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born of....
Words beckon
beyond
a thin veil
of
billowy
wonder
Jumbled,
foraged for
inspiration
converges
where ink sprawls
abundant creation
This—
my concocted well
where lucid dreams
flap feathered wings
Colors speak
from golden lips
bursting forth
fevered
potent
possibility
luminescent
and
whimsical
O' how sweet
the suffering
that permeates a mind
excavated of soulfulness
to be birthed into being
Creation from
once a nothing
spurred into
beautiful somethings
from a body so keen
that boldness of truth
knows grace itself
In all that aches
a magically exquisite ache
and of hearty strength
that comes
from that
which only
being born
can fully fathom
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 12th Aug 2021
Author's Note
They're all kind of my babies.... just musing....
©Blu2021
©Blu2021
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Re. born of....
12th Aug 2021 1:55pm
Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 11:20am
Hey there my lovely knight!! I can't thank you enough for that support and awesome comment. I adore you and your encouragement means the world to me!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, the unbelievably kind list add and all your truth and stellar friendship.... I don't ever take it for granted.
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - B
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, the unbelievably kind list add and all your truth and stellar friendship.... I don't ever take it for granted.
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - B
Re. born of....
12th Aug 2021 2:02pm
This is an amazing poem, so different but filled with creativity causing one to have to pause and think, which is great and coud only come from your amazing creative mind. Hugs and peace, oral
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Re: Re. born of....
Dearest O,
It's your lovely comments that always inspire and motivate... I wish you could visit every day! Lol... I say in free admission that that is utterly selfish of me, yet 100% true!!... hahaha.
I thank you for reading, for the amazing and kind words and for your extremely thoughtful care and consideration... Ohh how I bask within it all.
Much love and appreciation, my dear 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
It's your lovely comments that always inspire and motivate... I wish you could visit every day! Lol... I say in free admission that that is utterly selfish of me, yet 100% true!!... hahaha.
I thank you for reading, for the amazing and kind words and for your extremely thoughtful care and consideration... Ohh how I bask within it all.
Much love and appreciation, my dear 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 1:03pm
A shadow was hanging over my head this morning until the sunlight of your gracious words filled my soul. Thanks for being amazing you. Hugs and kisses, O
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Re. born of....
12th Aug 2021 2:53pm
You certainly have an amazing creative mind.
Which brings me to the impression, that arose... Recently I was thinking of the idea of how psychology/neurology comes about in the mechanism of "the mind studying itself". (which to me is deeply thought provoking.)
but I think that a much higher level, of such a mechanism, is that of the creative mind studying itself.
Now that is really far out.
And this write is really far out.
Otherworldy Cool!
Which brings me to the impression, that arose... Recently I was thinking of the idea of how psychology/neurology comes about in the mechanism of "the mind studying itself". (which to me is deeply thought provoking.)
but I think that a much higher level, of such a mechanism, is that of the creative mind studying itself.
Now that is really far out.
And this write is really far out.
Otherworldy Cool!
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Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 11:36am
It's that creative intricacy /introspection that I find so juicy and deeply intriguing, too. It's an area where so much "excavation" of enormous emotional outpouring, truth, uncovering, etc can or could possibly be tapped into... like a accidental geyser... haha.... or perhaps much needed?? 🤷🏻♀️...
Ohhh, how your thoughts really kick my own into overdrive.... I adore that about you /our friendship!!
Thank you for sharing with me, thanks for taking the time to read and expand my heart, mind and soul.... You're a precious find, Cipher.
I am so fortunate to know, experience and believe that!!
🌹 - 💙 - 🍻
xoxo
B
Ohhh, how your thoughts really kick my own into overdrive.... I adore that about you /our friendship!!
Thank you for sharing with me, thanks for taking the time to read and expand my heart, mind and soul.... You're a precious find, Cipher.
I am so fortunate to know, experience and believe that!!
🌹 - 💙 - 🍻
xoxo
B
Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 11:37am
Ohhh, Ursa, Thank you very much 🙏🏻
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave me your comment. It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋... I have missed your presence....
I hope you are doing well, dear poetess ;)
🌹 - 💙
B
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave me your comment. It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋... I have missed your presence....
I hope you are doing well, dear poetess ;)
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 8:00pm
Dear B,
You have warmed by heart with this comment.
You are pure beyond your gift as poet, Bluevelvete; your compassion, kindness, gentleness is authentic.
I am here, and I have been not only enjoying but inspired by you. :)
Enjoy your weekend,
ursa 💜
You have warmed by heart with this comment.
You are pure beyond your gift as poet, Bluevelvete; your compassion, kindness, gentleness is authentic.
I am here, and I have been not only enjoying but inspired by you. :)
Enjoy your weekend,
ursa 💜
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Re. born of....
I love this piece, Goddess Blue❣🌹 It's a beautiful experience to read..."where lucid dreams
flap feathered wings " what a marvelous rhyme...a well is apropos to profound and, to me , sapiosexual writing style. Bravissima🐻💞🐰
flap feathered wings " what a marvelous rhyme...a well is apropos to profound and, to me , sapiosexual writing style. Bravissima🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. born of....
My lovely BB!!
sigh....
I cannot properly convey how much I appreciate you taking the time and how much I absolutely miss you. I MISS YOU LIKE CRAZY!!!
I Know you know.... but I really needed you to KNOW!!.... Now you do... lol.
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and the undoubtedly severe connectedness we are bonded with by our shared sapiosexual draw. It's ridiculously palpable! I am so appreciative when I find another who can understand me at that distinctly erotic kernel of my being.... You are keen and so unique, in that (our joint discovery) Thank you, my dearest poet 🙏🏻... thank you.
Much love, respect and unmitigated fire 🔥
🐰 - 💋 - 🐻
xoxo
sigh....
I cannot properly convey how much I appreciate you taking the time and how much I absolutely miss you. I MISS YOU LIKE CRAZY!!!
I Know you know.... but I really needed you to KNOW!!.... Now you do... lol.
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and the undoubtedly severe connectedness we are bonded with by our shared sapiosexual draw. It's ridiculously palpable! I am so appreciative when I find another who can understand me at that distinctly erotic kernel of my being.... You are keen and so unique, in that (our joint discovery) Thank you, my dearest poet 🙏🏻... thank you.
Much love, respect and unmitigated fire 🔥
🐰 - 💋 - 🐻
xoxo
Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 5:05pm
Yowza...unmitigated fire...tingle thermometer cracked and leaked all over 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 5:10pm
Re. born of....
12th Aug 2021 8:21pm
Thank you for motivating us in this poem. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 11:45am
Re. born of....
12th Aug 2021 11:13pm
"Creation from
once a nothing
spurred into
beautiful somethings" I really liked these lines. It's amazing what we are able to create and birth into the world from our minds.
Excellent verse Blue.
once a nothing
spurred into
beautiful somethings" I really liked these lines. It's amazing what we are able to create and birth into the world from our minds.
Excellent verse Blue.
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Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 11:48am
Hey there, Walter!
Sometimes, I don't even realize (or even know at all) where it comes from.... 🤷🏻♀️... I just go with it. Other times it's like it's clawing to get out and yet other times it's like pulling teeth.... Maybe that's just my own experience.... but I am definitely glad you get a good sense of it, my friend 🙏🏻
Ty so much for reading and your comments.
I truly appreciate you.
🌹 - B
Sometimes, I don't even realize (or even know at all) where it comes from.... 🤷🏻♀️... I just go with it. Other times it's like it's clawing to get out and yet other times it's like pulling teeth.... Maybe that's just my own experience.... but I am definitely glad you get a good sense of it, my friend 🙏🏻
Ty so much for reading and your comments.
I truly appreciate you.
🌹 - B
Re. born of....
13th Aug 2021 2:02am
Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 11:49am
I definitely try....
I very much like the idea that you read my poetry... I don't know why that's so appealing but it is...
Thanks for the jolt.
⚡ - 💙
B
I very much like the idea that you read my poetry... I don't know why that's so appealing but it is...
Thanks for the jolt.
⚡ - 💙
B
Re. born of....
13th Aug 2021 6:30am
The light of your inner strength born in the hour you find yourself is a wonder to behold. Each permutation of your string of thoughts leads further into the deep soul that finds a way no matter what life gives you. And that my friend is why I love this poem. That and your mastery of form and the passion that fills it.
Xo
john
Xo
john
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Re: Re. born of....
Ohhh sigh...
I wish I could be as intelligent and utterly well spoken, John. Your thoughts and generous comments, just blow me away. My heartfelt appreciation seems paltry in the face of such unbelievably innate kindness. Just know that my intentions are pure and that every single word of gratitude is bullet force, in it's brevity of thankfulness.
I utterly adore your visits, period! Ohh my lovely poet.... I definitely do!
Much love, and respect
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
I wish I could be as intelligent and utterly well spoken, John. Your thoughts and generous comments, just blow me away. My heartfelt appreciation seems paltry in the face of such unbelievably innate kindness. Just know that my intentions are pure and that every single word of gratitude is bullet force, in it's brevity of thankfulness.
I utterly adore your visits, period! Ohh my lovely poet.... I definitely do!
Much love, and respect
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
Re. born of....
13th Aug 2021 10:52am
Lovely ... simply lovely ... excellent flow ... there is a fragility in the structure ... like a snowflake ... the undulation of line length makes the poem visually alive ... its message is poignant ... and so relevant for me ... the final spacing is like a breath ... almost held too long ... but so worth the wait ... like breaking surface after a deep deep dive ...
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Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 12:10pm
I like to think that you're a bit psychic when it comes to me, LilD! Whenever I am somehow /somewhat down in the dumps... Your voice comes along, either by poetry or by the poetic beauty of your comments left, to soothe my torn, tattered and bruised soul...
I am beyond thankful for your fluorescence upon my page... It's your own brand of how you glow and warm me with your kind heart, words and sentiments shared, that's unlike anyone else. I cherish all visits but this one visit in particular. I just needed it so..
I am lost for words, my dear dear poetess.... just know that my heart and soul are better and more brilliant for having you here, I am so lucky to call you friend .... and I truly thank you.
🌹 - 💙
B
I am beyond thankful for your fluorescence upon my page... It's your own brand of how you glow and warm me with your kind heart, words and sentiments shared, that's unlike anyone else. I cherish all visits but this one visit in particular. I just needed it so..
I am lost for words, my dear dear poetess.... just know that my heart and soul are better and more brilliant for having you here, I am so lucky to call you friend .... and I truly thank you.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 3:55pm
not empathic or intelligent to add whats already been said already here
except maybe that its been a magical journey
reading from the very conception of gravity here in DUP
except maybe that its been a magical journey
reading from the very conception of gravity here in DUP
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Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 4:28pm
There's a lot to be said for magical journeys m.. especially when you have such wonderfully awesome companions!!
Thanks for the lovely comments, my dear!
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
B
Thanks for the lovely comments, my dear!
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
B
Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 6:13pm
This is excellent but I'm sure you already know that 😉
Love your word choice, the tone, and atmosphere you create!
Love your word choice, the tone, and atmosphere you create!
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Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 6:33pm
Hey there, William.
Your opinion and thoughts are completely valued as separate /independent of their own ... I adore reading how you interpret and feel, in ref to my little poem, so I thank you very much for leaving me your remarks.... I am so grateful.
I appreciate your comments about the atmosphere created, that is a real joy to know!
Much love, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Your opinion and thoughts are completely valued as separate /independent of their own ... I adore reading how you interpret and feel, in ref to my little poem, so I thank you very much for leaving me your remarks.... I am so grateful.
I appreciate your comments about the atmosphere created, that is a real joy to know!
Much love, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 6:39pm
You are very welcome 😉
I'm happy you liked my comment!
I respect your work and opinion so your courtesy is much appreciated 🙂❤️
I'm happy you liked my comment!
I respect your work and opinion so your courtesy is much appreciated 🙂❤️
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Re. born of....
14th Aug 2021 9:51pm
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14th Aug 2021 10:07pm
Re. born of....
16th Aug 2021 7:01am
Re: Re. born of....
16th Aug 2021 10:41am
Thanks for the visit and your thoughtful comments, Grace. I appreciate it so much.
So nice to see you 🦋!
🌹 - 💙
B
So nice to see you 🦋!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. born of....
20th Aug 2021 1:08pm