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Senryu to nurturing
Author's Note
This is an entree in DUP's July Senryu Nurturing Contest.
What is more nurturing than romance and love? 💞
(Artwork from Pinterest Classics)
What is more nurturing than romance and love? 💞
(Artwork from Pinterest Classics)
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- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
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Re: Re. Senryu of nurturing
25th Jul 2021 7:33pm
Ah, Dear Lady Keilani 🌾
How softly your voice upon my hopeful ear fulfills a most ardent hope of pleasing at least one who comes to read a bard's humble efforts.
It makes me feel happy to know you think so highly of the title; I spent considerable time in contemplation on it … your praise, sentiments, and expressed appreciation are as gently sparkling moonlight on a rippled pond.
Thank you ever-so warmly, Keilani … hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃
How softly your voice upon my hopeful ear fulfills a most ardent hope of pleasing at least one who comes to read a bard's humble efforts.
It makes me feel happy to know you think so highly of the title; I spent considerable time in contemplation on it … your praise, sentiments, and expressed appreciation are as gently sparkling moonlight on a rippled pond.
Thank you ever-so warmly, Keilani … hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃
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- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
26th Jul 2021 5:16pm
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Re: Re. Senryu of nurturing
26th Jul 2021 8:13pm
Re. Senryu to nurturing
29th Jul 2021 9:12pm
Really beautiful. Truly captured young love, growing together and supporting each other. Love it! good luck in the competition.
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Re. Senryu to nurturing
8th Aug 2021 2:50pm
Cultivating bliss...a forgotten art really. Romance. more often than not, goes by the way side. Tears sting my eyes for at the age of 72 will I ever find someone to listen to hear, Hear, one who wants to draw from the well within, to drink of the bliss for which you speak. A lost art.
Thank you for the read.
Thank you for the read.
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Re. Senryu to nurturing
12th Apr 2022 6:24am
And what heavier, thicker, darker, than their shadow? Have you ever turned a three-day battle with a demon into a dance of loving union? Note: you will have to turn the dance back into hostility, the roses back into steel, at the end of that, after doing your alchemical duty, which may have been a stupid thing to do in the first place. Oh, I'm being silly.
You are a beautiful poet of form, and your poem "In My Dreams" sang to me.
You are a beautiful poet of form, and your poem "In My Dreams" sang to me.
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Re. Senryu to nurturing
17th Jul 2022 10:24pm
So much content, so many feelings and so many scenarios spring from these 17 syllables... and you managed to make it rhyme, too! I've never attempted a rhyming senryu. Thank you for the suggestion!!
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