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I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
Truth is
I'm a dirty dog
Feral too
Eating out of garbage cans
Looking up your dress
I don't give a rat's ass about PC
Politically Correct butthole
My attitude sucks and so do you
Translation: NO FILTER ( NF )
If you're sick and have a great body
I'll offer to rub vapor rub on your chest
That kind of writing
Can you handle it ?
Or I might just ask you for sexy pics
Bra and panties preferably black
No panties you say
One out of two ain't bad
Send
Bottom line
I don't sleep well
When I don't sleep
You benefit
This is legendary filth
BIG LIKE
END PART ONE
I'm a dirty dog
Feral too
Eating out of garbage cans
Looking up your dress
I don't give a rat's ass about PC
Politically Correct butthole
My attitude sucks and so do you
Translation: NO FILTER ( NF )
If you're sick and have a great body
I'll offer to rub vapor rub on your chest
That kind of writing
Can you handle it ?
Or I might just ask you for sexy pics
Bra and panties preferably black
No panties you say
One out of two ain't bad
Send
Bottom line
I don't sleep well
When I don't sleep
You benefit
This is legendary filth
BIG LIKE
END PART ONE
Author's Note
No problem
Bad attitude
Do me
Bad attitude
Do me
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Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
6th Oct 2021 5:12pm
Crankin' up the charm today, I see! 😉 Sorry to hear about the sleep.
xx
xx
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Re: Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
6th Oct 2021 5:32pm
Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
You dirty dog you... wouldn't have it any other way. My filter is broken too so I really dig this one. That little dog is adorable and he knows how to find a view. Smart. Is that PC? Who knows the goal post keeps changing by the minute. I need some vapor rub, I can handle it. Oh no, pics.. there is a line. lol ;) I don't sleep well either but I get really funny albeit not very PC with no sleep. Part 2 - Anti-Khrist.
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Re: Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
6th Oct 2021 9:52pm
Man, would I love to be that dog. What do you think dogs like to go out for walks so much ??
Surprisingly that picture wasn't hard to find. Lots of other no filter deviants like me exist. We're not PC but you'll never catch us wearing beige either. Fuck beige as I like to say !!
Appreciate the comment Kx, vapor rubs are hot and I have my Master's degree in them. I sure do love a good rack to attend to.
Looking forward to the Anti-Khrist write
Don't keep me waiting long
Appreciate you
Xx
Surprisingly that picture wasn't hard to find. Lots of other no filter deviants like me exist. We're not PC but you'll never catch us wearing beige either. Fuck beige as I like to say !!
Appreciate the comment Kx, vapor rubs are hot and I have my Master's degree in them. I sure do love a good rack to attend to.
Looking forward to the Anti-Khrist write
Don't keep me waiting long
Appreciate you
Xx
Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
6th Oct 2021 10:14pm
This dirty dog does have silver lining optimism… 😉
But, vapor chest rub could be a win for both sides
This dirty dog is also commanding, probably easily tamed 🪑
With continued lack of sleep we’ll see what “part two” holds
But, vapor chest rub could be a win for both sides
This dirty dog is also commanding, probably easily tamed 🪑
With continued lack of sleep we’ll see what “part two” holds
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Re: Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
6th Oct 2021 10:40pm
This dirty dog doesn't train easily
Bite is bigger than his bark
Totally wayward
Lack of sleep makes him cagey
Some like that....
BIG COMMENT LIKE
Stay tuned....
Bite is bigger than his bark
Totally wayward
Lack of sleep makes him cagey
Some like that....
BIG COMMENT LIKE
Stay tuned....
Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
7th Oct 2021 00:04am
Re: Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
7th Oct 2021 00:23am
Pretty damn dirty Cisco
But I got you on my page and all these pretty women so I'm locked and loaded
Thx brother
But I got you on my page and all these pretty women so I'm locked and loaded
Thx brother
Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
7th Oct 2021 6:50am
Dear PS,
I think this is what makes your poetry standout. You know what you’re about. Straight shooter. Take no prisoners. Admirable. Would we all be so fortunate.
Big Dig!
H🌷
I think this is what makes your poetry standout. You know what you’re about. Straight shooter. Take no prisoners. Admirable. Would we all be so fortunate.
Big Dig!
H🌷
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Re: Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
7th Oct 2021 10:33am
Dear H
I was hoping that message would come through. I just write what comes to me and filter be damned. I'm a wayward minstrel nomad and you're right. Take no prisoners, no prisoners will be taken is certainly a motto I use often. Hunter S. Thompson a personal hero and other renegades as well. Even Glenn Gould who wanted to speed up the music that was 300 years old or something. I'm sure you can relate to living the life. Bob Dylan in the song Absolutely Sweet Marie off the album Blonde on Blonde sang " to live outside the law you must be honest" ... that's me !!
Always a pleasure H !!!
Stay tuned for part 2 and beyond
Thank you
PS
I was hoping that message would come through. I just write what comes to me and filter be damned. I'm a wayward minstrel nomad and you're right. Take no prisoners, no prisoners will be taken is certainly a motto I use often. Hunter S. Thompson a personal hero and other renegades as well. Even Glenn Gould who wanted to speed up the music that was 300 years old or something. I'm sure you can relate to living the life. Bob Dylan in the song Absolutely Sweet Marie off the album Blonde on Blonde sang " to live outside the law you must be honest" ... that's me !!
Always a pleasure H !!!
Stay tuned for part 2 and beyond
Thank you
PS
Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
Anonymous
8th Oct 2021 11:14pm
I've thought about this poem a lot, since I first read it, days prior.
Like other people noted, the directness & the frankness of expressed desire is what works.
Thinking about it culturally, it harkens back to the post-punk of the 80s.
Like the Descendants, "I'm a Pervert."
I wonder how that plays now, in terms of millennials, zoomers, etc.
That's one layer of...distortion, or a filter.
There's also the social media filter, in particular the anonymity. (I'm not anonymous, but that's my decision; a lot of folks on here are).
And then there's the lockdown filter.
All these filters influencing how the words and attitude...let's say, "exist," for lack of a better term.
Another thing that's been on my mind, thinking about this poem, was a poem that got...well, in the vernacular of the Pinchet-era in Argentina, "Disappeared."
Arguably, a poet who didn't exhibit a certain...mandatory filter.
And, yes, sleep deprivation influences behavior.
But there's a heavyweight fight this weekend and the bodybuilding community is going to crown Mr. Olympia (the only demographic that is, as a rule, crazier and more foolish than poets, bodybuilders).
As the Jews say, "Enough is enough, already."
Food for thought.
Enjoyed!
Like other people noted, the directness & the frankness of expressed desire is what works.
Thinking about it culturally, it harkens back to the post-punk of the 80s.
Like the Descendants, "I'm a Pervert."
I wonder how that plays now, in terms of millennials, zoomers, etc.
That's one layer of...distortion, or a filter.
There's also the social media filter, in particular the anonymity. (I'm not anonymous, but that's my decision; a lot of folks on here are).
And then there's the lockdown filter.
All these filters influencing how the words and attitude...let's say, "exist," for lack of a better term.
Another thing that's been on my mind, thinking about this poem, was a poem that got...well, in the vernacular of the Pinchet-era in Argentina, "Disappeared."
Arguably, a poet who didn't exhibit a certain...mandatory filter.
And, yes, sleep deprivation influences behavior.
But there's a heavyweight fight this weekend and the bodybuilding community is going to crown Mr. Olympia (the only demographic that is, as a rule, crazier and more foolish than poets, bodybuilders).
As the Jews say, "Enough is enough, already."
Food for thought.
Enjoyed!
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Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
9th Oct 2021 00:07am
I really appreciate the read and comment Mark
Feels like a PARSONS AWARD....
This one came to me and it was like a house on fire. Wrote it fast and didn't look back.... I like direct and I think I got it here. Z,ot of fun to write. Was hoping for some PM bra and panties combos but still waiting
Thanks so much
Feels like a PARSONS AWARD....
This one came to me and it was like a house on fire. Wrote it fast and didn't look back.... I like direct and I think I got it here. Z,ot of fun to write. Was hoping for some PM bra and panties combos but still waiting
Thanks so much
Re. I don't have a filter nor do I want one .... ( NF ) Part 1
20th Oct 2021 8:21pm
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20th Oct 2021 8:27pm