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Listen and Breathe
![Visual Poem Listen and Breathe](/images/uploads/poemimages/431953.jpg?1633828042)
Written by
wallyroo92
Published 10th Oct 2021
Author's Note
For the Left Hand...Right a Rondelet comp
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Re. Listen and Breathe
10th Oct 2021 2:32am
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22nd Oct 2021 2:49am
Re. Listen and Breathe
10th Oct 2021 2:33am
Dear W,
Hands down love the uplifting message of this poem. Really lovely and great background supporting the write. All the best for the comp. H🌷
Hands down love the uplifting message of this poem. Really lovely and great background supporting the write. All the best for the comp. H🌷
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Re: Re. Listen and Breathe
22nd Oct 2021 2:51am
Thank you Honoria (and thanks for the RL as well). Writing in this form was a new experience for me but I just felt it had to go with an image.
Glad you liked it
Glad you liked it
Re. Listen and Breathe
13th Oct 2021 11:19pm
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22nd Oct 2021 2:51am
Re. Listen and Breathe
22nd Oct 2021 3:03am
good evening dearest Wally this is beautiful
our control over things are slightly delusional
we can do so much but in the end the spirit around us
is in control we will come into an understanding
I will do my best to stay centered and breath....
thank you for this write 💗
our control over things are slightly delusional
we can do so much but in the end the spirit around us
is in control we will come into an understanding
I will do my best to stay centered and breath....
thank you for this write 💗
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Re: Re. Listen and Breathe
29th Oct 2021 4:06pm
Dear Crimsin, thank you very much for your kind words and your RL addition.
Yes, the spirit around is in control, we just have to listen carefully (and breathe).
Yes, the spirit around is in control, we just have to listen carefully (and breathe).