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her.
Stretched out on the floor
our 'bed of pillows'
laid between my legs
me, leaning against the couch
her head and body rested
on my chest— within my arms
We watched Swingers
for the umpteenth time
Absent-mindedly,
her fingertips
circled the delicate skin
where hand meets wrist
bewitched
I watched her, in tantalizing turmoil
relished every caress
deeply inhaled her smell
of coconut and Florida sunshine
a combination
that inflames
without fail to this day,
when sense memory
instantly recognizes,
triggering perfect remembrance.
Pinpointing my sexuality's origins,
is where my heart and body's
enmeshed realizations
bore confidence
causing a conjoined reaction
of newly blossomed raw ardour
along with a freeing ease
her
her affects on me
Were erotic relief,
making perfect sense.
Desiring her
was so exquisitely right
cherished and white fucking hot
giving me clear understanding
that was always how my tide flowed
how it was always there
Any ingering curiousness
or questioning need
was uncovered, met and satiated
Everything
i had once hidden
shined so beautifully
once owned
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 5th Jun 2021
| Edited 5th Feb 2024
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Memories of utterly letting go and fully accepting that what I desired was 100% worthy of exploring and something absolutely innate.... Such freedom...
Memories of utterly letting go and fully accepting that what I desired was 100% worthy of exploring and something absolutely innate.... Such freedom...
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Re. her.
5th Jun 2021 10:11pm
Beautiful piece gorgeous
Brave, honest, Beautiful I absolutely love this
BRAVO. girl you got this bang on
Love and light
Ron xx
Brave, honest, Beautiful I absolutely love this
BRAVO. girl you got this bang on
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 3:32am
Thanks so much, Ron. It's being true to yourself, in the end, that's what matters. I appreciate you, the generous list add and all your lovely support.
🌹-💙
B
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. her.
It's being comfortable in your own skin, indeed.
Ty for reading, A.
I appreciate you, and your thoughtfulness.
🌹
Ty for reading, A.
I appreciate you, and your thoughtfulness.
🌹
Re. her.
5th Jun 2021 10:12pm
loving this. I was always always was afraid of wanting to admit that i was attracted to females too. Having had a few encounters i can say it is liberating. 🌹👌
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Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 3:57am
Hi there ;)
It's exactly that...Sly, liberating and refreshing to be exactly who you're meant to be. I'm glad you came to that realization! I appreciate your thoughtful comments, the list add and the open honesty you shared. I thank you for stopping by, my dear
You're always welcomed here 🦋
🌹-💙
B
It's exactly that...Sly, liberating and refreshing to be exactly who you're meant to be. I'm glad you came to that realization! I appreciate your thoughtful comments, the list add and the open honesty you shared. I thank you for stopping by, my dear
You're always welcomed here 🦋
🌹-💙
B
Re. her.
5th Jun 2021 10:21pm
For me --
"A lifetime of curious neediness
met and satiated
in every way
i had once hidden " <<---------------relatable for me only with my Domme who once was and satisfied ALL my needs (even during our de-collaring ceremony) i shall ever retain a lifetime of HER and what SHE brings.
That said,
i understand this spill more than many who know me think.
This is a spill that needed to be spilt
and spilt, publically.
super spit, Beautiful Sister
"A lifetime of curious neediness
met and satiated
in every way
i had once hidden " <<---------------relatable for me only with my Domme who once was and satisfied ALL my needs (even during our de-collaring ceremony) i shall ever retain a lifetime of HER and what SHE brings.
That said,
i understand this spill more than many who know me think.
This is a spill that needed to be spilt
and spilt, publically.
super spit, Beautiful Sister
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Re: Re. her.
You're kinship in relatability is absolutely warranted! I definitely believe and can see the feelings of similarity between you and your Domme, T...It's so apparent and understandable... I wholly appreciate that.
Thank you for your thoughtful kind words and your lovely capacity for understanding.
This wasn't /isn't a new reveal for me, it's a memory of that revelation from my early twenties...
It's still as fresh today...as it was then.
I have missed you - it was such a pleasure to see you 🦋, Tallen!
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
Thank you for your thoughtful kind words and your lovely capacity for understanding.
This wasn't /isn't a new reveal for me, it's a memory of that revelation from my early twenties...
It's still as fresh today...as it was then.
I have missed you - it was such a pleasure to see you 🦋, Tallen!
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 7:25am
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Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 7:27am
Dawww... (blushes)
Your comments are extremely kind.
Ty so much for everything Tim.
This was a memory of my revelation but it still seems like yesterday....
You're such a bright force... I see it!
🌹-💙
B
Your comments are extremely kind.
Ty so much for everything Tim.
This was a memory of my revelation but it still seems like yesterday....
You're such a bright force... I see it!
🌹-💙
B
Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 00:02am
BRAVO! A+++ You are so amazing and on target, a great example and leader for freedom. So glad to be your friend my Princess and a real honest poet. Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral
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Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 7:29am
You have me beaming with your lovely comments, Oral. Ty for stopping by and taking the time to leave your thoughts. I try my best to be as honest and forthright as I can.... this was a memory of my past, that's all....
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹
B
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹
B
Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 2:57am
Dearest, Lady Blue
What a beautiful liaison❣❣ It pleases me no end when one finds their truth and has the courage to act on their genuine, loving, impulses. I love the entire piece and found thr 4th stanza exceptionally romantic...this combination thrills me "enmeshed realizations...of newly blossomed raw ardour"
Frankly this passage choked me up because it's an epiphany I yearn for,
"Relief, at it finally making perfect sense"
Bravissima, my goddess BB🐻💞🐰
What a beautiful liaison❣❣ It pleases me no end when one finds their truth and has the courage to act on their genuine, loving, impulses. I love the entire piece and found thr 4th stanza exceptionally romantic...this combination thrills me "enmeshed realizations...of newly blossomed raw ardour"
Frankly this passage choked me up because it's an epiphany I yearn for,
"Relief, at it finally making perfect sense"
Bravissima, my goddess BB🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. her.
Ohh BB!
Your beautiful big heart has me all choked up, reading! I thank you, wholly, for your unbelievably beautiful sentiments. I am always so very grateful for you, your ability to motivate me and reveal bits of yourself (lovely beautiful bits!) that make me smile in kinship. You're generous, in your list add and in all that you offer me, in pure friendship. I always feel so terrifically lucky.
All my warmest thanks and regards,
🌹-💙 - 🐻 - 🐰
xoxo
B
Your beautiful big heart has me all choked up, reading! I thank you, wholly, for your unbelievably beautiful sentiments. I am always so very grateful for you, your ability to motivate me and reveal bits of yourself (lovely beautiful bits!) that make me smile in kinship. You're generous, in your list add and in all that you offer me, in pure friendship. I always feel so terrifically lucky.
All my warmest thanks and regards,
🌹-💙 - 🐻 - 🐰
xoxo
B
Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 7:51am
Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 6:23am
You explore that beautiful smart strong sexy woman like yourself. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 7:30am
Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 6:49am
Writing in my notepad. -088
PS. No fair, now I have to compete with you too!!! Thanks for sharing.
PS. No fair, now I have to compete with you too!!! Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 7:05am
lol 😂 😂
Omg I'm dying laughing......
Thanks for the giggle!
(no one can compete with you, Leo!)
Omg I'm dying laughing......
Thanks for the giggle!
(no one can compete with you, Leo!)
Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 8:10am
Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 2:35pm
haha...
It's my favorite hat, thanks for that notice!
I appreciate it and your thoughtful comments /list add, Cipher
You have me glowing!
🌹-💙
xo
B
It's my favorite hat, thanks for that notice!
I appreciate it and your thoughtful comments /list add, Cipher
You have me glowing!
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re: Re. her.
7th Jun 2021 2:24pm
Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 4:16pm
Truly wonderful ... beautiful ... delicate ... yet bold ... enchanting in every detail ... pulled me in ... lulled me along ... such sensuality ... the embodiment of erotic poetry ... full of wonder ... delight ... all I can do is ... *sigh* ...
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Re: Re. her.
I have had a bad day today and I'm serious in saying that your thoughtful comments just made my day exponentially better, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
I am so so thankful for you and utterly appreciative of that *sigh*
My heart fills with pure gratitude—
🌹-💙
xo
B
I am so so thankful for you and utterly appreciative of that *sigh*
My heart fills with pure gratitude—
🌹-💙
xo
B
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Jun 2021 6:45am
6th Jun 2021 4:23pm
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Re: Re. her.
6th Jun 2021 10:36pm
Re. her.
First, "Howdy, Purdy Lady!" 🌿
Next, I love you in that sassyfras chapeau, with feminine bow on the band, and the irresistible charismatic shyness of your gorgeous sapphire-eyed demeanor that makes one "wanna!...." I'm sure you well know of us amorously compulsive boys. 😏
And, not least: All serious kidding aside, I want you to know I've "never" experienced a more honored and deeply privileged moment than when taken so thoroughly and sincerely into the spellbound glory of your "coming out!"
Ohhh, goodness-ME, Susan Dear, how eloquently and skillfully you've so naturally and freely gifted this auspicious occasion unto us by, ever-so masterfully, boldly, and openly ~ through the star-blended ink scribed from your golden pen.
The sheer beauty and heart-stroked motions of your joyful hand made your words virtually dance upon the page, off into the ethereal fibre of my soul, thrilling me in the effulgent glow of your, heretofore, most personal loving treasure trove avowal of "Her" … ohhh, Angel Poetess, my heart soars for the two of you.
Your poem tells a tenderly loving tale, transporting us from beginning through a blissfully embracing evening into the voluptuously increase of awakening to your rapturous moment of sheer realization, and I must admit how arousing and beautiful getting there was for me. Incorrigible, I know. 😌
(to paraphrase)
"A lifetime of curious neediness
met and satiated
in every way once hidden
then, decidedly shown"
Not a word unneeded, out of place, or that I did not adore and envy in the entire poem. I'm most certainly adding this one to my Reading List for the future bliss of it.
Finally (whew!): Though, I enthusiastically and sincerely congratulate "You & Her" … for, as I know you two lovebirds will freely spread your wings and soar together, while I'll love looking up to the pristine clear lovers' sky … still, Susan, I hope this doesn't leave us boys out, altogether.
LOL! Okay, I'm ducking!!! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Next, I love you in that sassyfras chapeau, with feminine bow on the band, and the irresistible charismatic shyness of your gorgeous sapphire-eyed demeanor that makes one "wanna!...." I'm sure you well know of us amorously compulsive boys. 😏
And, not least: All serious kidding aside, I want you to know I've "never" experienced a more honored and deeply privileged moment than when taken so thoroughly and sincerely into the spellbound glory of your "coming out!"
Ohhh, goodness-ME, Susan Dear, how eloquently and skillfully you've so naturally and freely gifted this auspicious occasion unto us by, ever-so masterfully, boldly, and openly ~ through the star-blended ink scribed from your golden pen.
The sheer beauty and heart-stroked motions of your joyful hand made your words virtually dance upon the page, off into the ethereal fibre of my soul, thrilling me in the effulgent glow of your, heretofore, most personal loving treasure trove avowal of "Her" … ohhh, Angel Poetess, my heart soars for the two of you.
Your poem tells a tenderly loving tale, transporting us from beginning through a blissfully embracing evening into the voluptuously increase of awakening to your rapturous moment of sheer realization, and I must admit how arousing and beautiful getting there was for me. Incorrigible, I know. 😌
(to paraphrase)
"A lifetime of curious neediness
met and satiated
in every way once hidden
then, decidedly shown"
Not a word unneeded, out of place, or that I did not adore and envy in the entire poem. I'm most certainly adding this one to my Reading List for the future bliss of it.
Finally (whew!): Though, I enthusiastically and sincerely congratulate "You & Her" … for, as I know you two lovebirds will freely spread your wings and soar together, while I'll love looking up to the pristine clear lovers' sky … still, Susan, I hope this doesn't leave us boys out, altogether.
LOL! Okay, I'm ducking!!! ⁓ Richard 🍃
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Re: Re. her.
RICHARD!!. Holy moly!! Hi, yourself... You, crazy (lovely) amazingly passionate man!!
WHEW 💦... this needs some deep breaths... inhale/exhale..... lol..... 😉
Ohhhh me Oh myyyy!!!
I am utterly beet red (blushing) and totally awed, all while I'm still unsure what to say that would come anywhere CLOSE to being able to convey my internal feelings....I definitely can't with a measly wittle "thank you".... Sheesh..... haha 😂
I am glad you enjoyed my avatar, it's my favorite hat, indeed... Although probably too hot for FL.
Yes I'm quite familiar with those amorously compulsive boys, indeed... 😏 Mmmm.... I am a little bit taken with them, in all honesty... We all have our 'Kryptonite'... she says adorably... 😈 lol....
I am completely gobsmacked and utterly heartened that you enjoyed the written memory of a long ago reveal that still remains as pungent as ever, forever warming my heart's cockles...Your response, It's the kind that a writer dreams of getting... DREAMS OF!!... and I'm so SO humbly appreciative, Richard... Truly.
I have known a long while, my particular proclivities and I am extremely proud and open in my passions. To me, it's not about a label it's about what makes me feel. Its about the individual and how we are connected as human beings...
I am so grateful for your otherworldly feedback and sheer kindness, my bard. I hope that we can continue to cultivate and create (in our own way) this friendship going forward.
Much love and respect,
🌹-Susan
WHEW 💦... this needs some deep breaths... inhale/exhale..... lol..... 😉
Ohhhh me Oh myyyy!!!
I am utterly beet red (blushing) and totally awed, all while I'm still unsure what to say that would come anywhere CLOSE to being able to convey my internal feelings....I definitely can't with a measly wittle "thank you".... Sheesh..... haha 😂
I am glad you enjoyed my avatar, it's my favorite hat, indeed... Although probably too hot for FL.
Yes I'm quite familiar with those amorously compulsive boys, indeed... 😏 Mmmm.... I am a little bit taken with them, in all honesty... We all have our 'Kryptonite'... she says adorably... 😈 lol....
I am completely gobsmacked and utterly heartened that you enjoyed the written memory of a long ago reveal that still remains as pungent as ever, forever warming my heart's cockles...Your response, It's the kind that a writer dreams of getting... DREAMS OF!!... and I'm so SO humbly appreciative, Richard... Truly.
I have known a long while, my particular proclivities and I am extremely proud and open in my passions. To me, it's not about a label it's about what makes me feel. Its about the individual and how we are connected as human beings...
I am so grateful for your otherworldly feedback and sheer kindness, my bard. I hope that we can continue to cultivate and create (in our own way) this friendship going forward.
Much love and respect,
🌹-Susan
Re. her.
7th Jun 2021 2:44am
This is so sweet and tender.... what a lovely memory... your sensory expressions of it really took us there. Beautiful!
❤k
❤k
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Re: Re. her.
You're extremely kind and thoughtful with your comments, k. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and felt my intentions 🙏🏻... I look forward to your visits, ( I'm excited when I do see you! ) they're always such a pleasure.
🌹-B
Also, just an exciting fyi - The Tampa Bay Lightning are up 3-1 as of Saturday's game 4 in the second round of the Stanley Cup Playoffs against the Hurricanes!! Game 5 is Tues!! 🤞🏻)
Hee hee hee... I think you're one of the only other people on DU that would understand my excitement!... haha... Wish us luck!
🥅 🏒 🏒 🥅
🌹-B
Also, just an exciting fyi - The Tampa Bay Lightning are up 3-1 as of Saturday's game 4 in the second round of the Stanley Cup Playoffs against the Hurricanes!! Game 5 is Tues!! 🤞🏻)
Hee hee hee... I think you're one of the only other people on DU that would understand my excitement!... haha... Wish us luck!
🥅 🏒 🏒 🥅
Re: Re. her.
7th Jun 2021 2:33pm
Go Lightning, wrap up that series! ⚡
I haven't really been watching, but I'm keeping tabs enough to know my Bruins are still duking it out with NY Islanders. And of course, we all enjoyed our annual chance to laugh the Toronto fans right out onto the golf course. 😜
I haven't really been watching, but I'm keeping tabs enough to know my Bruins are still duking it out with NY Islanders. And of course, we all enjoyed our annual chance to laugh the Toronto fans right out onto the golf course. 😜
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Re: Re. her.
7th Jun 2021 6:14am
Ty so very much, Grace!... Love seeing you
Have a great day today! 🦋
🌹 - B
Have a great day today! 🦋
🌹 - B
Re. her.
12th Jun 2021 4:21am
The sensory and sensual imagery here sparked a place in me very deep. The scents and sensations were amazing. A truly meaningful poem of youth exploring your place with her female companion and discovering that there is real ecstasy with your own gender to be had. And why not try it out for a night or a lifetime.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. her.
You nailed it, John.
As always, you're astute in your summations and utterly spot on. Thanks for the lovely sentiments, the list add and all your support, my dear.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
As always, you're astute in your summations and utterly spot on. Thanks for the lovely sentiments, the list add and all your support, my dear.
Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. her.
14th Jul 2021 3:50pm
Loved the softness and sensuality on this. Articulate and elegant, fulfilling imaginations without going into the details of it.
Wonderful work.
Wonderful work.
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