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Taken
I open my eyes to the discomfort between my legs spread
Something smells musky and i think sweat
I feel hands holding down my head
My body is being taken under threat
My screams and shouts are met with fists
The more i fight the harder he persists
With one hand holding both my wrists
Forced me open i couldnt resist
Hard thrusts and spit dripping on my chest
He kept cuming in like an unwanted guest
Pulling my head back by my hair
Wripped the rest of my clothes of till i was bare
On my knees like a dogg i was taken brutally
Enganged in mutany
Frozen stupidly
In painfull agony
My flesh is torn and and burning within
I can feel the bruising on my skin
A reminder of the pleasured grin
This moment forever the firing pin
I couldnt give consent while asleep
How should i have known he was a creep
Doesnt matter what you say the deed is done
He raped me yes he had his fun
Something smells musky and i think sweat
I feel hands holding down my head
My body is being taken under threat
My screams and shouts are met with fists
The more i fight the harder he persists
With one hand holding both my wrists
Forced me open i couldnt resist
Hard thrusts and spit dripping on my chest
He kept cuming in like an unwanted guest
Pulling my head back by my hair
Wripped the rest of my clothes of till i was bare
On my knees like a dogg i was taken brutally
Enganged in mutany
Frozen stupidly
In painfull agony
My flesh is torn and and burning within
I can feel the bruising on my skin
A reminder of the pleasured grin
This moment forever the firing pin
I couldnt give consent while asleep
How should i have known he was a creep
Doesnt matter what you say the deed is done
He raped me yes he had his fun
Author's Note
90% of woman who are raped know the offender. There is a thing like being too friendly...
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Re. Taken
7th Jun 2021 8:09pm
Tough to read this and we know that it was tougher for you to endure. Yes most women do know their rapist, but these are indeed sick creeps. This isn't your average relationship, so don't sour on human relationships. Tough and yet a tight write Lady
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Re: Re. Taken
7th Jun 2021 8:13pm
I think shame brings too many people to doors that seem to be close but is in actual fact open. We just need to push a bit. No use crying over spilled milk.
Re. Taken
7th Jun 2021 8:40pm
Such a powerful write, such a awful but very real subject. Personally I believe rapists deserve the death penalty. Here the sentences are a joke. Where sadly the victim is left with a life sentence of trauma
Great awareness piece
Love and light
Ron x
Great awareness piece
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Taken
7th Jun 2021 8:47pm
Re: Re. Taken
7th Jun 2021 8:52pm
Rape isn't fair in any place. Forcing yourself on someone who doesn't want your attentions is disgusting and vile.
I hope every rapist dies the most painful death and burns for a eternity in hell
Ron
I hope every rapist dies the most painful death and burns for a eternity in hell
Ron
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Re. Taken
9th Jun 2021 12:41pm
Re: Re. Taken
9th Jun 2021 12:43pm
Re. Taken
9th Jun 2021 3:02pm
Oh, dear lady....
My first thoughts are for you and my hopes that you've had an opportunity to heal in all ways and that you continue a process of healing, if possible.... Yes, this piece is indeed difficult to read, but that's the point, I think you are braving and being an utter badass by making... Life can be fucking brutal and awfulness happens to good people. The statics of women raped by a known attacker are astonishing and often the case. My heart aches you had to experience such horrific, intimate violence and I hope this write is a good source of catharsis for you and perhaps allows others to see they're not alone.
Btw, you're never ever EVER to blame or is there ever ANY excuse for this behavior, like you being too friendly... You're never at fault!
Thank you for sharing this poignant and truthful write... 🙏🏻
Much respect your way,
🌹-B
My first thoughts are for you and my hopes that you've had an opportunity to heal in all ways and that you continue a process of healing, if possible.... Yes, this piece is indeed difficult to read, but that's the point, I think you are braving and being an utter badass by making... Life can be fucking brutal and awfulness happens to good people. The statics of women raped by a known attacker are astonishing and often the case. My heart aches you had to experience such horrific, intimate violence and I hope this write is a good source of catharsis for you and perhaps allows others to see they're not alone.
Btw, you're never ever EVER to blame or is there ever ANY excuse for this behavior, like you being too friendly... You're never at fault!
Thank you for sharing this poignant and truthful write... 🙏🏻
Much respect your way,
🌹-B
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Re: Re. Taken
9th Jun 2021 3:37pm
Thank you very much dear lady. I am sometimes judged for being to open and to forward. But letting bad things ruin good things is crap. Despite these events, I enjoy life. I thank you fo reading.
Re. Taken
14th Jun 2021 12:02pm
Wish there was more justice for rape victims. Really glad you wrote this poem. More people need to talk about these things. And more people need to demand justice.
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Re: Re. Taken
14th Jun 2021 12:13pm
Justice is a myth for many. I thank you for reading. My mental chains are broken and i think his death was pain full enough. So i got mine.
Re: Re. Taken
14th Jun 2021 12:13pm
Justice is a myth for many. I thank you for reading. My mental chains are broken and i think his death was pain full enough. So i got mine.
Re. Taken
14th Jun 2021 1:57pm
Woah a most awesome unique poem on behalf of a rape victim. You express it in a moving gripping way. Damn the rapists. Kudos!!
plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Re: Re. Taken
15th Jun 2021 3:04pm
Its life babe... The past gave me a lot of material to build my future with. So i am good...👌