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Beauty and Capacity
I'm drunk in your aura
Each day better than the last
You present yourself to be taken
Mightily I rush through your senses
Beauty and capacity
I ride you beyond reason
My nymph
Our awakening
Each day better than the last
You present yourself to be taken
Mightily I rush through your senses
Beauty and capacity
I ride you beyond reason
My nymph
Our awakening
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Re. Beauty and Capacity
Anonymous
29th May 2021 5:13pm
Italics and bold
I like it like that 😉
I like it like that 😉
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Re: Re. Beauty and Capacity
29th May 2021 5:59pm
Had some help and now on the format crusade
Appreciate the nods
I’ll be back with more .....
Appreciate the nods
I’ll be back with more .....
Re. Beauty and Capacity
29th May 2021 8:08pm
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29th May 2021 8:14pm
Anonymous
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29th May 2021 8:16pm
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29th May 2021 8:28pm
Re. Beauty and Capacity
Anonymous
29th May 2021 9:04pm
Good poem!!
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Re. Beauty and Capacity
29th May 2021 9:29pm
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29th May 2021 9:32pm
Re. Beauty and Capacity
29th May 2021 9:35pm
What I enjoyed about this so much is the outer and inner dialogue entwined. I ride you beyond reasoning is a fantastic line that I took more metaphorically then physically.
Well done, Poet!
BIG LIKE!
Well done, Poet!
BIG LIKE!
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Re: Re. Beauty and Capacity
29th May 2021 9:39pm
Yes, you read that in sync
I am new to formatting but I see the power in doing it now
Will be doing a lot more I think
I really appreciate your comments A
It's like winning Poetry Lotto getting appreciation from you
Thank you !!!
I am new to formatting but I see the power in doing it now
Will be doing a lot more I think
I really appreciate your comments A
It's like winning Poetry Lotto getting appreciation from you
Thank you !!!
Re: Re. Beauty and Capacity
29th May 2021 9:40pm
Well I don't know about lottery, but I certainly know good poetry ( I feel ) when I see it. I like this direction, Poet. Also meant to comment on the natural rhythm of rhyme. Well done! Looking forward to more of this new you!
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29th May 2021 9:48pm
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29th May 2021 10:05pm
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29th May 2021 10:08pm
Thanks Oral
I appreciate your visit and comment, good to see you back here at the ranch
I appreciate your visit and comment, good to see you back here at the ranch
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29th May 2021 10:10pm
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29th May 2021 10:50pm
Re: Re. Beauty and Capacity
29th May 2021 10:57pm
Yeah, the nymph line is something
Where does it come from I wonder
Mucho thanks LJ
You're comments rule
Appreciate you 💙
Where does it come from I wonder
Mucho thanks LJ
You're comments rule
Appreciate you 💙
Re. Beauty and Capacity
Anonymous
30th May 2021 2:36am
Speak.. you still the king.. love the preach..
Dave
Dave
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30th May 2021 2:37am
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Re. Beauty and Capacity
11th Jul 2021 10:00pm
"Beyond reason"! Damn.
Sounds like an explosive awakening.
BIG LIKE on this one Poet.
Sounds like an explosive awakening.
BIG LIKE on this one Poet.
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11th Jul 2021 10:14pm