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I am!
I'm gentle...yes...and just like that!
In your hands, I bloom,
You'll just touch and smell
It's going to be so tender all around.
I'm happy...yes...and just like that!
In your soul I play with paint,
I'll give you my smile
And the lights in my eyes are so hot.
I'm sweetness...yes...and just like that!
What is pouring on you with its sounds,
Like the music of spring rain,
Like the rhythms of the wind with a melody
I'm a fairy tale...yes..and just like that!
What is told by stars at night,
And at dawn there will be a fall of love,
It touches the lips unwittingly.
I'm the sky...yes...and just like that!
So blue and distant,
But you just stretch out your hand now
And I will touch your palm.
I'm a sea...yes...and just like that!
Deep ... a little noisy water,
But I know how to caress,
As the waves are warm in the morning.
I'm you...and just like that!
Don't divide with lightning and thunderstorms.
The whole world shouts: "It is impossible"
And let it frighten us with frosts.
I'm silence... and only so...
Frozen here in anticipation.
And only the word I hear: "You are mine!"
I give myself to you for all desires.
In your hands, I bloom,
You'll just touch and smell
It's going to be so tender all around.
I'm happy...yes...and just like that!
In your soul I play with paint,
I'll give you my smile
And the lights in my eyes are so hot.
I'm sweetness...yes...and just like that!
What is pouring on you with its sounds,
Like the music of spring rain,
Like the rhythms of the wind with a melody
I'm a fairy tale...yes..and just like that!
What is told by stars at night,
And at dawn there will be a fall of love,
It touches the lips unwittingly.
I'm the sky...yes...and just like that!
So blue and distant,
But you just stretch out your hand now
And I will touch your palm.
I'm a sea...yes...and just like that!
Deep ... a little noisy water,
But I know how to caress,
As the waves are warm in the morning.
I'm you...and just like that!
Don't divide with lightning and thunderstorms.
The whole world shouts: "It is impossible"
And let it frighten us with frosts.
I'm silence... and only so...
Frozen here in anticipation.
And only the word I hear: "You are mine!"
I give myself to you for all desires.
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Re. I am!
This is a beautiful portrait of love and human spirit
So often we are suffering and making our ways through the darkness, but this is a refreshing union of 2 people deeply in love ...
I salute you Kristina, you once again keep us guessing and this time it's a walk on a golden path of Stargazer lilies all blooming at the same time
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
So often we are suffering and making our ways through the darkness, but this is a refreshing union of 2 people deeply in love ...
I salute you Kristina, you once again keep us guessing and this time it's a walk on a golden path of Stargazer lilies all blooming at the same time
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. I am!
6th Jul 2021 10:11pm
I love your description PoetSpeak. Sometimes it is so easy to write about suffering and there is no shortage of it to go around. So I like to try and write upbeat things to bring things into balance. Stargazer lilies are my favorite; so beautiful and with the most amazing smell. Thank you for taking a moment to walk this path with me. And thank you so much for the BIG LIKE and RL. :) 🌷
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Re: Re. I am!
6th Jul 2021 10:13pm
Thank you so much for the compliment BP. If you enjoyed reading then it was worthwhile to write and share. I am really happy you liked it! 🌷
Re. I am!
6th Jul 2021 11:07pm
Aw, this is so lovely and honest and sweet. No games, just love. What a generous offering.
Bravo!
❤k
Bravo!
❤k
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Re: Re. I am!
7th Jul 2021 1:11am
I really love that description BT. :) Absolutely, just trying to spread some love. I am so happy you could feel that and liked it. I think we need more love and fewer games these days. Thank you so much for the comment. 🌷
Re. I am!
7th Jul 2021 00:35am
Re: Re. I am!
7th Jul 2021 1:12am
Ah yes! Francisco. I am glad you could feel some romance with me tonight. Thank you so much for the comment. :) 🌷
Re. I am!
7th Jul 2021 2:26am
Tight work, you know that we are a big fan of the repetition if it fits. But that ending took twisted and straightened it out. Tight work Lady
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7th Jul 2021 12:44pm
Starting off with tight and ending with it as well, I love it! I am really happy the ending was able straighten things out. My mind is very twisted after all. ;) 🌷
Re. I am!
7th Jul 2021 5:14am
Re: Re. I am!
7th Jul 2021 12:45pm
Hey Remy! I am really happy it spoke to you and you liked it. Just trying to spread a little upbeat cheer around. ;) 🌷
Re. I am!
Ohhh-YES, you ARE, indeed! 😏
All "that" and so much more, I can tell … or, at least my imagination is stirred and soaring sooo vastly wide, high 'n deep. And, that artwork … goodness-ME!
Smooth as silk slowwwly undulating in a balmy breeze, your glowing words dance upon the page, up into one's most fertilely sumptuous fancies … I mean, what warm-blooded bard could resist desiring such a scintillatingly enthralling woman(?) … not I. 😋
I adore every "I'm"; yet … ummm*
"You are mine!"
I give myself to you for all desires.
"GULP!"
Excuse me, please, while I turn up the fan!
I simply loved the entirety of this virtual masterpiece to love 'n sensuality …
thank you most warmly, Kristina ⁓ Richard 🍃
All "that" and so much more, I can tell … or, at least my imagination is stirred and soaring sooo vastly wide, high 'n deep. And, that artwork … goodness-ME!
Smooth as silk slowwwly undulating in a balmy breeze, your glowing words dance upon the page, up into one's most fertilely sumptuous fancies … I mean, what warm-blooded bard could resist desiring such a scintillatingly enthralling woman(?) … not I. 😋
I adore every "I'm"; yet … ummm*
"You are mine!"
I give myself to you for all desires.
"GULP!"
Excuse me, please, while I turn up the fan!
I simply loved the entirety of this virtual masterpiece to love 'n sensuality …
thank you most warmly, Kristina ⁓ Richard 🍃
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Re: Re. I am!
Deer in the headlights. But to be hit by you in such a way is very pleasurable like a good BDSM session. I may need after care though. ;) I do love warm blooded bards. Feeling the pulse of passion through the veins... I adore your comment and feel my response is inadequate. Thank you so much for the comment and sharing your thoughts. I am really happy you liked it. 🌷
Re: Re. I am!
28th Jul 2021 4:39pm
For me, Kristina ⚥
Your response is sheer perfection ~ and, then some … KLINK*🥂
Your response is sheer perfection ~ and, then some … KLINK*🥂
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Re. I am!
31st Jul 2021 6:33pm
I've always enjoyed and love verses where the repetition embeds it's self in the brain, like a chorus to a song.
It's a wonderful testament of love and loyalty, each stanza giving prime examples, describing the depths and lengths of the emotion.
Excellent work Kristina.
It's a wonderful testament of love and loyalty, each stanza giving prime examples, describing the depths and lengths of the emotion.
Excellent work Kristina.
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Re: Re. I am!
1st Aug 2021 1:34am
Sometimes repetition is good. ;) But I love like a chorus to a song. That really made me smile. Ah yes! the depths and lengths of emotion. They can torture me but also be so beautiful. I am so very happy that you (and others) continue to enjoy my writing. It makes posting worthwhile. Anyway, Thank you so much.🌷
Re. I am!
14th Sep 2021 00:01am
I was sent here by InDreamz and you did not disappoint. This is excellent 👌
I'm looking forward to reading more!
I'm looking forward to reading more!
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Re: Re. I am!
14th Sep 2021 1:25am
Wow, I am so surprised and honored that InDreamz would send you here to me. :) And I am so happy that you were not disappointed with what you found; I so appreciate you reading my writing and sharing your thoughts. I look forward to reading you too soon. 🌷
Re: Re. I am!
14th Sep 2021 1:56am