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Gothic Girl
She lives in a cemetery
Somehow strange and sad
Her souls leaden ice
Keeps monstrous secrets
And will never let go
Dangerous world of sick visions
Darkness flows like water
All paths guard shadows
And there is no escape
From the world of gentle hell
All curses are stamped
Here is love, Evil is a reward
Somehow strange and sad
Her souls leaden ice
Keeps monstrous secrets
And will never let go
Dangerous world of sick visions
Darkness flows like water
All paths guard shadows
And there is no escape
From the world of gentle hell
All curses are stamped
Here is love, Evil is a reward
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Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 9:03pm
I really feel this one K...I used to hang around in the cemetery in my younger years...maybe I ran into you xo
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 9:20pm
Ah two peas in a pod. I used to hang around the cemeteries when I was growing up in the UK. Got into all sorts of trouble, raising the dead. lol Perhaps we did run into each other. That is why you seem so familiar to me Tim. ;) xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 9:03pm
Soooo love anything Gothic, this is beautifully dark, with a touch of love. Great job git to love a graveyard romp
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 9:23pm
I am here to be your Gothic Girl Ron. Giving you a little love with some beautiful darkness too. Oh, I remember your romp in the graveyard very well. That was some very sexy writing. ;) xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 9:04pm
Righteous Evil
You wear it well
Last line kicks ass
You kick with the best of them
Jaded Like
You wear it well
Last line kicks ass
You kick with the best of them
Jaded Like
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Oh yes! Wearing something skimpy and black with a bit of righteous evil sewn in. Well I am kicking with you so yes I can kick with the best of them PoetSpeak. ;) You know evil and punishment don't you. Loving the jaded Like. Jade is so beautiful... xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 9:18pm
I agree with my amigo PS. Loved the last line.
Evil is a reward.
Wow!!
The pic goes well with the tone of this piece!
Evil is a reward.
Wow!!
The pic goes well with the tone of this piece!
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Hey Adelphina, I always love getting a Wow!! from my girl. ;p Let's get up to some evil together. lol Love and evil always go together don't they. I am glad you thought the pic matched the tone. xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 9:20pm
Re: Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 10:02pm
Hell yes we are! Perhaps we are crazy too but that's the most fun right? And we would look good among the gravestones in all black causing mischief. We could definitely wake the dead. lol Yes, let's go! I love the love NG! xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
11th Nov 2021 10:04pm
But the dark can be beautiful right BP? ;) xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
Hey Relic! it's so good to see you. I often take my sneakers out on the ice for a little skating, well yoga trying to balance without falling maybe. Oh yes, so nice and dark, just like you like it right? xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 00:01am
Do we all live in cemeteries then, always seeking love and always finding hell? What monstrous secrets of yours would be my reward?
There is no darkness without light but there is light without darkness. I am the light the worships darkness while darkness worships the night.
I loved this poem.
There is no darkness without light but there is light without darkness. I am the light the worships darkness while darkness worships the night.
I loved this poem.
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 00:23am
Hey APPS, that is a good question. We are always seeking love and so often finding hell instead. Or perhaps love is hell. Shhhh... I cannot tell you my monstrous secrets - you will have to find out as we go along. Hmmm, but isn't there darkness without light more so than light without darkness. Let's worship the darkness and night together. I loved your comment. ;) xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 1:18am
Oh, child of the night, if there is no good can there be evil? what measurement would be used to define evil if all that existed were malevolence? What about black holes that eat the light yet how many suns exist within to explode in radiance? I worship your darkness but I bring light to balance the scales of creation. Happy hunting and woe to your prey.
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Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 1:19am
Re: Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 1:42am
How often love is expressed in darkness my dear Francisco. I have to keep on writing, if not here then somewhere - perhaps to myself... but I always love your encouragement. xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 1:49am
Hey Rac! it is always so good to see and hear from you. Ah, how the damp and darkness emanates from the soul completely negating the light and embracing you in the beautiful darkness. xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 4:13am
Re: Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 12:26pm
I love getting a Damn from you Remy, but two is even better. That really makes me smile. :) :p xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 5:33am
Dear, Kristina
This is a dark one from a bright poet.
"Her souls leaden ice
Keeps monstrous secrets"
Makes me consider the weight of a lifetime of keeping poisonous secrets. Or the hiding of one's true self. I think we all have monsters that we keep inside.
Thank you for the think❣🌹
Brava sweet Goddess BD💞
This is a dark one from a bright poet.
"Her souls leaden ice
Keeps monstrous secrets"
Makes me consider the weight of a lifetime of keeping poisonous secrets. Or the hiding of one's true self. I think we all have monsters that we keep inside.
Thank you for the think❣🌹
Brava sweet Goddess BD💞
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Hey dearest GW... Perhaps the light needs the darkness; without it, it is incomplete. It is also about past traumas, things that happened in secret but had a profound impact on my life. And also about punishing one's self for these things. There is definitely a weight to the secrets and monsters we keep inside. Got to keep you thinking. xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 6:59pm
Very well written.
I like how you have certain words in bold and the word choice in general. You definitely create a feeling here. Nice write ✍️
I like how you have certain words in bold and the word choice in general. You definitely create a feeling here. Nice write ✍️
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 7:13pm
Hey William! it's so great to hear from you. You make me so happy by commenting on my impatient formatting. :) I always hope it adds something and helps the readability. And I do love creating a feeling; I am so glad you liked it. :) xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
12th Nov 2021 8:03pm
Re. Gothic Girl
14th Nov 2021 7:23am
KX There is so much passion in your dark poetry.
Your black magical brilliance of ink exorcises the passionate dark side of your DUP followers.
You brilliantly evoke a potent imaginative evil experience with this incredible dark write.
You are killing it with this shadowy graveyard smash.
Some might even say that this kind of stirring poetry is a DYING Art.....
Excellent Spill!!!
Your black magical brilliance of ink exorcises the passionate dark side of your DUP followers.
You brilliantly evoke a potent imaginative evil experience with this incredible dark write.
You are killing it with this shadowy graveyard smash.
Some might even say that this kind of stirring poetry is a DYING Art.....
Excellent Spill!!!
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
14th Nov 2021 3:09pm
My passion consumes me in all the things. ;p And I can tell you are the same from your awesome comments and writing. I love evoking the passionate dark side... The ritual of the exorcism is part of the fun. Bringing out your inner demons to play and getting immersed into the darkness as it devours the light and caresses our souls. Ah, the dark serenity of the graveyard beckons to demons at play. The long tombstones like beds among the many altars of the dead waiting for a sacrifice. To dye over and over again buried in each other... xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
17th Nov 2021 2:21pm
Evil is ... beautiful ... just like this write ... well penned dear poetess ... here's to the Goth life ...
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
17th Nov 2021 2:49pm
Hey my beautiful gothic poetess. ;) The darkness can be lovely and sometimes we just need to immerse ourselves in it. I am glad you can see the beauty in this. Hanging out in the graveyard with some blood red wine... Black lace flowing in the night... xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
20th Nov 2021 7:34pm
Definitely a dark write Kristina.
"Her souls leaden ice
Keeps monstrous secrets" conjures up vivid and visceral images.
Nicely done.
"Her souls leaden ice
Keeps monstrous secrets" conjures up vivid and visceral images.
Nicely done.
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
22nd Nov 2021 2:19am
Sometimes I just have to share the darkness of my gothic soul. Perhaps I will share some monstrous secrets with you Wally in the future. Unburden my souls leaden ice. ;) xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
22nd Nov 2021 2:22am
I adore that my words spoke to you sexy Selina. :) I can imagine your darkest corners are beautiful and I want to see all of your most intimate desires behind the secret door. And oh how I wanted to touch you so I am very happy to receive your exhilarating comment. ;) xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
13th Jan 2022 9:56pm
Withdrawal into the darkness, protecting you from the “normalcy” of the light. The light which you perceive to show your flaws. For you feel not normal. The darkness like a cocoon shelter and nourishes you (love). The reward being finding someone similar, or your evil thoughts flourish, or you attract someone sinister that capitalizes on your condition.
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16th Jan 2022 2:43am
I really do love your intuition DaVinci. You lay things out so perfectly. I often withdrawal into the darkness to protect me from the normalcy of the light. The light sure does have a way of judging you and showing your flaws. And I definitely feel not normal... It seems like you know your way around the darkness also. xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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Re. Gothic Girl
8th Aug 2022 8:08am
hey miss KX
stumbled upon this while looking for waterfall
really like this one - right up my dark/bad alley
stumbled upon this while looking for waterfall
really like this one - right up my dark/bad alley
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Re: Re. Gothic Girl
8th Aug 2022 8:17pm
Oh yes! I can see why you like this one. Still hanging out with me in the cemetery. Ah, dye the hair black, some high boots, a black dress, silver pendant and ear rings... Dark make-up around the eyes. Just makes you want to do all kinds of bad things there. You know she wants too. ;) xo 🦇🪦🌙🪦
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9th Aug 2022 2:58pm