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Bdsm Incarnation
My mom used to slap me
Usually across the face
Punishment for misbehavior
I can still feel the sting years later
I probably cried
Secretly I was intrigued
It hurt but I kind of liked it
Early wonder
That would play out much later
Things you remember
Bdsm incarnation
Origins and planning
Usually across the face
Punishment for misbehavior
I can still feel the sting years later
I probably cried
Secretly I was intrigued
It hurt but I kind of liked it
Early wonder
That would play out much later
Things you remember
Bdsm incarnation
Origins and planning
Author's Note
Gouache Scrape Art by Poetspeak
Texture created with found materials
Texture created with found materials
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Bdsm Incarnation
Anonymous
11th Aug 2021 4:10am
You never know what might start a fire 🔥
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Re: Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 12:54pm
Yeah
I never thought to write this
Until now .....
Thanks for the comment and Reading List !
I never thought to write this
Until now .....
Thanks for the comment and Reading List !
Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 6:28am
Dear PS,
Interesting introspection…I guess everything starts from somewhere doesn't it?
“ I probably cried
Secretly I was intrigued” I like the dichotomy of this. And as always your shoot from the hip POV.
This artwork has a great deal of depth and fabulous color. What are the found materials? H🌷
Interesting introspection…I guess everything starts from somewhere doesn't it?
“ I probably cried
Secretly I was intrigued” I like the dichotomy of this. And as always your shoot from the hip POV.
This artwork has a great deal of depth and fabulous color. What are the found materials? H🌷
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Re: Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 12:57pm
Dear H
You know me: slice and dice !
The found materials are chunks of wood, I rarely use brushes anymore. Only if I need to paint a flower.
I appreciate the comment H
Thx
You know me: slice and dice !
The found materials are chunks of wood, I rarely use brushes anymore. Only if I need to paint a flower.
I appreciate the comment H
Thx
Re. Bdsm Incarnation
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Aug 2021 6:58am
11th Aug 2021 6:53am
There might be something generational in this.
Enjoyed!
Enjoyed!
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Re: Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 12:59pm
Definitely generational, no doubt
That's the way parents got your attention back then
Not sure that if it worked but certainly made a statement..
That's the way parents got your attention back then
Not sure that if it worked but certainly made a statement..
Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 4:58pm
Interesting... maybe this explains why bdsm doesn't appeal to me. My childhood damage was dealt in different ways....
This art though... can't get enough of that. ❤❤❤❤❤❤
This art though... can't get enough of that. ❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Re: Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 5:09pm
I have always been an opposite of conventional growing up.
Nothing came easy, it still doesn't.
Art is where I flourish. The rules are mine.....
Thx on the RED, RED ....😍🤩🥰😜😝👺❤
Nothing came easy, it still doesn't.
Art is where I flourish. The rules are mine.....
Thx on the RED, RED ....😍🤩🥰😜😝👺❤
Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 6:47pm
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11th Aug 2021 6:55pm
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11th Aug 2021 7:01pm
It was a lesson learned when my mom had to leave work and come to the school to get me right.
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Re: Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 7:40pm
What i wrote about was when was probably grade school or earlier.
High School was another mess entirely..
High School was another mess entirely..
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11th Aug 2021 7:43pm
Re. Bdsm Incarnation
11th Aug 2021 11:38pm
Firstly, the art. Umm so good! I’m not typically a red gal, but damn.
Secondly, the poem. It’s interesting to think about what things in childhood spurned adult behavior. Love this piece of introspection. Keepin’ it real, PoetSpeak style,
xx
Secondly, the poem. It’s interesting to think about what things in childhood spurned adult behavior. Love this piece of introspection. Keepin’ it real, PoetSpeak style,
xx
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Re. Bdsm Incarnation
12th Aug 2021 1:08am
I'm learning how to work with Red
Not my usual go to color but brings a lot of power, not so much grace.. But this poem isn't exactly graceful. I've thought about those slaps for years. My mom said she never hit me ever but it is what it is. I was a troubled kid. No regrets
Thanks so much E for the awesome comment, no filter, no sugar coating per my usual
Appreciate
Xx
❤
Not my usual go to color but brings a lot of power, not so much grace.. But this poem isn't exactly graceful. I've thought about those slaps for years. My mom said she never hit me ever but it is what it is. I was a troubled kid. No regrets
Thanks so much E for the awesome comment, no filter, no sugar coating per my usual
Appreciate
Xx
❤
Re. Bdsm Incarnation
12th Aug 2021 7:51pm
It's an interesting write because we sometimes discover the origins of our fetishes and other things.
The painting is raw and vivid.
BIG LIKE.
Nicely done.
The painting is raw and vivid.
BIG LIKE.
Nicely done.
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Re: Re. Bdsm Incarnation
12th Aug 2021 9:46pm
This is a freaky one, thought this was the place to let it out of the bag..
Thanks Wally
Thanks Wally
Re. Bdsm Incarnation
15th Aug 2021 12:15pm
dear PS
on a first read of any poem i am neutral and i do not assume that the narrator is the author
i find here a very fine paring of the canvases
the square , the voice and the universe
also there's subtle inference that the slap in the face
was induced perhaps also by an otherwise not openly owned Bdsm trait
and that the child may have done nothing wrong.
'Things you remember'
may also speak to one's returning to one's own authenticity
thankyuuu for sharing
silent lotus
~
on a first read of any poem i am neutral and i do not assume that the narrator is the author
i find here a very fine paring of the canvases
the square , the voice and the universe
also there's subtle inference that the slap in the face
was induced perhaps also by an otherwise not openly owned Bdsm trait
and that the child may have done nothing wrong.
'Things you remember'
may also speak to one's returning to one's own authenticity
thankyuuu for sharing
silent lotus
~
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Re: Re. Bdsm Incarnation
15th Aug 2021 12:46pm
I probably did something wrong
But my mom wasn't that patient and I probably didn't toe the line fast enough and then the crack across the face. Maybe I got the last laugh though but that's a bdsm story for another time.... She didn't pay buy others did !!!
Thx silent lotus
But my mom wasn't that patient and I probably didn't toe the line fast enough and then the crack across the face. Maybe I got the last laugh though but that's a bdsm story for another time.... She didn't pay buy others did !!!
Thx silent lotus
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16th Aug 2021 9:14am
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16th Aug 2021 9:19am
Re. Bdsm Incarnation
4th Feb 2024 4:26pm
My mom (Maa) never hit me... so I want someone to punish me by tying me with a rope and beating me with a whip...
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4th Feb 2024 4:35pm