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Write yourself a poem
Write yourself a poem
Shower it with kindness
Colour it with joyous and beautiful words
Make it sound perfect
And every sentence priceless
This is how you'll be remembered
Shout it from the roof tops
Drop it in every open mic
Make them stop and take notice
Let them hear it.
Make it sound titanic
Every second epic
Make yourself immortal
And dance on the shoulder of that stands above all
For this is the beauty within you
Nothing can ever take it from you
Those who hear, will never ignore
For you are perfect in every sense of the word
May they know you
May they celebrate you
How you take pride in your scars
And how you never let struggles of this life let you down
So the day they sink your coffin
And hold a toast to your name
May they smile
Let them accompany you with pride
Let them tell tales of who you were
How much you loved
And how beautiful was your heart
Most importantly how priceless were your scars...
Write yourself a poem
Shower it with kindness
Colour it with joyous and beautiful words
Make it sound perfect
And every sentence priceless
This is how you'll be remembered
Shower it with kindness
Colour it with joyous and beautiful words
Make it sound perfect
And every sentence priceless
This is how you'll be remembered
Shout it from the roof tops
Drop it in every open mic
Make them stop and take notice
Let them hear it.
Make it sound titanic
Every second epic
Make yourself immortal
And dance on the shoulder of that stands above all
For this is the beauty within you
Nothing can ever take it from you
Those who hear, will never ignore
For you are perfect in every sense of the word
May they know you
May they celebrate you
How you take pride in your scars
And how you never let struggles of this life let you down
So the day they sink your coffin
And hold a toast to your name
May they smile
Let them accompany you with pride
Let them tell tales of who you were
How much you loved
And how beautiful was your heart
Most importantly how priceless were your scars...
Write yourself a poem
Shower it with kindness
Colour it with joyous and beautiful words
Make it sound perfect
And every sentence priceless
This is how you'll be remembered
Published 27th Sep 2021
Author's Note
It's up to you how you want to be remembered
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27th Sep 2021 12:29pm
I love the positivity! It bursts off the page...Yessss!!... There's such a wonderful celebratory feel that you evoke, here. The message of self worth and understanding, is clear and concise.... Even our innate darkness, or past mistakes have a place and should be celebrated; Knowing that they only make us stronger in the end.
Great ink, my friend
Enjoyed it - 💙
🌹 - B
Great ink, my friend
Enjoyed it - 💙
🌹 - B
29th Sep 2021 5:21am
I thought i should inject a bit of positivity....
In truth it's just that we as people spend way too much time thinking of things out of our control
And we forget simple things
So let's celebrate life, in its good and bad
Thank you very much
In truth it's just that we as people spend way too much time thinking of things out of our control
And we forget simple things
So let's celebrate life, in its good and bad
Thank you very much
27th Sep 2021 1:15pm
29th Sep 2021 5:22am
27th Sep 2021 10:49pm
Damn PoT, this is truly awesome in every way. Inspires heart and soul. I definitely need to write myself a poem and maybe write one for you too. :)
29th Sep 2021 5:24am
Yes. write yourself a poem, a good one and make is beautiful....
I'll write one too 😜
And thank you very much KX
For stopping by
I'll write one too 😜
And thank you very much KX
For stopping by
28th Sep 2021 1:34am
Such embracing words one needs to read from someone's point of view my South African King, I must certainly bow for the direction of your intellect.
The remembrance of any life is found in his/her daily living.. and the jubilation is found in the passage of that soul's homecoming as in his spiritual resurrection in the evolution of the afterlife. That concept has been a tradition of my ancestral spirituality taught at a very young age within my culture. So many people waste precious time trying to hope for days to come, better days to become better. The day you stand is always the fate for you to be better at. Therefore, when those unplanned or planned moments arises and we are called, we can faithfully look back and be our own testimony and thank the inner person of who we have become, and not fall short of the glory in trying to get there.
In your absence, you are truly missed, however, when you return, you bring such uplifting mental sermons to your canvas for the mind to relish in and ponder... always
The remembrance of any life is found in his/her daily living.. and the jubilation is found in the passage of that soul's homecoming as in his spiritual resurrection in the evolution of the afterlife. That concept has been a tradition of my ancestral spirituality taught at a very young age within my culture. So many people waste precious time trying to hope for days to come, better days to become better. The day you stand is always the fate for you to be better at. Therefore, when those unplanned or planned moments arises and we are called, we can faithfully look back and be our own testimony and thank the inner person of who we have become, and not fall short of the glory in trying to get there.
In your absence, you are truly missed, however, when you return, you bring such uplifting mental sermons to your canvas for the mind to relish in and ponder... always
29th Sep 2021 5:34am
I'm with you there my dear Queen
Today is the testament of yesterday,
So every moment is special and every second count
And so it should be even in our deaths....
To be honest I also hate the coming and going, on/off
Yet I really don't like posting any poem without me feeling it's significance, I'd rather have 5 good poems rather than 500 insignificant ones...
So after a turn, I go back write and Cherry pick which one's I'll upload....
You were missed my Queen...
Thank you very much
Today is the testament of yesterday,
So every moment is special and every second count
And so it should be even in our deaths....
To be honest I also hate the coming and going, on/off
Yet I really don't like posting any poem without me feeling it's significance, I'd rather have 5 good poems rather than 500 insignificant ones...
So after a turn, I go back write and Cherry pick which one's I'll upload....
You were missed my Queen...
Thank you very much
28th Sep 2021 11:58am
29th Sep 2021 5:35am
29th Sep 2021 6:04am
I think you have suggested a way one can make oneself feel better, pick oneself up. Picture I have is of preparing a warm bath of positive words and affirmations to bathe in.
2nd Oct 2021 5:46am
