Long time running -The lost files-

I was kinda hoping you’d publish this one. Call me selfish. I am. 😎

Found the numbers pretty interesting progressing backwards from 2 - 1. Almost as if you don’t wanna get to zero. A story in its own right.

Thank you for sharing.

-M

ahh ground zero, I’ll be back up there soon enough :),

number thing is less exciting, I felt I wrote it backwards. I didn’t want to change it around cos authentic-ness. I think it works, fuck anyone who thinks different.   ...they just don’t get me haha

thanks much for your eyes and words, lady

I like the fast-moving nature of this poem, if that makes sense. It feels like a spurt of action, is very visceral.

the hollowed stoniness:: the inside out  lightness of a nothingness ..feels this in the first stanza..this captured me..cos this exactness is the essence of my nowness too . .you put it your way of masterpoetic that is felt whole yet elusive in the penning ..that you manage to do it so wasy n simplistic as ev Lep..  
 
Loved more the deterministic tone of the S2 opening..the rawness wandering as the innate wilderness..ahh the nomadic universal soul in its languaging flow ..n then but the v.human physicalities in a beautiful vulnerability in those last verses.. you come full round in this ..like a life & beyond ..steering towards infinity ..( & now, the numbering or order of stanzas doesn't matter anymore!) (but the reverse read of stanzas do hav much an ethereal~ spiritual progression from the earthly flesh of matter n so- grounded realities)  ... in all soul wisdom n but a being simple being .for me , this is truth in all pain n light n love n watev it takes.  
 
feels reading you after long..thanks for this .am not here too .but back i feel:) light love ev :)

Ah, the lost files - I want more of these. :) I don't know where last week went either. I think I still have my insides but maybe not. I find myself rushing to the window but sadly I don't where to go from there. Still I have adrenaline and it will carry me somewhere.

Indeed, I felt this Sir.



-Charles

Nice effort

I like the mix of melancholy and humour, which you do very well.