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On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
(i.)
Hanging on a string
Lonely swinging waiting heart
Indescribable ache living inside
Feelings say its no sunday thing
More an everyday all night long sensation
Dangling over the abyss
Where surrender breathes
Sending electrical shivers
Delightful jolts through senses
Giving that awareness of life
Love's madness keeps seeping
Yearnings biting hard
Forever burning
Fire rushes
Forever connecting
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(ii.)
Forever connecting
Mirroring one another
Conjoined pain attracts,
such poignant souls adhere
Being untied of one,
entwined to swing in dual
To be exactly, every single day
hope filled together, per fate's allow
Madness morphs to fools in love
Conquering the deepest abyss
Even the smallest glimmer of light
shall wholly destroy shared darkness
Pure, honest hearts meld
Loneliness is but a whispered memory
The ache of once yearned for
becomes the pulsing need of joy
and simple happiness
Unified in mind
spirit
and branded upon
always.
Author's Note
My thanks to @AspergerPoet56 for the inspiration here and for teaching me how poetry is really supposed to be written.
All my gratitude, C - 💙
🌹-S
This is a shout out to the game we'd play where we'd take the last line of a haiku or senryś that was posted and use that as the first line of your own haiku or senryś.....and go back and forth that way with whoever was playing.. via the erotica forum. I definitely miss those who helped make it spicy fun. Well wishes sent out to them all....✨ 💫 ✨
©Blu2021
©Colin Weir
All my gratitude, C - 💙
🌹-S
This is a shout out to the game we'd play where we'd take the last line of a haiku or senryś that was posted and use that as the first line of your own haiku or senryś.....and go back and forth that way with whoever was playing.. via the erotica forum. I definitely miss those who helped make it spicy fun. Well wishes sent out to them all....✨ 💫 ✨
©Blu2021
©Colin Weir
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Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 4:42pm
I would beg to differ me !!!!! Teach you!!!! How poetry should be written nearly dropped my phone reasing your author note
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 7:58pm
hahaha... Yes, you did!!...think back, when I first arrived here.... then think of how many back and forth senryś we must have done.... AND how many I have read..... It was unavoidable, me learning all that I could from you.....
So, yes.. indeed it's true!
☑
🌹 - 💙
So, yes.. indeed it's true!
☑
🌹 - 💙
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 4:50pm
This is amazing! So many kudos to the both of you for such a beautiful spill 💜
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 8:13pm
Thanks for the lovely remarks and kindness, Luna... We're so glad you enjoyed reading and so very grateful for your generous list add. Having my DU bff to pull inspiration from is always a good place to be in for awhile! :)
Always so nice to see you 🦋and I hope you're doing well - 💙
🌹 - B
Always so nice to see you 🦋and I hope you're doing well - 💙
🌹 - B
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 5:31pm
Amazing spill and i applaud You both
" Even the smallest glimmer of light
shall wholly destroy shared darkness " <----- Wow! Too many times i can remember..........
" Even the smallest glimmer of light
shall wholly destroy shared darkness " <----- Wow! Too many times i can remember..........
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 8:16pm
Hey there Tallen!
Lovely remarks and all our joint thanks for sharing them with us. I know I wholeheartedly appreciate you stopping by and I am so grateful you could be of an understanding within those lines, my friend 🙏🏻
I thoroughly enjoy seeing you on my page and send out kind and peaceful wishes ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and respect for,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Lovely remarks and all our joint thanks for sharing them with us. I know I wholeheartedly appreciate you stopping by and I am so grateful you could be of an understanding within those lines, my friend 🙏🏻
I thoroughly enjoy seeing you on my page and send out kind and peaceful wishes ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and respect for,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 6:07pm
Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 8:18pm
Ohh, Thank you so much, Ron!
It's always a pleasure to get your opinions / feedback... So happy you liked it....
I know it makes for smiles from us both. I appreciate you, the generous list add and all the wonderful kindness.
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
It's always a pleasure to get your opinions / feedback... So happy you liked it....
I know it makes for smiles from us both. I appreciate you, the generous list add and all the wonderful kindness.
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
Quite beautiful. First guiding then challenging the reader's emotions to feel love. As always and forever, peace.
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 7:56pm
I'm so glad you found some appeal here within our joint effort, R. I appreciate you reading and being kind enough to leave your sentiments / insights upon my page.... Much thanks and appreciations, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
A pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
A pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 8:08pm
Lol... Thanks, Tim ....You make me laugh.... I'm glad you found some sort of enjoyment somewhere within our spill.... it's wholly appreciated!
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 8:05pm
Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
Awww... You're a gem 💎, Lj!
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, the generous list add and the beauty of your heart's capacity for such wonderful openness... We both bask in it's illumination... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, the generous list add and the beauty of your heart's capacity for such wonderful openness... We both bask in it's illumination... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 9:20pm
The passion between you both has come out in this poem. Release the sexual tension between you both, LOL. Keep on writing both of you.
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 9:28pm
You're a silly goose, Francisco!!.... FRIENDS can collaborate.... Not everything is sexual tension.... hahaha..... You know that, though, I can tell by your "LOL"... Yep... 😉.. you sure can!
I do thank you for being a faithful reader!!
-🌹
I do thank you for being a faithful reader!!
-🌹
Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 9:31pm
I know that but when two people write a hot poem that might be sexual tension between them. Good luck to the both you in your poetry adventures.
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
Ok ok! UNCLE!!!... hahaha ... lol...😂
Thanks a bunch, Francisco! I wish you all the luck, too.... 🌹
Thanks a bunch, Francisco! I wish you all the luck, too.... 🌹
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
16th Jun 2021 9:40pm
Splendid collab ... one of the very best I have seen ... I see traces of both of you ... two of my favorite poets ...
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
Awwww (blushes)... I can confidently say that we absolutely feel likewise, my lovely poetess.
Much thanks for your amazingly kind comments and all your loveliness and support of us both....
-🌹
💙 - 🙏🏻
xoxo
B & AP
Much thanks for your amazingly kind comments and all your loveliness and support of us both....
-🌹
💙 - 🙏🏻
xoxo
B & AP
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
20th Jun 2021 6:36pm
I love collabs, and this one has such a melancholy, bittersweet resonance. It reminds me somehow when love is found, I always go back to the spot at the fence where I decided to swing my leg over...I stay at that spot contemplating loneliness and if it was as bad as the fear new love always brings me. "Dangling over the abyss/where surrender breathes/sending electrical shivers"...I think it's that electricity that creates the madness...lol...scares me to death....
Beautiful, amazing collab from two poets I admire so much.⚘⚘
Beautiful, amazing collab from two poets I admire so much.⚘⚘
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
Thanks Margo!!
I'm not a fan of collaborative efforts for myself... lol.. I'm not good at them... but AP has always deeply inspired me and is one of the best souls here... it's hard not to lose yourself reacting to some of his poetry... that's exactly what happened.... me reacting directly to his awesomeness!! I agree with that line choice of yours... AP is an utter talent at the enormous emotional outpouring /discovery that he can solidify so perfectly into the page.... He always blows my mind, too!!!... lol
Thanks so much for stopping by and taking the time, the lovely list add and all your genuine and authentic kindness...
Be well, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B & AP
I'm not a fan of collaborative efforts for myself... lol.. I'm not good at them... but AP has always deeply inspired me and is one of the best souls here... it's hard not to lose yourself reacting to some of his poetry... that's exactly what happened.... me reacting directly to his awesomeness!! I agree with that line choice of yours... AP is an utter talent at the enormous emotional outpouring /discovery that he can solidify so perfectly into the page.... He always blows my mind, too!!!... lol
Thanks so much for stopping by and taking the time, the lovely list add and all your genuine and authentic kindness...
Be well, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B & AP
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
22nd Jun 2021 10:20pm
You two wrote the many splendored feeling of loves indomitable healing force. This is seamless poetry like the best collaborations are. Love the melody this sings to my heart. It sings of a universe where love blossoms when you least expect it.
John
John
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
21st Jul 2021 2:28am
Ohh John, I just saw that I overlooked this terrifically awesome comment.... l'm so very sorry that I missed it.... I apologize!
I am extremely touched by your kinds words and absolutely adore that you were touched, like you were. All of our gratitude, for such wonderfully beautiful sentiments, the list add and understanding our motivations...
All my warmest regards and deepest respect,
🌹 - Susan
and AP
xoxo
I am extremely touched by your kinds words and absolutely adore that you were touched, like you were. All of our gratitude, for such wonderfully beautiful sentiments, the list add and understanding our motivations...
All my warmest regards and deepest respect,
🌹 - Susan
and AP
xoxo
Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
21st Jul 2021 2:15am
This is one of the most excellent collaborations I've read here. You and AP really put something together that is all beautiful and spellbinding. I couldn't help but think it's like a duet with voices so calming and enchanting.
Well done you two.
Well done you two.
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Re: Re. On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
21st Jul 2021 2:34am
Dang, Walter, thems some extremely awesome feedback / compliments!! ... I am blown away and so very grateful for such kind and utterly beautiful comments. AP had always been such a great inspiration and good egg, that it's been my pleasure to work with him...I believe he's pretty much the only one who would stand it, anyway.... haha 😂.....
We're so excited and happy you saw something within our joint effort... All our thanks for the generous list add...
Warmest regards - 💙
B&AP
I am
We're so excited and happy you saw something within our joint effort... All our thanks for the generous list add...
Warmest regards - 💙
B&AP
I am