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Claim Your Prize
Close the door
flip the light,
dark the room
dim the sight.
Pull the covers
spead the silk,
taste my lips
sweet as milk.
Growl my name
fuck me bare,
make me scream
pull my hair.
Tie me down
choke me tight,
rock your hips
dance all night.
Claim your prize
sate your need,
jerk your body
spill your seed.
flip the light,
dark the room
dim the sight.
Pull the covers
spead the silk,
taste my lips
sweet as milk.
Growl my name
fuck me bare,
make me scream
pull my hair.
Tie me down
choke me tight,
rock your hips
dance all night.
Claim your prize
sate your need,
jerk your body
spill your seed.
Published 6th Jun 2021
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6th Jun 2021 11:35am
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7th Jun 2021 00:11am
This is a playbook
There no surprises here
It's like an instruction manual
Follow the recipe to the end in order to achieve the desired outcome
Very concise
There no surprises here
It's like an instruction manual
Follow the recipe to the end in order to achieve the desired outcome
Very concise
7th Jun 2021 11:59am
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8th Jun 2021 9:14pm
Well positioned imagery , exquisitely rendered ,
with a poem so fitting in it's form , and a spell
of seductive eloquence...
Truly rhymed with sensual beat , a weaving of
word inviting and invoking , provoking feeling
of pure passion intertwined with playful fun...
Very Well Rendered , Gypsy Soul !
with a poem so fitting in it's form , and a spell
of seductive eloquence...
Truly rhymed with sensual beat , a weaving of
word inviting and invoking , provoking feeling
of pure passion intertwined with playful fun...
Very Well Rendered , Gypsy Soul !
9th Jun 2021 4:57pm
Very Nice!! I like the way you think Rachel. Btw I love your other work too. Following
9th Jun 2021 9:38pm
Thank you so much for taking the time to not only read my work, but comment as well! Glad you enjoy it. 😊
12th Jun 2021 00:56am
Pull the covers
spead the silk,
taste my lips
sweet as milk
Omg I love this erotic art you wrote😩💜
spead the silk,
taste my lips
sweet as milk
Omg I love this erotic art you wrote😩💜
12th Jun 2021 00:59am
"GULP!" 🙄
Gosh, Lady Gypsy,
I thought I smelled smoke after logging-on … so, I followed the fumes and found this delightfully rendered suite of Rhyming Quatrains, very skillfully rendered into three-syllable a-b-c-b, d-e-f-e, etc; lines, each a sheer sensual treat of captivating imagery. Particularly, I'm enamored by how smooothly seamless your poetic motions seem to blend, one into the next, twelve words in succulently-warm, gushing stanzas ⁓ a virtual waterfall of wondrously descending pleasures, ending in a rippling pool of irresistible invitation – only a knowing poetess could so eloquently and seductively pose … ummm, and what a rare prize, indeed, it would be to claim. ; )
Your artwork choice and title teases with perfect imagery, leading your already near-captivated reader to what's coming next, and without a single disappointing moment … in fact, I wish there were some way I could sprinkle sparkling stardust over every word, to exemplify how they touched my senses.
Gorgeously scintillating, skillfully and beautifully presented … my only issue is that when a provocatively lovely lady says "fuck", I'm a sure, shaky-kneed goner … blush*
Goodness, I liked it so much I almost wrote you a book … LOL!
Before I wear out my welcome, let me offer my ever-so grateful HUG of thanks to thee for these truly pleasurable moments spent here with you upon your pages, Dear Poetess ⁓ Richard 🍃
Gosh, Lady Gypsy,
I thought I smelled smoke after logging-on … so, I followed the fumes and found this delightfully rendered suite of Rhyming Quatrains, very skillfully rendered into three-syllable a-b-c-b, d-e-f-e, etc; lines, each a sheer sensual treat of captivating imagery. Particularly, I'm enamored by how smooothly seamless your poetic motions seem to blend, one into the next, twelve words in succulently-warm, gushing stanzas ⁓ a virtual waterfall of wondrously descending pleasures, ending in a rippling pool of irresistible invitation – only a knowing poetess could so eloquently and seductively pose … ummm, and what a rare prize, indeed, it would be to claim. ; )
Your artwork choice and title teases with perfect imagery, leading your already near-captivated reader to what's coming next, and without a single disappointing moment … in fact, I wish there were some way I could sprinkle sparkling stardust over every word, to exemplify how they touched my senses.
Gorgeously scintillating, skillfully and beautifully presented … my only issue is that when a provocatively lovely lady says "fuck", I'm a sure, shaky-kneed goner … blush*
Goodness, I liked it so much I almost wrote you a book … LOL!
Before I wear out my welcome, let me offer my ever-so grateful HUG of thanks to thee for these truly pleasurable moments spent here with you upon your pages, Dear Poetess ⁓ Richard 🍃
As the wizard behind the so called curtain, and the *ahem* "INSPIRATION" for this steamy piece, I can definitively say that my SheWolf is every bit a prize I've claimed!!! Unlike anything I've ever experienced!!! Otherworldly to be completely honest!!! The finest, most decadent, fulfilling, tantalizing, exotic, erotic and down right delicious piece of yummy rump I could have ever pinned so tightly beneath my silk, um, sheets. She is beyond my wildest dreams/fantasy/ encounter I have ever been involved in. And, most definitely,will ever be part of, for the rest of entire luckfilled existence!!!!
-sandman
-sandman
