is Epic AF!! These comments leave me soooo full of shivering loveliness!! It's hard to explain, just how much I freaking adore this.... These words.... your ideas....Your distinct thoughts broken down and assessed..... personal ponderings of meaning, truth and the abstraction that can move and mystify.... It's so so so beautiful, how art affects the mind, body and soul ... morphing thoughts and expanding possibility....Again, you are amazing, Pablo... Thank you for sharing yourself.
You made me day with this comment, C.
I can't thank you enough for sharing all that you and I can create together as authors and readers, artists and muses..... I'm just breathless.
All my love and respectful joyous gratitude,
🌹 - 💙 - 🎨 - 📝 - 🌈 - ☄️- 🌌
xoxo
—B
This is Epic AF!! These comments leave me soooo full of shivering loveliness!! It's hard to explain, just how much I freaking adore this.... These words.... your ideas....Your distinct thoughts broken down and assessed..... personal ponderings of meaning, truth and the abstraction that can move and mystify.... It's so so so beautiful, how art affects the mind, body and soul ... morphing thoughts and expanding possibility....Again, you are amazing, Pablo... Thank you for sharing yourself.
You made me day with this comment, C.
I can't thank you enough for sharing all that you and I can create together as authors and readers, artists and muses..... I'm just breathless.
All my love and respectful joyous gratitude,
🌹 - 💙 - 🎨 - 📝 - 🌈 - ☄️- 🌌
xoxo
—B
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
7th Dec 2021 12:52pm
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Hi, Lt :)
Your enjoyment of way this piece was delivered has me all smiles. That was something that I was concerned with, so it makes me breathe a bit easier knowing someone else appreciates it, too. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and such kindness with me, it means a lot that you take the time.
Much love and well wishes your way ✨
🌹 - B
x
Your enjoyment of way this piece was delivered has me all smiles. That was something that I was concerned with, so it makes me breathe a bit easier knowing someone else appreciates it, too. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and such kindness with me, it means a lot that you take the time.
Much love and well wishes your way ✨
🌹 - B
x
7th Dec 2021 8:07pm
BV your metaphoric dexterity is immeasurable.
Your powerful words are beautifully savage in this enticing write.
And that is' damn 'SEXY''.
I can feel all of my past inhibitions and secrets pouring from my veins through your provocative poetic imagery.
My blood is gushing.
If you listen ''Varicosely'' you can hear it flow south uncontrollably from your erotic poetry, LOL,haha
Seriously Susan, I am dumbfounded by your consistent brilliance.
Your sheer poetic eloquence portrays an incredible fetish as Art by using your beautiful piercing metaphors.
This is a masterfully written revelation of one's fetishes/desires,
that is exquisitely refined by fascinating verse.
Cutting Edge Poetry!!!
Your powerful words are beautifully savage in this enticing write.
And that is' damn 'SEXY''.
I can feel all of my past inhibitions and secrets pouring from my veins through your provocative poetic imagery.
My blood is gushing.
If you listen ''Varicosely'' you can hear it flow south uncontrollably from your erotic poetry, LOL,haha
Seriously Susan, I am dumbfounded by your consistent brilliance.
Your sheer poetic eloquence portrays an incredible fetish as Art by using your beautiful piercing metaphors.
This is a masterfully written revelation of one's fetishes/desires,
that is exquisitely refined by fascinating verse.
Cutting Edge Poetry!!!
Dear R,
Ohh how you plunge right into the sharpened edge of the deep end where the bleeding of poetry and unmitigated begging for all that a particular heart may desire trickles into full streaming. It's within the vortex of a searing metaphor that sometimes truth can be cleverly buried, or tied up and gagged, unable to speak the thoughts that permission hasn't be given, hence not allowed.... *wink
Your ability to recognize the abundant and significant importance that a writer can apply to a particular piece of art /writing is epically uncanny. My heart pumps in reverence - 🙏
Thank you for sharing (please never stop) your very amazing, astute and mind blowing insights with me. You allow me to unfurl my sense of constant self protection .... to just breathe.
Unbelievably precious , is that rarity.
Deepest gratitude - 💙
🌹 - B
xoxo
Ohh how you plunge right into the sharpened edge of the deep end where the bleeding of poetry and unmitigated begging for all that a particular heart may desire trickles into full streaming. It's within the vortex of a searing metaphor that sometimes truth can be cleverly buried, or tied up and gagged, unable to speak the thoughts that permission hasn't be given, hence not allowed.... *wink
Your ability to recognize the abundant and significant importance that a writer can apply to a particular piece of art /writing is epically uncanny. My heart pumps in reverence - 🙏
Thank you for sharing (please never stop) your very amazing, astute and mind blowing insights with me. You allow me to unfurl my sense of constant self protection .... to just breathe.
Unbelievably precious , is that rarity.
Deepest gratitude - 💙
🌹 - B
xoxo
10th Dec 2021 3:32am
(The accompanying picture looks like my step mom. She was a mess, and dad loved her!)
So okay, damn, wanna wrestle? This is both an aggressive poem and yet defensive too. The ending is especially brutally perfect and very effective. I love it.
What I gather is two people trading scars so to speak, yet you're still apprehensive even as they lay theirs bare.
Like an okay, with a warning. I kept reading it over again, because of the push-pull it creates.
Killer job!
So okay, damn, wanna wrestle? This is both an aggressive poem and yet defensive too. The ending is especially brutally perfect and very effective. I love it.
What I gather is two people trading scars so to speak, yet you're still apprehensive even as they lay theirs bare.
Like an okay, with a warning. I kept reading it over again, because of the push-pull it creates.
Killer job!
12th Dec 2021 11:25am
Hey there :)
I am sorry I'm late replying.... been a harsh few days. Thanks for the absolutely killer comments, you're amazing at leaving them and I truly appreciate it, S.
I actually would be hell to wrestle as I sometimes like to play a little dirty.... heh heh heh Mwahahahaha (evil laugh!) 😈 .... In all seriousness, I do have an existing affinity for being pinned, can't help my honesty! So exhilarating thoughts..... haha... Ohh naughty Blue!
You definitely got the sense of it... it's also about not realizing in full, the extent in which those scars needed to be bled, (metaphorically) until meeting someone who understood exactly what that meant, seeing her desperate need.... because they too were made of something similar themselves... perhaps part of their version of a kind of Ying and Yang.... if that makes sense?!?
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading, it makes my sadness these past few days feel less heavy.
Very much obliged, dear poet 🙏
Until next time,
🌹 - B
x
I am sorry I'm late replying.... been a harsh few days. Thanks for the absolutely killer comments, you're amazing at leaving them and I truly appreciate it, S.
I actually would be hell to wrestle as I sometimes like to play a little dirty.... heh heh heh Mwahahahaha (evil laugh!) 😈 .... In all seriousness, I do have an existing affinity for being pinned, can't help my honesty! So exhilarating thoughts..... haha... Ohh naughty Blue!
You definitely got the sense of it... it's also about not realizing in full, the extent in which those scars needed to be bled, (metaphorically) until meeting someone who understood exactly what that meant, seeing her desperate need.... because they too were made of something similar themselves... perhaps part of their version of a kind of Ying and Yang.... if that makes sense?!?
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading, it makes my sadness these past few days feel less heavy.
Very much obliged, dear poet 🙏
Until next time,
🌹 - B
x
13th Dec 2021 9:02pm
You really penned a classic delivery with introspection for this subject. It's sounds beautiful, vintage and terrifying all at the same time.
Phenomenal work Blue.
Phenomenal work Blue.
Thanks for stopping by and leaving me your thoughts, Walter. Yep, probably a little of all three plus a high dose of raging desire and or blind passion.... lol...
You're a wonderful visit, that I always look forward to.
Very much obliged, my friend 🙏
🌹 - B
You're a wonderful visit, that I always look forward to.
Very much obliged, my friend 🙏
🌹 - B
17th Dec 2021 1:45pm
As I don my leather gloves, in preparation to relieve the pent-up pressure you suffer. The remaining subtle marks on your pale skin, the tell-tale evidence of a successful liberation from your libidinous suffering.
17th Dec 2021 2:26pm
*Cheshire cat smile*
My skin sparks like a live wire, in anticipation... you briefly catch the look on my face as I quickly look over my shoulder.... the remnants of that cat-like smile still recognizable... as my chameleon tongue slowly licks my lips, in ready.
......
🌹
My skin sparks like a live wire, in anticipation... you briefly catch the look on my face as I quickly look over my shoulder.... the remnants of that cat-like smile still recognizable... as my chameleon tongue slowly licks my lips, in ready.
......
🌹
