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8th Sep 2021 9:08am
8th Sep 2021 9:14am
thanks for the wow....this why i like the senyru/haiku format cause when it iworks it does punch like heavyweight
8th Sep 2021 9:15am
I agree ... they are great when done right ... and you do them so right ...
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8th Sep 2021 1:30pm
The bold really makes the piece come alive. And it does, indeed, punch like a heavyweight. Nicely done.
8th Sep 2021 2:09pm
As one great heavyweight poet once said floats like a butterfly stings like a bee
8th Sep 2021 1:37pm
8th Sep 2021 2:12pm
8th Sep 2021 2:17pm
I was just here, it's fresh. Even though my poems are full of love and happiness, he did end things instantly 4 months ago and leave the country. I never thought he would be back. Again. A third time.
Your punch is indeed, so very palpable, C. So very truly gut aching! What you're able to accomplish within those 17 syllables..... Just, ouch!!
You are positively phenomenal at that ability, dear friend....
The formatting is perfection, too! 👌🏻
Excellently penned
🌹 - 💙
B
You are positively phenomenal at that ability, dear friend....
The formatting is perfection, too! 👌🏻
Excellently penned
🌹 - 💙
B
8th Sep 2021 4:06pm
Bbbbeeeee....
as per usual you extend lovrly cinnents each time . In time i might actually believe i too are a poet of your stature
robot extends a (hug)
gives a🌷
sends a💋
your way .... he always did love the limelight ha ha
as per usual you extend lovrly cinnents each time . In time i might actually believe i too are a poet of your stature
robot extends a (hug)
gives a🌷
sends a💋
your way .... he always did love the limelight ha ha
8th Sep 2021 4:22pm
9th Sep 2021 5:19am
Dear AP,
Dang! This is an arrow of truth right through the heart! Fantastic piece. H🌷
Dang! This is an arrow of truth right through the heart! Fantastic piece. H🌷
9th Sep 2021 9:18pm
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