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"U L T I M A T E P O E T E S S"
༺-~✶~-༻
✨ a salute to all our wonderful Lady-Poets ✨
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Her ink vibrates in universal amplitude,
with such sure vibrant force pure ecstasies exude …
releasing with each graceful sweep of every stroke,
her words resound upon the page, as tho’ they'd spoke.
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Her flowing mane, as ebon as the Stygian night,
or golden as soft-textured braids, corn-silken bright.
I’ve seen her auburn waves, as hot as Hades’ fire;
or, lustrous brunette strands, that spark ardent desire.
-~✶~-
Oh, passion’s touch, awake unto life’s fervent dreams,
that evermore, desires and wantings merge as streams.
From every heartsong pours her sweet elixir’s voice,
eternal rapture ~ captured … aye, you'll have no choice.
-~✶~-
The shape she takes, it may be lithe or slightly slim …
might be, she’s strong or stout; perhaps, just prim.
She’s every woman who has bravely shared her heart,
learned how to charm us with her wonders from the start.
-~✶~-
Each smitten bard in every land and realm worldwide,
has surely yearned to have her writing by his side …
impressive with her graceful wisdom’s keen surprise,
indulge him with the magic in her spark’ling eyes,
-~✶~-
If Free Verse, Sonnet, Villanelle, or lovely Prose,
it matters not what kind of poem she bestows;
for, when she blends her heart and soul into her ink,
it's hers you'll be ~ when she signs with a knowing wink*
༺-~✶~-༻
✨ a salute to all our wonderful Lady-Poets ✨
༺-~✶~-༻
Her ink vibrates in universal amplitude,
with such sure vibrant force pure ecstasies exude …
releasing with each graceful sweep of every stroke,
her words resound upon the page, as tho’ they'd spoke.
-~✶~-
Her flowing mane, as ebon as the Stygian night,
or golden as soft-textured braids, corn-silken bright.
I’ve seen her auburn waves, as hot as Hades’ fire;
or, lustrous brunette strands, that spark ardent desire.
-~✶~-
Oh, passion’s touch, awake unto life’s fervent dreams,
that evermore, desires and wantings merge as streams.
From every heartsong pours her sweet elixir’s voice,
eternal rapture ~ captured … aye, you'll have no choice.
-~✶~-
The shape she takes, it may be lithe or slightly slim …
might be, she’s strong or stout; perhaps, just prim.
She’s every woman who has bravely shared her heart,
learned how to charm us with her wonders from the start.
-~✶~-
Each smitten bard in every land and realm worldwide,
has surely yearned to have her writing by his side …
impressive with her graceful wisdom’s keen surprise,
indulge him with the magic in her spark’ling eyes,
-~✶~-
If Free Verse, Sonnet, Villanelle, or lovely Prose,
it matters not what kind of poem she bestows;
for, when she blends her heart and soul into her ink,
it's hers you'll be ~ when she signs with a knowing wink*
༺-~✶~-༻
Published 11th Jun 2021
| Edited 12th Jun 2021
Author's Note
[illustration courtesy of Wikimedia Commons free images]
Quatrains in Iambic Hexameter (12-syllables or 6-poetic feet), with an a-a-b-b, c-c-d-d, etc; Rhyme Scheme.
Please, feel free to offer whatever constructive advice or comments you believe will help! : )
Quatrains in Iambic Hexameter (12-syllables or 6-poetic feet), with an a-a-b-b, c-c-d-d, etc; Rhyme Scheme.
Please, feel free to offer whatever constructive advice or comments you believe will help! : )
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
11th Jun 2021 4:32pm
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11th Jun 2021 5:45pm
Hi-ya, Tim, My Very Good Friend! 🍂
I thank you ever-so humbly and gratefully for sharing this one with me.
Whom else, but You, would truly understand the high degree of my love, respect, admiration, and envy of our wonderful Poetesses … because, I know your sentiments are the same as mine, and you equally feel it, too … You could have easily written this piece, only better. 👍
Bless you your ever inspiring praise and expressed appreciation.
Sunshine 'pon all your days! ⁓ Richard 🍃
I thank you ever-so humbly and gratefully for sharing this one with me.
Whom else, but You, would truly understand the high degree of my love, respect, admiration, and envy of our wonderful Poetesses … because, I know your sentiments are the same as mine, and you equally feel it, too … You could have easily written this piece, only better. 👍
Bless you your ever inspiring praise and expressed appreciation.
Sunshine 'pon all your days! ⁓ Richard 🍃
11th Jun 2021 11:34pm
Hi Richard,
So...
Is there really any better read, this fine evening?? I ponder, as my thoughts point to those who derive the purest sustenance from writing, almost otherworldly in their contemplation of thought. Loveliness, incarnate— and who this very ode of celebration; gorgeously crafted with care, tenderness and a gravitas that true poetess' far more worthy and superior than I, deserve... Nay, require. Now they shall be so fortunate to possess....
Women of such unmitigated talent, it leaves tongues speechless and hearts beating triple. Their lights, hopeful shine a condoning glow upon this, this very heart of yours. Twined of Quatrains in Iambic Hexameter and of all your wonderful capacities to sway, swoon and soulful soothe.... O' the luck, those muses and goddesses of yours.... 🍀
Awe-inspiring!!
🌹-💙
xo
-S
So...
Is there really any better read, this fine evening?? I ponder, as my thoughts point to those who derive the purest sustenance from writing, almost otherworldly in their contemplation of thought. Loveliness, incarnate— and who this very ode of celebration; gorgeously crafted with care, tenderness and a gravitas that true poetess' far more worthy and superior than I, deserve... Nay, require. Now they shall be so fortunate to possess....
Women of such unmitigated talent, it leaves tongues speechless and hearts beating triple. Their lights, hopeful shine a condoning glow upon this, this very heart of yours. Twined of Quatrains in Iambic Hexameter and of all your wonderful capacities to sway, swoon and soulful soothe.... O' the luck, those muses and goddesses of yours.... 🍀
Awe-inspiring!!
🌹-💙
xo
-S
Ah-so, m'wondrously astute ✨Lady-Poet 🌾
'Twas with You in mind when stirring sparkling stardust glints into my ink to compose this homage to the fairest of our most glorious poetic gender … thus, each, in their own charming ways of you, have a share in this verse of sweet accolades.
That you find such fortuitous "luck" glowing from out my words, so graciously and generously portrayed in your own bright poetic voice, assures a hopeful bard he's succeeded in his aim to touch the heart so purely divine.
Thank you, ever-so warmly for blessing this earnestly rendered poem to Thee.
With tenderest hugs and winsome smiles ~
across the vaporously wispy miles! ⁓ Richard 🍃
'Twas with You in mind when stirring sparkling stardust glints into my ink to compose this homage to the fairest of our most glorious poetic gender … thus, each, in their own charming ways of you, have a share in this verse of sweet accolades.
That you find such fortuitous "luck" glowing from out my words, so graciously and generously portrayed in your own bright poetic voice, assures a hopeful bard he's succeeded in his aim to touch the heart so purely divine.
Thank you, ever-so warmly for blessing this earnestly rendered poem to Thee.
With tenderest hugs and winsome smiles ~
across the vaporously wispy miles! ⁓ Richard 🍃
12th Jun 2021 6:23am
Heart weeping, amazed and dismayed at the wicked genius of your luring prose. A beautiful web woven [wink, wink, nudge, nudge]
12th Jun 2021 3:49pm
G'day, Syr Poet 🥂
Ever-so humbly and gratefully, I thank you for selecting one of my pieces to read and reflect upon.
An expected reflection: "Heart weeping, amazed" … but, "and dismayed at the wicked genius of your luring prose," is one of the most lofty compliments from one knowing bard to another, I've 'til now received.
Reverently yours, Dear Syr … with a low, sweeping bow! ⁓ Richard🍃
Ever-so humbly and gratefully, I thank you for selecting one of my pieces to read and reflect upon.
An expected reflection: "Heart weeping, amazed" … but, "and dismayed at the wicked genius of your luring prose," is one of the most lofty compliments from one knowing bard to another, I've 'til now received.
Reverently yours, Dear Syr … with a low, sweeping bow! ⁓ Richard🍃
2nd Jul 2021 10:34pm
18th Jul 2021 5:28pm
With my most humbly gracious gratitude, Dear Poetess 🍷
How sweet you've liked and added it to your reading list, too.
I thank you ever-so warmly for selecting the poem I wrote about You to read and praise … happy hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃
How sweet you've liked and added it to your reading list, too.
I thank you ever-so warmly for selecting the poem I wrote about You to read and praise … happy hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃
16th Jul 2021 3:13am
This is my maiden visit being not a maid but I am a crude poet of sorts of erotica though decent But not many poetesses read me except three regularly Never the less let me make a simple comment If only Shakespeare could return to comment it would be like showering laurels to poetry of the stature as this you do. Forgive my intrusion to the ocean of poets here of whom you are first for sure.
MY HAT'S OFF It has been a whole night's pleasure condensed here . I RLD THIS will read again and again.
LET THE GALAXY FALL TONIGHT WITH ALL ITS TORCHLIKE LIGHT IT MIGHT
MY HAT'S OFF It has been a whole night's pleasure condensed here . I RLD THIS will read again and again.
LET THE GALAXY FALL TONIGHT WITH ALL ITS TORCHLIKE LIGHT IT MIGHT
A most beautiful review, Kind Syr 🌿
Such thoughtful accolades as yours are that which both gratify and encourage a bard's desire to keep writing and sharing.
To receive commentary on my humble efforts, with Shakespeare in the same breath, lifts my spirits to soaring height.
I could not have asked for a more generous or rewarding review than this of yours, Dear Poet.
Thank you sincerely, and for adding to your Reading List! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Such thoughtful accolades as yours are that which both gratify and encourage a bard's desire to keep writing and sharing.
To receive commentary on my humble efforts, with Shakespeare in the same breath, lifts my spirits to soaring height.
I could not have asked for a more generous or rewarding review than this of yours, Dear Poet.
Thank you sincerely, and for adding to your Reading List! ⁓ Richard 🍃
18th Jul 2021 5:52pm
KINDNESS poet compose more read some of mine for sure
poetry and poets must endure
poetry and poets must endure
28th Jul 2021 00:03am
"She’s every woman who has bravely shared her heart"
This is the verse which dragged my attention, it expresses a lot, but I would say that sharing "her mind" would have need far more bravery😉. It would have left her totally unarmed!
This is the verse which dragged my attention, it expresses a lot, but I would say that sharing "her mind" would have need far more bravery😉. It would have left her totally unarmed!
Picture and formatting are amazing out the gate my dear RJ. But you have all the poetesses swooning with your words. Your muse no doubt is the happiest of all. ;) Your imagery is just gorgeous... Oh how the passion excites and the mythical aspects are just beautiful. Exquisite in every way.
25th May 2022 9:06pm
'She's every woman who has bravely shared her heart' - a great shout out to the variety of female poets in DUP.
