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Blood like wax!
The curtain of the night has dropped carelessly,
In the room the air is of a graphite shade
A candle flickers in the twilight, so tenderly,
And orders to pour hot wax
The bed is covered with delicate satin,
Slow blues in the midnight silence
We dilute sex with sandalwood oil,
Today I will ask you, do not rush
Light excitement plays in the body,
Breathing is warm, carnal desire in the eyes
The touch so slowly fade away,
And the moisture of desires on our lips
With your eyes you draw patterns on the body,
And the curls gently fall on the chest
Today we have any open spaces before us,
I want to fly, dying, ... drown
The convergence of bodies, and the crossing of arms,
And the smells of our crazy cocktail
With you we are shadows, an exciting sound,
And the bed is shading with moon reflections
Touching the atlas, I feel cold,
And at the same time your sensual gaze,
Your kisses, like hundreds of injections,
And drops of wax, like a sweet poison
Dropping hot tears on the skin
On the hollow of the thighs, which is below the navel.
I feel sweet and painful, I ask for more doses,
Let it freeze, kissing casually on the side
The breath is hot, the blood boils,
I burn with desire, like a candle
I already feel the pulsations everywhere,
You enter resiliently, whispering something to me
The movements are smooth, but all the way,
With a holding of breath in our chest
Pupils from madness, like lakes,
Drink me with your rain
Clutching the sheet with excitement and passion,
Crazy blood strives to the heights
Inside fills on MAXIMUM, simply,
Slightly retreating, bursts in again
At the peak of bliss, I bite my lips,
And hoarse moans flow into the darkness
All feelings, emotions, walk along the edge,
Come on! I want to taste your taste!
We merge with blood, a love drink,
our bodies are filled with Ether
So gentle, sedate and not at all quick,
Through the veins, like wax, our blood flowed ...
In the room the air is of a graphite shade
A candle flickers in the twilight, so tenderly,
And orders to pour hot wax
The bed is covered with delicate satin,
Slow blues in the midnight silence
We dilute sex with sandalwood oil,
Today I will ask you, do not rush
Light excitement plays in the body,
Breathing is warm, carnal desire in the eyes
The touch so slowly fade away,
And the moisture of desires on our lips
With your eyes you draw patterns on the body,
And the curls gently fall on the chest
Today we have any open spaces before us,
I want to fly, dying, ... drown
The convergence of bodies, and the crossing of arms,
And the smells of our crazy cocktail
With you we are shadows, an exciting sound,
And the bed is shading with moon reflections
Touching the atlas, I feel cold,
And at the same time your sensual gaze,
Your kisses, like hundreds of injections,
And drops of wax, like a sweet poison
Dropping hot tears on the skin
On the hollow of the thighs, which is below the navel.
I feel sweet and painful, I ask for more doses,
Let it freeze, kissing casually on the side
The breath is hot, the blood boils,
I burn with desire, like a candle
I already feel the pulsations everywhere,
You enter resiliently, whispering something to me
The movements are smooth, but all the way,
With a holding of breath in our chest
Pupils from madness, like lakes,
Drink me with your rain
Clutching the sheet with excitement and passion,
Crazy blood strives to the heights
Inside fills on MAXIMUM, simply,
Slightly retreating, bursts in again
At the peak of bliss, I bite my lips,
And hoarse moans flow into the darkness
All feelings, emotions, walk along the edge,
Come on! I want to taste your taste!
We merge with blood, a love drink,
our bodies are filled with Ether
So gentle, sedate and not at all quick,
Through the veins, like wax, our blood flowed ...
Published 8th Nov 2021
| Edited 9th Nov 2021
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8th Nov 2021 9:39pm
Incredible! The desire is deep...your poem exudes radiance from a far reaching place xx
8th Nov 2021 10:10pm
Wow! I am so happy you think it's incredible. That means so much to me. My desire definitely runs very deep and is far reaching into the depths of my mind and elsewhere. I am glad you could travel there with me. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
8th Nov 2021 9:59pm
Beautifully sensual and right to the edge, just to the precise perfect point. Wonderfully written!
NG🌹
NG🌹
8th Nov 2021 10:27pm
I like taking it right to the edge just to the precise point over and over again until there is a magnificent eruption of passion and lust. ;) Generally I try to avoid extreme content but it got flagged anyway. I am so happy you think it was wonderfully written. That means so much to me. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
She doesn't fuck around
What she writes, she does
This is why KristinaX comes to the Chamber
Has the pick of any dungeon
Slaves pulled out of sessions
Half whipped, crying and incomplete
Just so Kristina can have her way
She's part Queen, part masochist
Beyond your nightmares
Living the life
Tempting fate
The finest bdsm specimen here
Do not forsake her
Honor her
Then whip her wildly into disgrace
BL
RL
What she writes, she does
This is why KristinaX comes to the Chamber
Has the pick of any dungeon
Slaves pulled out of sessions
Half whipped, crying and incomplete
Just so Kristina can have her way
She's part Queen, part masochist
Beyond your nightmares
Living the life
Tempting fate
The finest bdsm specimen here
Do not forsake her
Honor her
Then whip her wildly into disgrace
BL
RL
8th Nov 2021 11:29pm
I suppose it shows when you write from experience. ;) I do love the Chamber, having the exclusive lifetime pass and getting the pick of any dungeon is the best. I hate to interrupt any sessions but I have needs. So many needs. lol You have to find some balance; I think part queen, part masochist works well. Always tempting fate. Thank you so much for the honor PS. I am waiting for the hard whipping to follow... Loving the Big Like. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
9th Nov 2021 3:13am
Lots of heat in this KristinaX!!!
Love the blood and wax.
You write this so well.
I was totally immersed in your world for a minute.
Thank you:)
Love the blood and wax.
You write this so well.
I was totally immersed in your world for a minute.
Thank you:)
9th Nov 2021 12:45pm
Hey! ;) I wanted to totally immerse you with me into my world Adelphina. Hot wax certainly gets the blood flowing and I am so happy we could feel the heat together. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
9th Nov 2021 4:36am
You are hearts are one and you are enjoying the orgasmic bliss ride. Keep on writing.
Yes, merging with one heart is a beautiful thing. Always enjoying the orgasmic bliss ride... I love the encouragement. :) xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
9th Nov 2021 4:58am
Hey Remy! I am so happy you liked it. The second to last stanza is a favorite for me as well. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
9th Nov 2021 1:45pm
always.... i have to stroll down to comment.
coming late to such a party.
vivid,
electrifying your words.
intensifying that wax,
making it so eager to run.
exciting, you always make me want to read.
coming late to such a party.
vivid,
electrifying your words.
intensifying that wax,
making it so eager to run.
exciting, you always make me want to read.
9th Nov 2021 2:55pm
You are never late mystic.
I always love it when you join the party.
Oh the feeling of hot wax as it runs down the skin.
Blazing a hot tingling trail, seeking....
Pain and pleasure...
I love exciting so you want to read. :) xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
I always love it when you join the party.
Oh the feeling of hot wax as it runs down the skin.
Blazing a hot tingling trail, seeking....
Pain and pleasure...
I love exciting so you want to read. :) xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
9th Nov 2021 7:35pm
Dear, Kristina
I am a candle fan, and especially scented candles. I've never worn one though😜 The image shows that wax can be highy erotic apparel. This is a sexy, romantic piece. I find this passage beautifully poetic and captivating,
"We dilute sex with sandalwood oil,"
And you can probably guess, this passage is' to me, a true tingle-maker,
"And the smells of our crazy cocktail"
Brava, sweet goddess, BD❣🌹
I am a candle fan, and especially scented candles. I've never worn one though😜 The image shows that wax can be highy erotic apparel. This is a sexy, romantic piece. I find this passage beautifully poetic and captivating,
"We dilute sex with sandalwood oil,"
And you can probably guess, this passage is' to me, a true tingle-maker,
"And the smells of our crazy cocktail"
Brava, sweet goddess, BD❣🌹
9th Nov 2021 8:28pm
I love candles too; so many wonderful smells, the beautiful dancing flame, and of course for wearing. lol Wax really can make some beautiful patterns on the skin, oh how the feeling of hot wax can be very erotic also. I am so happy you found it sexy and romantic. I love the smell of sandalwood and the feeling of oil. And I do love giving out tingles my dear GW. Been a hard day, thanks for cheering me up some. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
And thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
And thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
9th Nov 2021 9:44pm
There is so much to taking your and enjoying, even sampling each other during these times. To be aware of and enjoy everything, and at the same time be unconscious of all even existence. The eternal downhill side of a rollercoaster while moving at the pace of climbing the other side. There's nothing like those drops to the small of the back and tightening up to your limits on extended pain and pleasure. So tight Lil X, this is another tight erotic one
9th Nov 2021 11:26pm
Oh yes! you definitely get it. To be aware of and enjoy everything while being unconscious to all of the normal existence is the best. The rollercoaster can be so exciting and the momentum cannot be stopped as you go up and down, round and round. Always pushing the limits of pain and pleasure feeling those drops burn, tingle, and tighten. It's great to push and redefine the limits. I love that you think it's another tight one ME. :) xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
10th Nov 2021 3:59pm
Nicely penned dear poetess ... love the flow of this ... vivid ... the give and take of the alternating stanzas ... sensual ... yet searing ... like hot candle wax ...
10th Nov 2021 5:43pm
Hey beautiful poetess! I love that you like the flow, imagery, and the give and take in this one. Oh how that searing candle wax awakens the senses. It can be very sensual indeed. Burning passions come in many forms. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
10th Nov 2021 4:42pm
OMG. This...
There were so many lines that were like fire and flame "The convergence of bodies" the visual and palpable heat rising from the page.
OMG. This...
Well done Kx
There were so many lines that were like fire and flame "The convergence of bodies" the visual and palpable heat rising from the page.
OMG. This...
Well done Kx
10th Nov 2021 5:54pm
Hell yes! I love the OMG... and lighting a flame that burns deep into the page. A lovely convergence of bodies in pain and pleasure. Creating our own heat that keeps the wax running through the veins like beautiful blue flames... Did I say I love the OMG! ;) Your comment definitely made me smile Wally. Thank you. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
And thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
And thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
12th Nov 2021 7:59pm
This is very visceral and hot 🥵
I really like your style!
You manage to the reader turned on all the while providing a deep pool of very poetic writing to delve into. Good work!
I really like your style!
You manage to the reader turned on all the while providing a deep pool of very poetic writing to delve into. Good work!
12th Nov 2021 8:14pm
This one encompasses a lot of heat from inside and out. It comes from a deeply sensual and passionate place. Feeling the hot wax as it sears and tingles on the skin and you take this journey with me through all of the glorious pleasure and pain that ensue. I am so happy you were able to delve into my writing and like the style William. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
12th Nov 2021 11:20pm
Touching the atlas, I feel cold,
And at the same time your sensual gaze,
Your kisses, like hundreds of injections,
And drops of wax, like a sweet poison
My favorite part of the poem
GOD BLESS YOU GIRL
NEW EROTIC POETRY COMING SOON
?????
And at the same time your sensual gaze,
Your kisses, like hundreds of injections,
And drops of wax, like a sweet poison
My favorite part of the poem
GOD BLESS YOU GIRL
NEW EROTIC POETRY COMING SOON
?????
12th Nov 2021 11:52pm
Hey my dear Trome, it is so good to see you. I can feel your sensual gaze as you create more erotic poetry. Wax molding us into something searing and beautiful, words flowing like a sweet poison. I am so looking forward to the new erotic poetry. ;) xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
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14th Nov 2021 3:34pm
I love to pull you in and immerse you in the imagery of it all. ;) The magnificent collision of pleasure and pain exploding into chaos. Filled with passion and lust, caught up in the journey seeking new experiences. Your accidental alliteration is great. ;) And I definitely love having caught you up in my grasp for a moment Ted. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
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15th Nov 2021 10:28pm
Hey Selina, I am so thrilled to have given you some excitement with this one. I can be quite intense. You will see that sometimes. lol And I am really happy you liked it. Okay jasmine it is. I will light candles for you. . ;) <3 <3 xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts.
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18th Nov 2021 00:23am
An erotic thought beautifully crafted with dark feelings and to express them in a darling way. I love the tittle Wax and Blood. I sketch of your deep desire to portray in words only you can do it. I have played wax game with a lady. we used to switch. It her passion without pain just a tease.
Exotically yours
Exotically yours
18th Nov 2021 1:32am
Hi Kristopher, I love that you found it beautifully crafted; and I am smiling so much that you feel my dark feelings in a darling way. I find that adorable. :) My desires definitely run deep and I am glad I could share them with you. Ah the searing pain and pleasure of wax and switch games is definitely something to experience. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
18th Nov 2021 4:37am
Hello Kristina,
Thank you for your appreciation and sharing your thoughts.Of course, searing pain is pleasure within us. Yes. we had switching games of wax, chimes, flowers, singing balls etc. I hope we can cross our path somewhere to share more. oxoxooxox
Thank you for your appreciation and sharing your thoughts.Of course, searing pain is pleasure within us. Yes. we had switching games of wax, chimes, flowers, singing balls etc. I hope we can cross our path somewhere to share more. oxoxooxox
12th May 2022 4:19pm
Hey there KS... I am so sorry for the very late reply. It has been a very challenging year and so I have not been around here much. I need this type of pain to take my mind away. ;) wax, chimes, flowers, singing balls, oh how I love the variety and the intensity of feeling. It's so lovely to share.... xoxo 🕯️🩸⛓️🕯️🩸⛓️
