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My body needs you, can you hear it calling (Reposted)
My body needs you, can you hear it calling?
Let us pretend for little while that you and I belong to each other
just lay your head on my pillow, make believe you love me just one time,
while night is still upon us, our bodies will commence a motion so sublime.
Hold your strong body close to mine, whisper things I need to hear,
capture me in your arms and hold me, hold me near.
Tomorrow the separation will inevitably come,
but here and now, let our bodies cease to be two
as they become one. The need overtakes me
in powerful desire, shamelessly it fuels my internal fire,
as I gather you deeper inside my body,
the world fades away in this lustful reality.
My body needs you, can you hear what it is saying…
Someone once said “everyone needs something or someone to love”,
so for this one night let us be what we each requires.
Mmm… make love to me in all the ways you fantasized,
knowing that when the candles are spent,
the morning will have arrived.
Baby… hold me close in your powerful embrace
while our heartbeats keep cadence and pace,
to our summit we gallop unchecked,
looking deeply into your eyes,
in lotus fashion your lap I ride;
at this moment in time, you are my rescuing champion
and I am your prize.
Ahhh… I arch my body while your hands
keep us in intimate contact,
encircling me passionately,
holding firmly the small of my back,
tears of ecstasy roll down my face;
it has been tooooo long since I felt this way.
Hold me baby, hold me close,
as if you never want to let go,
let this be a night to remember,
the one that will comfort us
in the winter chills of November.
My body needs you, can you hear what it is deprived of…
Sept 2011(re-posted Feb.2012)
Gypsy red
Let us pretend for little while that you and I belong to each other
just lay your head on my pillow, make believe you love me just one time,
while night is still upon us, our bodies will commence a motion so sublime.
Hold your strong body close to mine, whisper things I need to hear,
capture me in your arms and hold me, hold me near.
Tomorrow the separation will inevitably come,
but here and now, let our bodies cease to be two
as they become one. The need overtakes me
in powerful desire, shamelessly it fuels my internal fire,
as I gather you deeper inside my body,
the world fades away in this lustful reality.
My body needs you, can you hear what it is saying…
Someone once said “everyone needs something or someone to love”,
so for this one night let us be what we each requires.
Mmm… make love to me in all the ways you fantasized,
knowing that when the candles are spent,
the morning will have arrived.
Baby… hold me close in your powerful embrace
while our heartbeats keep cadence and pace,
to our summit we gallop unchecked,
looking deeply into your eyes,
in lotus fashion your lap I ride;
at this moment in time, you are my rescuing champion
and I am your prize.
Ahhh… I arch my body while your hands
keep us in intimate contact,
encircling me passionately,
holding firmly the small of my back,
tears of ecstasy roll down my face;
it has been tooooo long since I felt this way.
Hold me baby, hold me close,
as if you never want to let go,
let this be a night to remember,
the one that will comfort us
in the winter chills of November.
My body needs you, can you hear what it is deprived of…
Sept 2011(re-posted Feb.2012)
Gypsy red
Published 29th Feb 2012
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29th Feb 2012 8:36pm
as i look at your naturally Beautiful bare vision
my soldier awakens & stands at attention
your deep soft curves ignites passions intuition
as for my fantasies well i have a new invention
well actually it is just a difficult position
that will entirely tingle your frame & keep your face squincing
& on your clit my tongue will do seductive printing
because goodest is a freak...if i forgot to mention....lol
my soldier awakens & stands at attention
your deep soft curves ignites passions intuition
as for my fantasies well i have a new invention
well actually it is just a difficult position
that will entirely tingle your frame & keep your face squincing
& on your clit my tongue will do seductive printing
because goodest is a freak...if i forgot to mention....lol
29th Feb 2012 8:44pm
Well I can say one thing you sure know how to make a lady blush... the graphic nature of the comment is bolder than I am use to my friend. Thank you for the comment.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
29th Feb 2012 8:53pm
ooooooooooo!!!!!!!! that is one amazingly great poem!!!!!!!!!!! itll be going on my reading list!!!!!!!!!
29th Feb 2012 9:18pm
My goodness, everything glows cherry red here (but in a good way), a brave, adroit write on a universally engrossing, but difficult to tackle subject. Well scribed indeed :)
1st Mar 2012 3:34pm
Well isn't this nice, so glad you enjoyed my sensual perspective. It is a hard subject that more often than not crosses into the realms of the lewd and low brow which I care very little for.It is rewarding when a piece is appreciated even though it does not sink to the leachy depths of others. Thank you so much for reading my piece and commenting on it.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
1st Mar 2012 5:54am
Nyce!!! Damn..takes me to a place where I dug deep in a love I had no business diggin in but passion can fuel ice block!!
1st Mar 2012 3:37pm
Than you for the enthusiastic comment, I so appreciate you taking the time to read my piece.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
1st Mar 2012 11:43am
1st Mar 2012 3:39pm
Thank you, it is was a labor of love to carefully choose the words for this piece. Glad you enjoyed it.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
1st Mar 2012 7:09pm
When an angel writes, those of us below can do little more then admire the words! Thanks for giving us a chance to look at your work.
1st Mar 2012 7:39pm
Well hello Jazz, thank you so much for the sweet comment, glad you stopped by to reread my piece.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
2nd Mar 2012 5:28am
The passion is oozing out of the poem, I love the vivid description and the great way it is penned down. ENjoyed reading it.
2nd Mar 2012 1:10pm
You are most welcome, I am very happy you found it to your liking and that you enjoy it, thanks for stopping by to read my piece and leave a comment.
gypsy red
gypsy red
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11th Mar 2012 12:31pm
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