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The Miller's Tale ( Pushkin Sonnet )
Young housewives—dark thrills inspire them;
but, when pressed for action doth feign
virtue against a parish man,
while bedding a more nobler Cane.
Ye husbands! heed this chronicle!
When deceit doth snake full circle
seeking to utterly deceive,
truth can be too hard to believe.
The poor husband, an innocent,
reputable among town folk,
unwittingly becomes a joke
in the sinner's moral dissent!
The husband prays for a godsend;
The parishioner! He's a friend.
~
but, when pressed for action doth feign
virtue against a parish man,
while bedding a more nobler Cane.
Ye husbands! heed this chronicle!
When deceit doth snake full circle
seeking to utterly deceive,
truth can be too hard to believe.
The poor husband, an innocent,
reputable among town folk,
unwittingly becomes a joke
in the sinner's moral dissent!
The husband prays for a godsend;
The parishioner! He's a friend.
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 20th Jun 2021
| Edited 11th Jul 2021
Author's Note
First Place Winner, AnonymousBystander's Canterbury Tales Retold Comp:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11928/
Image: Illustration of Robin the Miller, from The Miller's Tale
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11928/
Image: Illustration of Robin the Miller, from The Miller's Tale
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Re. The Miller's Tale
20th Jun 2021 5:31am
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20th Jun 2021 6:18pm
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20th Jun 2021 6:39am
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20th Jun 2021 6:18pm
Re. The Miller's Tale
20th Jun 2021 7:45am
When deceit doth snake full circle
seeking to utterly deceive,
truth can be too hard to believe.
Those lines really hit me hard to say the least...
This is a stellar write of betrayal and deception
A perfect reminder of how we fall victim to it and how we use it to save our skin
seeking to utterly deceive,
truth can be too hard to believe.
Those lines really hit me hard to say the least...
This is a stellar write of betrayal and deception
A perfect reminder of how we fall victim to it and how we use it to save our skin
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Re: Re. The Miller's Tale
20th Jun 2021 6:18pm
Thank you, Poet. That is exactly the essence of Canterbury's original 'Miller's Tale'. So I am happy I nailed that at least!
Re. The Miller's Tale
20th Jun 2021 10:26am
I'm a big Canterbury Tales fan. I've tried to write a book in rhyme a couple times and failed. I had thought about doing my own competition with members of DUP stuck on a cruise because of Covid having to entertain each other with their own tales.
You managed to summarize the Miller's Tale pretty well. Awesome write!
You managed to summarize the Miller's Tale pretty well. Awesome write!
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20th Jun 2021 6:16pm
Thanks, Tim. It's been a bit since I've read them; however, I have never forgotten the Miller's Tale. So for me it was the perfect choice. I am surprised you didn't enter, being you're a big fan. I expected a few more entries than there were, and barely made the deadline myself.
Re. The Miller's Tale
20th Jun 2021 6:09pm
This is fantastic! I just read the details of the compitition. How original, I love it!!
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20th Jun 2021 6:15pm
Thanks, Margo. It's been a long time since I pushed myself in form. I think I need to push more often to truly appreciate the thought process required.
Re. The Miller's Tale
20th Jun 2021 7:14pm
I really like the use of Olde English here, it’s pervasive but restrained, not feeling too much or too little. Authentic, but readable. I also like how you compress the meaning of the tale into this little piece. A stellar entry.
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20th Jun 2021 8:18pm
Thank you for the kind words, Jack.
In all honesty, there weren't enough entries to award a winner. I think there has to be two or three ( and of course Anonymous' doesn't count ). I couldn't stand to see you in there alone! Now at least you have a chance to win. Afterall, yours is totally the essence of Chaucer's, in my opinion!
In all honesty, there weren't enough entries to award a winner. I think there has to be two or three ( and of course Anonymous' doesn't count ). I couldn't stand to see you in there alone! Now at least you have a chance to win. Afterall, yours is totally the essence of Chaucer's, in my opinion!
Re. The Miller's Tale
20th Jun 2021 9:44pm
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20th Jun 2021 10:17pm
Thank you, Josh. It's been so long for me I barely remember them. Well, except for the Miller's Tale, and you can attribute that to Procal Harum's song, 'A Whiter Shade of Pale'! Honestly, everytime I heard it I thought of that tale!
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22nd Jun 2021 4:50am
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23rd Jun 2021 9:10pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Jun 2021 3:22pm
27th Jun 2021 3:14pm
Whoop! Congrats on winning the comp! I have a vague recollection that the Canterbury Tales was an assignment in a high school literature class ... and that I may have blown it off because I already had a foot out the door before senior year was finished.
xo
xo
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27th Jun 2021 8:36pm
Thank you! I only remember one! The Miller's Tale; and that's only because of Procol Harum! LOL!
Re. The Miller's Tale
11th Jul 2021 8:20pm
Loves you. I am not familiar with Chaucer I mean I’ve heard of him but I’ve never read anything from him. Everything you write is beautiful♥️
Jackie 🤗
Jackie 🤗
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Re: Re. The Miller's Tale
11th Jul 2021 8:37pm
Thank you, sweet Jackie! I only remember the Miller's Tale because of Procol Harum! LOL! The rest, as they say, is history! Thank you, Sweet friend. xo
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21st Jul 2021 10:43pm
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22nd Jul 2021 4:37pm