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mosaic.
sharply disfigured
spread, jagged
course edges
suffuse
a multicolored scatter
broken pieces strewn
shore to shore
throughout vast distance
rippling of kinetic space
to effect time's own hands
gently imbued
tis an intimate
delicate wish,
where pained fragments
streaked of sweet reflective hope
dance luminous hues
of blue-violet and midnight
creative cracks
turn fortuitous
fissures,
which cause new colors
of an imagined tomorrow
O' shimmer in tender repose
as the beauty of
true brokenness
reflects their discovered mosaic
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 31st May 2021
| Edited 13th Feb 2024
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Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 2:00am
That which is broken must remain broken. Out of chaos arises beauty.
Sublime, Blue.
hugs, luv's,
buddhakitty.
Sublime, Blue.
hugs, luv's,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 4:48am
Your words are perfectly poetic and spot on, bk... truly lovely, indeed. I humbly thank you for sharing your thoughts and the generous list add, it means a lot to me, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
returned hugs and luvs
xo
🌹-💙
returned hugs and luvs
xo
Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 2:06am
Just no words. Thank you for showing me one way to write and think about brokenness.
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Re: Re. mosaic.
I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and the generous list add...I cannot express properly just how much it means to me to know that you found resonance within that idea surrounding brokenness; it's beauty in transformation and how it can morph into a creation of such exquisite grandeur that it sparkles like nothing before .... that's it exactly, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
Alway a pleasure to see you 🦋
B
🌹-💙
Alway a pleasure to see you 🦋
B
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Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 2:25am
"O' shimmer this tender repose
in the beauty of
true brokenness
lies their discovered mosaic"
A beautiful capture in words of hope. I enjoyed this write immense!
in the beauty of
true brokenness
lies their discovered mosaic"
A beautiful capture in words of hope. I enjoyed this write immense!
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Re: Re. mosaic.
Your presence here on my page is a lovely surprise. I humbly thank you for reading and your extremely kind remarks, AJ. I really appreciate it when I see specific lines that have resonated and I'm all smiles that you enjoyed those ending lines. The endings are usually where I spend some time debating....So, I am exceedingly grateful for your thoughtfulness, the list add and you taking the care and consideration you have, It's never taken it lightly.... It's a pleasure to see you 🦋
and I hope to see you again.
Warm regards,
🌹-💙
B
and I hope to see you again.
Warm regards,
🌹-💙
B
Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 2:51am
Love is very complicated.........and once the mosaic is broken, it is impossible to mend. Impossible. Kisses, Robert.
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Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 2:57am
or maybe it's easier to repair as it was joint broken pieces that created it to begin with??..... just an idea....
I adore your visits... Ty for stopping by!
🌹 - 💙
I adore your visits... Ty for stopping by!
🌹 - 💙
Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 3:00am
I can't say...........I had one GF, can't even say if it was an rship....so I am definitely not an expert in rships. Regards and kisses, Robert.
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Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 3:17am
Some find order within chaos, lines that break and along with colors merge. We are all one and then we are nothing. The mind and heart truly has no boundaries except those forced on them by the flesh. Tight piece Lady
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Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 5:34am
I agree, it's subjective when it comes to love and matters of the heart and soul.... there's not even a guarantee that the flesh is able to be a constant... I appreciate and love these comments, Me... thank you for reading and leaving them for me.
It's always a pleasure
🌹-💙
B
It's always a pleasure
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 5:41am
Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 4:27am
You are a work of art a masterpiece Bluevelvete. Keep on writing you strong smart beautiful sexy woman.
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31st May 2021 4:28am
Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 5:56am
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31st May 2021 5:38am
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Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 1:02pm
Hi there, Rian!
Yes, many a metaphor indeed...
but basically it's just about picking up ourselves and finding the courage /creativity to put together the pieces back together again.... it probably won't be or look the same, but it's possible it's better, in the end....I really enjoyed your thoughtful comments and I an so appreciative of the generous list add.
It's always a pleasure, dear poetess 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
Much love and respect,
B
Yes, many a metaphor indeed...
but basically it's just about picking up ourselves and finding the courage /creativity to put together the pieces back together again.... it probably won't be or look the same, but it's possible it's better, in the end....I really enjoyed your thoughtful comments and I an so appreciative of the generous list add.
It's always a pleasure, dear poetess 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
Much love and respect,
B
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31st May 2021 5:49am
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Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 12:47pm
I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts with me. I agree that fragility is part of our human condition but it's definitely how we pick up those pieces....thanks, my new friend 🙏🏻
I'm grateful for your comments!!
Welcome to DUP, I hope you enjoy your time here
🌹-B
I'm grateful for your comments!!
Welcome to DUP, I hope you enjoy your time here
🌹-B
Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 6:29am
That my gorgeous friend is a awesome piece of work
Girl I've said it once but I'll say it again YOU GOT SKILLLLLZZZ
Love it
Love and light
Ron x
Girl I've said it once but I'll say it again YOU GOT SKILLLLLZZZ
Love it
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 12:54pm
hahaha... I appreciate that very very kind compliment, my lovely friend! I humbly thank you for such wonderful comments and the generous list add... My smile is ear to ear... I am glad you enjoyed reading...
🌹-💙
xo
-S
🌹-💙
xo
-S
Anonymous
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31st May 2021 6:35am
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Re: Re. mosaic.
From the scattered brokenness we construct anew..... - my thoughts - 💙
I adored your comments, Stan. My heart leapt in joy that you've found resonance within... and I'm so appreciative 🙏🏻... Ty for sharing your thoughts and loveliness with me... New friendship is certainly smile inducing!
Be well today.... much kindness sent out into the ether to you and yours ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹-💙 🖤
I adored your comments, Stan. My heart leapt in joy that you've found resonance within... and I'm so appreciative 🙏🏻... Ty for sharing your thoughts and loveliness with me... New friendship is certainly smile inducing!
Be well today.... much kindness sent out into the ether to you and yours ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹-💙 🖤
Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 8:49am
That pix reminds me of me. So many broken pieces. Glued together with sheer determination to survive. Good read, B🌹
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Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 1:06pm
Awww... I love seeing you, Grace. It's actually a pic that I made from another pic that I really adore I used a website called Luna Pic to create the mosaic look and another app to color it the way I wanted... I really appreciate your thoughtful comments... and I relate to your thoughts...
Ty so much for sharing with me.
I'm so grateful 🙏🏻
🌹-B
Ty so much for sharing with me.
I'm so grateful 🙏🏻
🌹-B
Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 10:11am
Bravissima, Lady Blue❣❣ A beautiful piece filled with light and color. A wonderful message to ponder, that of a stunning mosaic created by many fractured pieces of glass. We are all beautiful amalgamations of fractured pieces...it's the hard times that we've suffered that have enhanced our individual mosaics.🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 1:12pm
Ohh Yes, BB... You're 💯 correct, there. It's also the opportunity to create a uniquely gorgeous work of art in tandem construction.... picking up the joint broken pieces, fitting them together just so.... I brand new whole made out of shared brokenness...
I am so grateful for you and the way you allow my mind to stir in creativity, too. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughtful sentiments. It's always my pleasure.
🌹-💙 - 🐻
xoxo
B
I am so grateful for you and the way you allow my mind to stir in creativity, too. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughtful sentiments. It's always my pleasure.
🌹-💙 - 🐻
xoxo
B
Re. mosaic.
31st May 2021 2:19pm
The picture and words were woven perfectly together; what we've come to expect from your creative mind. Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral
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Re: Re. mosaic.
1st Jun 2021 3:00am
Thank you, Oral
I am very appreciative of your thoughts and kind words... it's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
I am very appreciative of your thoughts and kind words... it's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
Re. mosaic.
Lady Sue,
What a most wonderfully imaginative and creatively laid kaleidoscope of colored thoughts, feelings, emotions, and dreamlike imagery in vivid poetic voice and metaphor, to captivate and fulfill any passionate poet's romantic fancies 'n ideals.
Most particularly, I was struck by the exactness of your wording and perfect artwork choices, the smoothness of syntax and spot-on line-breaks, vivid imagery, and vibrant metaphor … those aspects of poetry that make for excellent Free Verse writing.
How true, too, that life frequently prepares us for bountiful wonderments by breaking us into many facets (often painful) that when put together create a glorious "Mosaic".
I dearly loved this:
so gently imbued
tis an intimate delicate wish
of pained fragments
streaked of sweet reflective hope
that dances in luminous hues
of blue-violet and midnight
Thank you most gratefully for so generously sharing your excellent skills to benefit our enjoyment and learning experience … my best to thee, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃
PS: If you might wish to view my work, I have a few on here, or it can be found at <https://www.writerscafe.org/RichardJ>
What a most wonderfully imaginative and creatively laid kaleidoscope of colored thoughts, feelings, emotions, and dreamlike imagery in vivid poetic voice and metaphor, to captivate and fulfill any passionate poet's romantic fancies 'n ideals.
Most particularly, I was struck by the exactness of your wording and perfect artwork choices, the smoothness of syntax and spot-on line-breaks, vivid imagery, and vibrant metaphor … those aspects of poetry that make for excellent Free Verse writing.
How true, too, that life frequently prepares us for bountiful wonderments by breaking us into many facets (often painful) that when put together create a glorious "Mosaic".
I dearly loved this:
so gently imbued
tis an intimate delicate wish
of pained fragments
streaked of sweet reflective hope
that dances in luminous hues
of blue-violet and midnight
Thank you most gratefully for so generously sharing your excellent skills to benefit our enjoyment and learning experience … my best to thee, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃
PS: If you might wish to view my work, I have a few on here, or it can be found at <https://www.writerscafe.org/RichardJ>
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Re: Re. mosaic.
Hi Richard!
Nice to meet you :)
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and taking the time to stop by. Your thoroughness is smile inducing and I'm extremely moved you were emotionally affected and yourself, touched by my little poem's offerings. Your feedback is amazingly eye opening and I very much enjoyed the reading.
I humbly thank you for such wonderful sentiments and positive reinforcement.
I'll definitely be by WC to read and review...
Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
-B
Nice to meet you :)
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and taking the time to stop by. Your thoroughness is smile inducing and I'm extremely moved you were emotionally affected and yourself, touched by my little poem's offerings. Your feedback is amazingly eye opening and I very much enjoyed the reading.
I humbly thank you for such wonderful sentiments and positive reinforcement.
I'll definitely be by WC to read and review...
Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
-B
Re: Re. mosaic.
1st Jun 2021 6:39pm
Sue,
You make sharing a deeelightful joy. : )
Looking forward to more with You.
You make sharing a deeelightful joy. : )
Looking forward to more with You.
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Re. mosaic.
1st Jun 2021 2:03am
Re: Re. mosaic.
1st Jun 2021 2:54am
lol... Ty so much, cf.... I am so grateful for your visit. Your thoughts are always welcomed and never taken lightly. I really enjoy your insightful nature....
Ty for the list add and the kindness..
Best, my friend 🙏🏻
✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B
Ty for the list add and the kindness..
Best, my friend 🙏🏻
✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. mosaic.
1st Jun 2021 6:26am
Re. mosaic.
1st Jun 2021 8:46am
Blu
In reading this, my mosaic heart breaks in the beauty and is reconfigured in the beauty. Exceptional.
In reading this, my mosaic heart breaks in the beauty and is reconfigured in the beauty. Exceptional.
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I can't thank you enough for your kind words and generous list add . I'm so appreciative and I humbly thank you. I am Heartened that you found resonance while reading.
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
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2nd Jun 2021 1:40pm
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Re: Re. mosaic.
3rd Jun 2021 3:04pm
Hi Tim,
I am honoured to read your description of my poetic expression... "as a series of luminous hues in themselves" .... it's an extremely kind sentiment one that impacts me deep and I that I'm very grateful for.
I appreciate the list add and your thoughtfulness all around.
Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
xo
B
I am honoured to read your description of my poetic expression... "as a series of luminous hues in themselves" .... it's an extremely kind sentiment one that impacts me deep and I that I'm very grateful for.
I appreciate the list add and your thoughtfulness all around.
Warmest regards,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. mosaic.
3rd Jun 2021 6:22am
Reminds me of the phrase the cracks are where the light comes through. But you take the idea into a rhapsodic poem that leaps into worlds of passion and lyrical metaphors that is filled with light like a stained glass window of metaphors that dazzles the mind and imagination into a tale of broken pieces to be put back together. The subtle nuances here unfold with dream-like verifying that embraces my mind and heart into unbound beauty.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. mosaic.
into unbound beauty, is where I want to drift away for awhile, too.... lol... Wow, John. Your comments just leave me freaking breathless sometimes. I am blushing and extremely humbled by them.
I wholeheartedly thank you and I'm extremely grateful for you, the generous list add and all the times you've knocked me over with a feather. I am lucky in your friendship, and don't I know it!
My smile is wide, knowing you enjoyed reading like you did... it's truly lovely to read your kinship in thoughts that we share.....
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
S
I wholeheartedly thank you and I'm extremely grateful for you, the generous list add and all the times you've knocked me over with a feather. I am lucky in your friendship, and don't I know it!
My smile is wide, knowing you enjoyed reading like you did... it's truly lovely to read your kinship in thoughts that we share.....
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
S
Re. mosaic.
12th Jul 2021 5:03pm
This flows naturally with warmth and emotion, evoking inspiration and appreciation for the written word and for the artist who create these wonderful pieces.
Excellent verse Blue.
Excellent verse Blue.
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Re: Re. mosaic.
2nd Feb 2024 2:14pm
Thanks for the kind insight, dear W.
I hate stumbling across ink that I missed replying to, my apologies, my friend.
Better late than never, hopefully that doesn't sound like a cop out it's totally not... Again, much obliged for checking this out when you did. That's always meaningful to me... (dispite me dropping the ball, I swear... hahaha)
All my warmest,
🌹B
I hate stumbling across ink that I missed replying to, my apologies, my friend.
Better late than never, hopefully that doesn't sound like a cop out it's totally not... Again, much obliged for checking this out when you did. That's always meaningful to me... (dispite me dropping the ball, I swear... hahaha)
All my warmest,
🌹B