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The Beating Drum
We must adapt & overcome the humdrum beating inside
Letting no one or anything cause thoughts of suicide
It's cold outside, even in July, when sunshines plentiful
During bumpy rides we must rely on routes that are beautiful
Bountiful with picturesque scenes that are rarely seen
Journeying through muddy waters before ones clean
As we glean the means for persevering dark times
After witnessing an array of things that're heinous crimes
Letting no one or anything cause thoughts of suicide
It's cold outside, even in July, when sunshines plentiful
During bumpy rides we must rely on routes that are beautiful
Bountiful with picturesque scenes that are rarely seen
Journeying through muddy waters before ones clean
As we glean the means for persevering dark times
After witnessing an array of things that're heinous crimes
Published 15th Sep 2021
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15th Sep 2021 10:35pm
The contrast of July sunshine and darkness was effective. Some of your rhymes flow well too. I’d like to see a bit more solid imagery, as I think that would accentuate your message, by giving the reader more of a picture. JMHO.
16th Sep 2021 00:38am
16th Sep 2021 1:17am
Lots of metaphor, but plenty of solid advice. Life presses in on us all and it is sometimes hard to not implode
Good one,Sir Damon
Good one,Sir Damon
16th Sep 2021 12:16pm
18th Sep 2021 11:13am
15th Oct 2021 6:44am
Mental Health is a serious issue in today's times, especially when folks don't have an outlet or have a way to cope.
Thank you sharing.
Thank you sharing.
