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My simple abode
Oh, how I like the night
My piercing longing,
In the light of those distant stars
I love her simple peace ...
And the silence that spread
Among the brooding shadows -
She crept today
With her invisible step ...
So eternally beautiful
In the night flickering of lights,
Where darkness plays
In my simple abode ..
My piercing longing,
In the light of those distant stars
I love her simple peace ...
And the silence that spread
Among the brooding shadows -
She crept today
With her invisible step ...
So eternally beautiful
In the night flickering of lights,
Where darkness plays
In my simple abode ..
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Re. My simple abode
17th Nov 2021 9:11pm
Lovely write, sad read read. So gentle the need for a safe place. A quiet place
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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17th Nov 2021 9:29pm
That is so true, it can be so difficult to find a quiet place sometimes - certainly not from your own thoughts. Still we all need that safe and quiet place of reflection. This one is multi-faceted. Although there is an angle of sadness, there is also the peace, quiet, and passion to be found in the night. :) 🌃💖
Thank you for the love and light! I really appreciate your reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you for the love and light! I really appreciate your reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
17th Nov 2021 9:35pm
When you find that moment of quietude whether inside you or a place, you submerge yourself with peace...beautiful xo
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17th Nov 2021 10:05pm
Definitely, I do adore the night for it's moments of quietude and creativity, as well as the peace and escape I can find in night activities also. ;) I am really glad you found it beautiful. 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
17th Nov 2021 10:13pm
Haunting and sublimely beautiful...
Love the b/w photo
Wonderful flow of words
Don't tell anyone but I'm giving you a RL
BIG LIKE
RL YO
Love the b/w photo
Wonderful flow of words
Don't tell anyone but I'm giving you a RL
BIG LIKE
RL YO
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17th Nov 2021 10:36pm
I do love the description of haunting, that always feels so peaceful to me; like a graveyard. :p And I love black and white photography (hey I did a piece on that a while back) and this picture I felt captured the quiet reflection while also suggestive of other night activities where I find peace as well. I am so happy you like the flow and don't worry your 'not so secret' secret is safe with me. Love the BIG LIKE.🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
17th Nov 2021 11:14pm
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18th Nov 2021 00:12am
Absolutely, it can be so challenging to find peace and quiet sometimes Francisco but it's so important. 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
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Re: Re. My simple abode
18th Nov 2021 00:22am
I am so happy you found it lovely and liked it even if there is some sadness to be found in those quiet places too. Still I need that sacred-secret place even more these days as I try to reconcile things to come. I do love the night and I wanted to express that as one of my sacred places where I go to find quiet, creativity, or partake in other activities to clear my mind. :) 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
17th Nov 2021 11:23pm
hello beautiful Kristina I feel the deep passion that stirred you while you reflected
so divinely lovely is that moment a deep feeling so satisfying...
great write beautiful poetess💕
so divinely lovely is that moment a deep feeling so satisfying...
great write beautiful poetess💕
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18th Nov 2021 00:48am
Hey Brenda! I always love to hear from you, it means so much to me. Your words are an inspiration and I am so happy you could feel the deep passion with me and appreciate this reflection and the night with me too. 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
17th Nov 2021 11:25pm
Love brooding shadows
Uneasy sexuality burns here
That's my kind of woman
Picture is moody
Dig that
Uneasy sexuality burns here
That's my kind of woman
Picture is moody
Dig that
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18th Nov 2021 00:49am
I am so glad you love the brooding shadows in this, me too. Oh yes! the uneasy sexuality burns deep in me and I felt the picture helped to capture that. I love that you dig it. 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
18th Nov 2021 00:21am
A perfect poem, deep, evocative, moving, hypnotic, and beautiful. A magical read that leaves me yearning to be more than I am.
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18th Nov 2021 1:02am
A deer in the headlights my dear Shaman. I am speechless. Perhaps that was your plan... ;) And perhaps it was my plan to hypnotize you with magic to get this wonderful comment. I always want to keep you yearning and to inspire with passion. :) 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
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18th Nov 2021 1:22am
There are depths within you as deep as the sea and just as vast. It would take lifetimes to just touch the surface of the hidden dangers lurking in below your surface. [Yes I am working on a poem; Yes you are the prompt; And yes, every thing I just said is still true. Peace.
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18th Nov 2021 1:29am
You tease, you definitely have my attention. I am so looking forward to seeing what is produced from this prompt. ;)
Re. My simple abode
18th Nov 2021 1:31am
This is so haunting for me.
The silence that spreads. Invisible footsteps.
Also, the naked vulnerability this picture depicts is so striking. The mirror held my attention.
She's alone and hugging herself but - maybe - also - glancing at her reflection. It makes me wonder
what she's thinking about in that moment. I know this is about peace but I'm also getting a lot of
reflection upon herself as well. This is a great piece Kristina. I love it!!
Also love the black and white. Gives it a more authentic, gritty feel.
Amazing amiga:)
The silence that spreads. Invisible footsteps.
Also, the naked vulnerability this picture depicts is so striking. The mirror held my attention.
She's alone and hugging herself but - maybe - also - glancing at her reflection. It makes me wonder
what she's thinking about in that moment. I know this is about peace but I'm also getting a lot of
reflection upon herself as well. This is a great piece Kristina. I love it!!
Also love the black and white. Gives it a more authentic, gritty feel.
Amazing amiga:)
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18th Nov 2021 1:12pm
Hey Adelphina, I guess it is haunting when you say it like that... Don't forget the brooding shadows. ;) But I do love haunting so it just came out that way but hopefully I am haunting you in the best way. ;) You have detailed what I was trying to capture with the picture and this piece so well. It is interesting that you mentioned reflection because I actually meant to include the theme SelfReflection, this is definitely about reflection as you picked up on including the picture with glancing at the mirror. I do love black and white especially with this type of expression. I am so happy you loved it and thought it was great piece. That means so much to me. 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
18th Nov 2021 2:18am
“In the light of those distant stars”
It’s wonderful to dream there and reflect upon everything. I hope you are finding peace throughout 💖
It’s wonderful to dream there and reflect upon everything. I hope you are finding peace throughout 💖
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18th Nov 2021 1:16pm
I love to dream, reflection can be a double edged sword but it is so necessary. There is definitely a peace to be found in those distant stars. I am still searching for it in my self reflection. But always trying to be a better person... I appreciate your feedback so much. :) 🌃💖
And thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
And thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
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Re: Re. My simple abode
18th Nov 2021 11:58pm
Hey Tim! I love it when she creeps in too. And I like that we have more darkness to play in right now... oh how beautiful it is to gaze at the stars. Sometimes I love the silence but so often I am making noise instead. lol Waking up the world at night. :p 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
23rd Nov 2021 4:29pm
I'm loving the themes on this one, especially with Self Discovery. :-)
"With her invisible step ...
So eternally beautiful" not sure why these captured me a little more of my imagination, the vision, the mood you set up in this titillating piece.
Bravo!
"With her invisible step ...
So eternally beautiful" not sure why these captured me a little more of my imagination, the vision, the mood you set up in this titillating piece.
Bravo!
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Re: Re. My simple abode
23rd Nov 2021 8:56pm
Ah yes, the never ending journey of Self Discovery searching for peace in the night, trying to find simplicity in what feels like such a complicated existence sometimes. I am so happy you could join me there for a moment of reflection in my imagination, sharing the vision and mood of this piece. It always makes me happy to see you Wally. You are a gem. 🌃💖
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. xo
Re. My simple abode
16th Dec 2021 9:52am
Dear K,
I loved the underlying safety of lusty loneliness for me in this poem. Not alone, but being alone. There is a comfort in my head that I don’t have to carry the burden of responsibility of being a couple. This write is a marvelous introspection of being by yourself in your own space and I really like it! H🌷
I loved the underlying safety of lusty loneliness for me in this poem. Not alone, but being alone. There is a comfort in my head that I don’t have to carry the burden of responsibility of being a couple. This write is a marvelous introspection of being by yourself in your own space and I really like it! H🌷
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16th Dec 2021 3:38pm
Hey Honoria, it's so great to hear from you. :) I always love how in tune you are and how you are always able to express things so well. I find it so important to have my own space. To be alone with myself free of any other demands. There is so much burden of responsibility that it can be very hard sometimes to find that time but it is vital, at least for me, otherwise I would go even more crazy. :) 🌃💖
Re. My simple abode
17th Dec 2021 1:48pm
The safe quiet nurturing nest that with its peace and isolation allows your mind to wander to other considerations: carnal need, self-reflection, and/or fore-thought. All which you can explore in your simple abode during the peaceful night. Although the peace may not be so quiet. : )
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17th Dec 2021 4:08pm
Perfectly said DaVinci. I love the peace and isolation where my mind can wander sometimes, although it definitely torments me too and I require carnal need to pull me away from those thoughts. But I love exploring... And yes, the 'peace' does get quite loud. lol 🌃💖