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lost in the loudness of solitude
It mystifies
marking indelibly
scarring
a stoney heart, stonier
left beating
forgotten beats
loud—
is the echo of silence
tears roll of quietude
where once,
a smile did shine
so loudly.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 13th Jun 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Pic: The Bliss of Solitude by Dániel Taylor via Pinterest
Pic: The Bliss of Solitude by Dániel Taylor via Pinterest
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Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 6:09am
Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 11:48am
You made my morning, bk. :)
I thank you for sharing your thoughts and the generous list add.... ✨
Returned hugs /love
🌹 - 💙
B
I thank you for sharing your thoughts and the generous list add.... ✨
Returned hugs /love
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 6:13am
The heart will heal you need to talk to the people who will make you feel good. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 11:49am
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 6:20am
The loudness of quiet, the noise in being alone, it feels like your head will explode with the pressure of silence
Great write beautiful. Loved this
Love and light
Ron x
Great write beautiful. Loved this
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 11:50am
I am so grateful for you, yet sad that you can relate, my lovely friend 🙏🏻... I am appreciative of all your kindness and the love shown .... Ty for the RL add and always being of support.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 6:30am
Dear, Lady Blue
You capture the melancholy of solitude so well in this piece.🐻💞🐰
You capture the melancholy of solitude so well in this piece.🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 11:51am
Thanks for saying so BB.
I appreciate you and those kind words
🌹 - 💙
A pleasure, always
-B
I appreciate you and those kind words
🌹 - 💙
A pleasure, always
-B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 7:06am
my beating heart so loudly where my smile will shine it is bliss to visit you xx
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 11:53am
Likewise in reading your thoughtful comments and seeing you on my page... 🦋.... I appreciate you taking the time and the generous list add is not taken lightly....
🌹-💙
B
🌹-💙
B
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 11:47am
Thanks so much for reading and those kind words, Ted. Glad you enjoyed
🌹-💙
B
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B
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 2:30am
Thank you so much for stopping by , Rian.
Your comments and insights always highlight awesomely other perspectives, which are illuminated by your light and essence itself... I love the 'plop of the teardrop'.... absolutely, 👌🏻
Much love your way, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Your comments and insights always highlight awesomely other perspectives, which are illuminated by your light and essence itself... I love the 'plop of the teardrop'.... absolutely, 👌🏻
Much love your way, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 3:10pm
Hello my darling BlueBoo, this piece is stark and explosive where that the way you describe how loud silence is and can be is impeccable, just brilliant because it’s true…
Miss you & love you always
Your big sis Jackie ♥️🤗😘
PS for me, the silence of unwanted loneliness is like no other and as you described so perfectly here, it is the loudest quiet on earth Xoxo
Listed 💋
Miss you & love you always
Your big sis Jackie ♥️🤗😘
PS for me, the silence of unwanted loneliness is like no other and as you described so perfectly here, it is the loudest quiet on earth Xoxo
Listed 💋
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 2:50am
JACKIE!!!! 🐙☺🤗
OMG.... I've missed you every day!! It's not the same here without you, that's for sure. Talk about less fun and colorful!... Dawww 🌈 😘
I adore seeing you and appreciate your thoughtful comments, lovely lady. Seems we're both in agreement with just how loud solitude can be....
I am so grateful for your list add and I hope to see you around a bit more, you bring such a great and unique vibe...
Much love and loads of hugs!
Always your Blue Boo!! 👍🏻 😅🤣😉🙃
💙💙🤗🦋🦋
xoxo
B
OMG.... I've missed you every day!! It's not the same here without you, that's for sure. Talk about less fun and colorful!... Dawww 🌈 😘
I adore seeing you and appreciate your thoughtful comments, lovely lady. Seems we're both in agreement with just how loud solitude can be....
I am so grateful for your list add and I hope to see you around a bit more, you bring such a great and unique vibe...
Much love and loads of hugs!
Always your Blue Boo!! 👍🏻 😅🤣😉🙃
💙💙🤗🦋🦋
xoxo
B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 3:57pm
I am amazed at the manner in which you are able to enter into this psychological moment, as though time has stopped, and perform a deep inspection into the inmost depth, rendering this into a form that is purified and pure.
In this way, you have given a name to something that is a nameless It.
This nameless it can only be known in it’s effects, and even these, are elusive and difficult to convey, as those in such a state are gripped by paralysis in different forms.
I like how you draw on the difference between “silence” and “quietude”, one being external the other internal, and then the tears, are the internal externalized, into reflection, and insight.
Very nicely done, Blu.
In this way, you have given a name to something that is a nameless It.
This nameless it can only be known in it’s effects, and even these, are elusive and difficult to convey, as those in such a state are gripped by paralysis in different forms.
I like how you draw on the difference between “silence” and “quietude”, one being external the other internal, and then the tears, are the internal externalized, into reflection, and insight.
Very nicely done, Blu.
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 3:01am
Your thoughts and extremely insightful comments really emphasize and enlighten, Cipher.
I wholly appreciate you, and I all your kindness, my friend.
It's always a pleasure to read of likeness and kinship. Much thanks and gratitude - 💙
🌹
B
I wholly appreciate you, and I all your kindness, my friend.
It's always a pleasure to read of likeness and kinship. Much thanks and gratitude - 💙
🌹
B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 6:01pm
Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 2:51am
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 8:27pm
Oh this one aches ... great flow ... the variation in font captivates ... causes pauses ... excellent spacing ... wonderful B ...
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 3:06am
Hey there LilD.... I really love the feedback.... and I very much appreciate you and your thoughtfulness... glad you could feel that ache....
🌹 - 💙
B
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 9:00pm
Exceptional as usual. I love the beautiful image to accompany this sad write.
"left beating
forgotten beats"
That brings a feeling about in me. I enjoyed this Blue.
"left beating
forgotten beats"
That brings a feeling about in me. I enjoyed this Blue.
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 3:15am
Hey Lj :)
I very much enjoy bringing about feelings within, dear lady... - What a killer compliment!
I wholly appreciate your thoughtfulness and the generous list add...
A humble thanks and always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I very much enjoy bringing about feelings within, dear lady... - What a killer compliment!
I wholly appreciate your thoughtfulness and the generous list add...
A humble thanks and always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
13th Jun 2021 10:45pm
Lost within the loudness of unspoken words I find meaning, inspiration, and wisdom written on silent pages.* ..... *(contented sigh)
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Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
I adore your comments and that sigh even more so!!... Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, Richard.
A true pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
A true pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 1:40am
Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 3:07am
As is this comment, LV.
Thanks for reading and leaving me your thoughts.
Much appreciated, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Thanks for reading and leaving me your thoughts.
Much appreciated, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
14th Jun 2021 5:14pm
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
15th Jun 2021 1:28pm
Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
16th Jun 2021 2:05am
You're too kind, my friend 🙏🏻
My smile widens, knowing that you enjoyed it!
I appreciate you stopping by to read and leaving me your thoughts...
Always nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
xoxo
My smile widens, knowing that you enjoyed it!
I appreciate you stopping by to read and leaving me your thoughts...
Always nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
xoxo
Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
22nd Jun 2021 9:54pm
You wrote the story of my life with your inimitable passion that gathers like a storm front over Montana with the thunder of your pen. Solitude if chosen by me can be a blessing. But when beyond my control it is onerous. Love the depth of your lyricism that rolls like a mighty ocean wave for me to ride on the surf board of my mind. Your truth unfolds with the colors you reveal from a spectrum once invisible.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
19th Jul 2021 2:35am
Re: Re. lost in the loudness of solitude
19th Jul 2021 4:10am
I appreciate you saying so, Walter.
It means a lot to me.
Nice of you to stop by 🦋
🌹 - B
It means a lot to me.
Nice of you to stop by 🦋
🌹 - B