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God of Pain
I call him the God of Pain.
And bow before him.
Today the whole bed is covered in blood
After all, he loves to play with fate.
Play with the fate of Other people.
I measure the pain drop by drop
Bloody stains on the sheets.
I don't like to hide behind a gag
Begging cries for mercy
And to continue languid sighs ...
Yes, call Hell a fiend
But I have nowhere to run.
Pain, screams, tempted moan,
And weak resistance ...
Night fell and neon
Spilled a transparent glow ...
Well, what then? Call him a God!
As long as I hear the beating of hearts
While your soul is like frost
Doesn't melt from hot hands.
You can think whatever you want.
And to understand everything in its own way.
But to be with me is to be vicious,
And this I just need to accept.
And bow before him.
Today the whole bed is covered in blood
After all, he loves to play with fate.
Play with the fate of Other people.
I measure the pain drop by drop
Bloody stains on the sheets.
I don't like to hide behind a gag
Begging cries for mercy
And to continue languid sighs ...
Yes, call Hell a fiend
But I have nowhere to run.
Pain, screams, tempted moan,
And weak resistance ...
Night fell and neon
Spilled a transparent glow ...
Well, what then? Call him a God!
As long as I hear the beating of hearts
While your soul is like frost
Doesn't melt from hot hands.
You can think whatever you want.
And to understand everything in its own way.
But to be with me is to be vicious,
And this I just need to accept.
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Re. God of Pain
28th Oct 2021 10:05pm
Unleashed and unadultered with the pain is to free one self...thrilling release kx
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Re: Re. God of Pain
28th Oct 2021 10:14pm
The marks on the body are a delicate aftertaste of pain ...
Pain is the most honest passion. Definitely occupies the mind and soul.
I love 'thrilling' and 'release' Tim. ;) 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
Pain is the most honest passion. Definitely occupies the mind and soul.
I love 'thrilling' and 'release' Tim. ;) 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
Re. God of Pain
28th Oct 2021 10:19pm
Some find peace in pain. It settles the chaos in there life
Great write
Love and light
Ron x
Great write
Love and light
Ron x
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28th Oct 2021 10:26pm
That's so true, ironically physical pain can definitely distract from mental pain. This can be enough to seek it out and settle the chaos at least for a little while. I am really happy you think it's a great write and understood. Love and light back at ya. 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
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He owns you, he’s your God, enjoy that you have no where to run. It burns and I like the heat 🔥
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28th Oct 2021 10:31pm
Oh definitely, you must simply bow and accept your fate because there is definitely no where to run and even if you could, you would still stay... Just bringing some heat back to you NightGoddess, because you have lots! ;) I do like burning. 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
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28th Oct 2021 10:34pm
Re. God of Pain
28th Oct 2021 10:25pm
Some talk the talk
Others walk the walk
You're definitely the real deal in the world of pain
I've read enough to know
Nothing satisfies until you've gone too far
Enough said
Except
BRAVO
BIG LIKE
AWESOME PIC
RL JUSTIFICATION
Others walk the walk
You're definitely the real deal in the world of pain
I've read enough to know
Nothing satisfies until you've gone too far
Enough said
Except
BRAVO
BIG LIKE
AWESOME PIC
RL JUSTIFICATION
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Ah, talk is cheap. ;) I can be very direct and definitely a off the beaten path girl. My relationship with pain would require some history but it would explain a lot. And oh yes! always pushing the limits to see what's next. Loving the BIG LIKE and RL, thank you! 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
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Re: Re. God of Pain
28th Oct 2021 11:01pm
I am all about getting the mind and blood flowing in the right direction so I really love your comment BP. I love stirring things and seeing what comes up. 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
Re. God of Pain
28th Oct 2021 11:40pm
The last stanza is A+ and brings an amazing journey to the portals of what's next. Hugs and peace, (O)
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29th Oct 2021 2:01am
Always striving for an A+ from you Oral! ;) What's next, ah yes! that is always the question isn't it. There is always much to be discovered in this journey and the portals. Just wait and see. Hugs... :) 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
Re. God of Pain
28th Oct 2021 11:44pm
Why the delicious pain only to be silenced, it takes away from the caring of both. She that needs oh so much to give and take in this way and Me that craves the deliciousness of the screams, whimpers, and moans. Both on a collision course of satisfaction for both parties, so tight Lil X. Seriously tight, it makes us think naughty I
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29th Oct 2021 2:02am
Do not silence the delicious pain, let it be music to your ears and do not take away the care Oh yes! she has needs both to give and take and this will definitely played out in screams, whimpers, and moans. Satisfaction is guaranteed. I like getting the naughty gears grinding. I am so happy you found it seriously tight my dear I_IS_ME. :) 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
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29th Oct 2021 1:43am
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29th Oct 2021 2:04am
Oh definitely! always eager and ready to unleash the fun... Thanks for the encouragement as always Francisco. 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
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Re: Re. God of Pain
29th Oct 2021 12:33pm
Ah yes, to truly live it and become immersed in the possibilities is to move far beyond the superficial or hang ups. It takes a lot of trust and understanding. There is a give and take from both sides to fill those needs completely. It is truly a very psychological experience and definitely not one that buying a toy can fulfill. It's not for everyone but for those who choose it, it can truly open up and transport the mind and body to a new world. Never enough BM... I always want to hear more. 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2021 10:19am
The pursuit of self-knowledge and achievement of it is what sets this apart, and makes it memorable--
The willingness to contend with oneself--
The comes to fruition when the speaker discloses:
But to be with me is to be vicious,
And this I just need to accept.
Couched in the confrontation with the other, the sexually sadist other--
NIce imagery of neon and frost on the soul--
Who is more demanding, the sadist, or the masochist who demands brutality?
Enjoyed!
The willingness to contend with oneself--
The comes to fruition when the speaker discloses:
But to be with me is to be vicious,
And this I just need to accept.
Couched in the confrontation with the other, the sexually sadist other--
NIce imagery of neon and frost on the soul--
Who is more demanding, the sadist, or the masochist who demands brutality?
Enjoyed!
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29th Oct 2021 12:42pm
I think continuing to pursue self-knowledge and other things is how we keep growing as a person. And it leads to self discovery of our own personal evolving needs which is vital. For me, I have a need to get out of my head. To be consumed with passion and to feel the intensity of my body is how I do that. Who is more demanding is a great question, perhaps it is the masochist whose needs and demands can be more intense. It can definitely take 'work' to satisfy the needs and demands on both sides but it's definitely worth it. But I think that like with most things, the answer is both at different times and/or in different ways. 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
Re. God of Pain
30th Oct 2021 1:07am
Hot Damn K-XXX!!!
Some believe that life begins by walking the thin line of pleasure and pain.
Bite marks, scratches, and bruising between ''Consenting'' partners can be a great liberating experience.
A Testament to Pure TRUST!
A rough and tough sexual rumble can help release tension and ignite passion.
There can also be an incredible amount of shared physical and mental satisfaction with this utmost TRUST.
KX your no holds barred, explicit, and extreme BDSM writes are all collectively Brilliant,
They all should ''Command'' an official licensing document.
Let's call it a ''Restraining'' Order. lol
I must also add that they are all equally Brilliant so let's just say that all of your ''Submissions " end in a ''TIE'' in my humble opinion.
I am very hopeful that all this blood on the sheets is shed for true love and alas not in just done in Vein, lol.
KX Superb Dark Poetry !!!
Some believe that life begins by walking the thin line of pleasure and pain.
Bite marks, scratches, and bruising between ''Consenting'' partners can be a great liberating experience.
A Testament to Pure TRUST!
A rough and tough sexual rumble can help release tension and ignite passion.
There can also be an incredible amount of shared physical and mental satisfaction with this utmost TRUST.
KX your no holds barred, explicit, and extreme BDSM writes are all collectively Brilliant,
They all should ''Command'' an official licensing document.
Let's call it a ''Restraining'' Order. lol
I must also add that they are all equally Brilliant so let's just say that all of your ''Submissions " end in a ''TIE'' in my humble opinion.
I am very hopeful that all this blood on the sheets is shed for true love and alas not in just done in Vein, lol.
KX Superb Dark Poetry !!!
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Hey Feet! ooooo I love 'Hot Damn' and always XXX. I would have to agree that life begins on the fine line of pleasure and pain. It is such an interesting paradox and by denying one or the other we very much limit the experience. It certainly can be a beautiful and definitely gets me out of my head. I love some rough and tumble and like you said there is an incredible amount of trust that goes into it. But bite marks, scratches, and bruising can all make for wonderful art can't they. ;) I am so happy you can appreciate and explain what I am trying to capture so perfectly in your wonderful comment.
I am always seeking the brutal honesty in BDSM writes and pushing the limits of such pursuits. But I am a deer in the headlights among your wonderful compliments. I love commanding and restraining with my words and actions. You truly leave me at a loss for words and I always adore your masterful puns. I love that you think my 'submission' is brilliant. It is such a beautiful thing to be able to submit completely. To give yourself over to skillful hands that will mold and shape you taking you in and delivering you. It is never in vein my deer Feet! :p 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
I am always seeking the brutal honesty in BDSM writes and pushing the limits of such pursuits. But I am a deer in the headlights among your wonderful compliments. I love commanding and restraining with my words and actions. You truly leave me at a loss for words and I always adore your masterful puns. I love that you think my 'submission' is brilliant. It is such a beautiful thing to be able to submit completely. To give yourself over to skillful hands that will mold and shape you taking you in and delivering you. It is never in vein my deer Feet! :p 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
Re. God of Pain
30th Oct 2021 9:03pm
It’s highly erotic and dark, in the realm where a sub enjoys the pain.
It reminds me of Anne Rice’s Sleeping Beauty series.
Well done
It reminds me of Anne Rice’s Sleeping Beauty series.
Well done
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1st Nov 2021 11:11am
I do love the dark, and the erotic, so what better combination. This is definitely the realm where the pain is liberating, exciting, and enjoyable.
Anne Rice, damn right! Now that is a comparison I can definitely get behind. ;) Love it! 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
Thanks Wally, you are always such a huge encouragement for me.
Anne Rice, damn right! Now that is a comparison I can definitely get behind. ;) Love it! 🩸⛓️🔗🩸
Thanks Wally, you are always such a huge encouragement for me.