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Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 8:31am
"glistening of pale moonlight" is a line that will live with me forever. There is so much imagery in this single line. Yes, I will have sweet dreams tonight.
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 6:07pm
Thanks for your comments, R
I certainly hope you had sweet dreams.... *wink
I deeply appreciate the generous list add and all your kind supportiveness.....
Much love your way ✨
🌹-💙
B
I certainly hope you had sweet dreams.... *wink
I deeply appreciate the generous list add and all your kind supportiveness.....
Much love your way ✨
🌹-💙
B
Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 10:20am
Re: Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 2:44am
Ohh... I like that 'powerful sensuality'.... Thanks, Cipher..
I enjoy titling and feel like it's an important part of the poetry process.... just my little peccadillo... lol
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend 🙏🏻
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, the generous list add and your support.
It means the world to me.
🌹 - B
I enjoy titling and feel like it's an important part of the poetry process.... just my little peccadillo... lol
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend 🙏🏻
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, the generous list add and your support.
It means the world to me.
🌹 - B
Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 10:26am
you know i love writing these
so always appreciate other ones more than mine
this has a lot for an inagiative mind to contemolate in dream land
so always appreciate other ones more than mine
this has a lot for an inagiative mind to contemolate in dream land
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 2:45am
I had a really really good teacher... *wink
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, my dear.
I am so so happy you enjoyed reading..
I adore you!
🌹 - 💙 - B
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, my dear.
I am so so happy you enjoyed reading..
I adore you!
🌹 - 💙 - B
Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 10:33am
Re: Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 2:47am
Very much agree! .... it's goosebump inducing... lol... Thanks for reading the list add and the killer comments, LilD... you make me smile!
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 7:57pm
So you were glistening In the moonlight with your lover, hope you enjoyed yourself. Keep on on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 2:48am
Mmm... lovely visual, indeed... thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts, Francisco!
It's very much appreciated.
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It's very much appreciated.
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Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 8:55pm
Re: Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 9:18pm
Re. exquisite endurance
With its theme of al fresco lovemaking under the stars, this senryu would make a summary of Eightmore's poem Day is Done, which comes immediately after this poem in the same section. The pic matches would fit well too as in the latter poem she ends up on top.
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
20th Jul 2021 9:51pm
Well I'll absolutely have to read his poem! Thanks for mentioning that Solomon... I love when that happens... when creativity sparks recognition of creativity...
I really appreciate your thoughtfulness and taking the time to leave me your comments.
It's always a pleasure to see you on my page 🦋
🌹 - B
I really appreciate your thoughtfulness and taking the time to leave me your comments.
It's always a pleasure to see you on my page 🦋
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 2:50am
I'm glad you liked the imagery, Tim
Senryú are one of the styles that I enjoy the most... I adore your own mental images, greatly. Very romantic and tender....
I appreciate the list add and all your loveliness, my friend..
Thank you.
🌹 - B
Senryú are one of the styles that I enjoy the most... I adore your own mental images, greatly. Very romantic and tender....
I appreciate the list add and all your loveliness, my friend..
Thank you.
🌹 - B
Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 5:09am
If Basho had been a woman this is what he'd have written. You write sensuality in the true Japanese tradition. This nailed me with the imagery and that grand ending.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 5:55am
Ohhh John, you honor me with your amazingly wonderful comments. I will try my best to not sound like a broken record but I am so grateful and humbled by your consideration and thoughtful nature with me.
I don't know if I deserve it all but I certainly appreciate every single word, from the bottom of my heart.
I'm so glad you enjoy reading and accompanying me along my poetic DU journey.... Today is officially now my one year anniversary and I am truly lucky to be in such company!
Deep regards, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - Susan
xoxo
I don't know if I deserve it all but I certainly appreciate every single word, from the bottom of my heart.
I'm so glad you enjoy reading and accompanying me along my poetic DU journey.... Today is officially now my one year anniversary and I am truly lucky to be in such company!
Deep regards, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - Susan
xoxo
Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 3:38pm
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21st Jul 2021 4:30pm
Re. exquisite endurance
21st Jul 2021 10:22pm
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21st Jul 2021 10:43pm
Re. exquisite endurance
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2021 2:52am
How it beckons, loved this too
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
23rd Jul 2021 4:30am
Re. exquisite endurance
Anonymous
1st Aug 2021 8:11am
I appreciate the brevity.
Not sure she does, tho
Not sure she does, tho
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
1st Aug 2021 8:21am
Re. exquisite endurance
9th Aug 2021 00:46am
No need to say more, your senryus speak volumes with great detail in those few chosen words.
Excellent stuff.
Excellent stuff.
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Re: Re. exquisite endurance
9th Aug 2021 00:49am
Thanks for the kind words, Walter.
I just posted one today that I completely miscounted the syllables.... haha.. luckily, another poet caught it and I updated it with only a few hours of embarrassing publication... lol
We all make mistakes!!!
I wholeheartedly appreciate it taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.
🌹 - B
I just posted one today that I completely miscounted the syllables.... haha.. luckily, another poet caught it and I updated it with only a few hours of embarrassing publication... lol
We all make mistakes!!!
I wholeheartedly appreciate it taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.
🌹 - B