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Passion is sharper in us
I am the same as you,
Passion is much sharper in us
We can howl from suffering,
Feeling the power in the body
Obey or rule,
Delighting the flesh with pain
Without violating your rights,
We plucked the sweet fruit
We turn pain into pleasure
You can also choose any role
Leather, whips, sex toys -
High from heels to crown
Pain inside and pain outside,
Tie the ropes tighter
You draw your pattern with
Red thread on my back
Sharing a depraved soul,
Ride her wave of sensations
You are an artist of new feelings
You create on a living canvas
Pain is one of all the arts
where you suffer and burn
A slave wriggles and moans,
Torment for love is a game
A lovely chorus of dark desire
Bondage and discipline
Dominance and submission
Sadism and masochism
Pain inside and pain outside,
Tie the ropes tighter
Passion is much sharper in us
We can howl from suffering,
Feeling the power in the body
Obey or rule,
Delighting the flesh with pain
Without violating your rights,
We plucked the sweet fruit
We turn pain into pleasure
You can also choose any role
Leather, whips, sex toys -
High from heels to crown
Pain inside and pain outside,
Tie the ropes tighter
You draw your pattern with
Red thread on my back
Sharing a depraved soul,
Ride her wave of sensations
You are an artist of new feelings
You create on a living canvas
Pain is one of all the arts
where you suffer and burn
A slave wriggles and moans,
Torment for love is a game
A lovely chorus of dark desire
Bondage and discipline
Dominance and submission
Sadism and masochism
Pain inside and pain outside,
Tie the ropes tighter
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Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 9:05pm
Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 9:57pm
Hey Gin! It's always great to see you. I can also see we have some similar likes and desires. ;) Thank you so much for the comment. I am really happy you think it's beautiful! ;) xo
Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 9:08pm
Now thats a great night in
Very sexy read sweetie. Absolutely lived every line and stanza
Great job, so vivid. I won't say where my brain was at lol
Love and light Ron xx
Very sexy read sweetie. Absolutely lived every line and stanza
Great job, so vivid. I won't say where my brain was at lol
Love and light Ron xx
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Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 10:03pm
Hey Ron! Absolutely, or better yet a weekend in. I am here for you, to write you sexy stuff. I love living every line, that's how you really experience reading something. ;) Thank you so much for the comment and compliment. I am really happy if I could take your brain somewhere vivid and ... I can imagine where you were at. (and I like it) lol ;) xo
Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 9:53pm
Holy freaking hell yes kristina. This is a beautiful spill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 10:18pm
Hey Why1skey! I love the 'freaking hell yes'! I am all about the beautiful spill. Going to stop there... ;) Where the hell have you been? xo
Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 10:20pm
This is a stark vision and holds bdsm needs in an alluring arena
Dark desire illuminates in a dimly lit room with red lights and candlelight waiting to be spoken ...
Superb imagery
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
Dark desire illuminates in a dimly lit room with red lights and candlelight waiting to be spoken ...
Superb imagery
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
8th Jun 2021 1:10pm
What could be more alluring than a beautiful cocktail of pleasure and pain served between two sensitive people in need. ;) Really happy you like the imagery and I love your imagery too; thinking of those dark desires waiting to be spoken and enacted in a dimly lit room... xo
Thank you so much for the BIG LIKE and RL.
Thank you so much for the BIG LIKE and RL.
Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 10:49pm
Oh yes! Tighter! Wow what a great UP creator...oh, it aches. Thank you, hugs and peace, oral
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Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
8th Jun 2021 1:15pm
Tighter indeed! I love the Wow and creating UPs that ache for you. ;)
Thank you so much for the comment Oral, hugs. xo
Thank you so much for the comment Oral, hugs. xo
Re. Passion is sharper in us
7th Jun 2021 11:47pm
Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
8th Jun 2021 1:34pm
I hate to think of you starving and thirsty Absence.
What would you like to eat and drink? (you don't need to answer that lol)
xo
What would you like to eat and drink? (you don't need to answer that lol)
xo
Re. Passion is sharper in us
8th Jun 2021 3:02am
It's hard to return ti living on the plains after living on the edge. There's an addiction to the charge atmosphere, the knowing that unknowing can be exquisite. Tight piece X and the pic amplifies it, tight work Lady
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Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
8th Jun 2021 1:31pm
Don't we know it I_IS_ME! Living on the edge is definitely addictive and you captured that perfectly. Glad you thought the pic was a good addition and of course I love the tight! Keeping it tight... xo
Re. Passion is sharper in us
8th Jun 2021 4:18am
Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
8th Jun 2021 1:21pm
That definitely makes me happy! And I need whips and chains to keep me from getting completely out of control. ;) xo
Re. Passion is sharper in us
11th Jun 2021 7:45pm
Is that a challenge Kristina? I definitely felt that need to rise to a challenge.
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Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
11th Jun 2021 8:40pm
So many challenges Remy, I know I am a challenge! So rising to the challenge and often is definitely essential. ;) xo
Re. Passion is sharper in us
14th Jul 2021 11:36pm
Cheese us crust, that was hot, straight out of the oven.
"Without violating your rights," sounds like there was a contract somewhere in there (JK).
Excellent titillating write Kx.
"Without violating your rights," sounds like there was a contract somewhere in there (JK).
Excellent titillating write Kx.
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Re: Re. Passion is sharper in us
15th Jul 2021 3:11pm
Everyone loves cheese us crust, right? especially straight out of the oven, piping hot. That line is more in reference to wanting it, consensual pain and passion. ;) Really glad you found it titillating. xo
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