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YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
Tell me more, tell me!
You excite me with words.
And compress pleasantly inside
when it happens to us
From your unexpected words
All fantasies come alive again
I am infinitely ready to love -
Tell me all your desires
You whisper to me at night,
Naked sharp phrases
You are unleashed, so assertive,
And you start so strongly and quickly!
When you reach out, you will treat me
With fingers walking on the skin
Revealed moans are singing,
And you like them too!
You are getting into me, see? Look!
Burning in me, accepting me
We kiss somewhere inside,
It's a different reality, like space
Your body and your lips
They encode me forcefully
Tell me more, say ...
I want to, I'm like you - deviant
You invented me yourself,
My miracle, night prince ...
Words hover above me -
Commanding me for your pleasure
You excite me with words.
And compress pleasantly inside
when it happens to us
From your unexpected words
All fantasies come alive again
I am infinitely ready to love -
Tell me all your desires
You whisper to me at night,
Naked sharp phrases
You are unleashed, so assertive,
And you start so strongly and quickly!
When you reach out, you will treat me
With fingers walking on the skin
Revealed moans are singing,
And you like them too!
You are getting into me, see? Look!
Burning in me, accepting me
We kiss somewhere inside,
It's a different reality, like space
Your body and your lips
They encode me forcefully
Tell me more, say ...
I want to, I'm like you - deviant
You invented me yourself,
My miracle, night prince ...
Words hover above me -
Commanding me for your pleasure
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Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
24th May 2021 9:11pm
Total and Complete Erotic Splendor !!
Where have you been the last few weeks ?
I depend on you to break all the rules in my mind ...
REALLY BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
Where have you been the last few weeks ?
I depend on you to break all the rules in my mind ...
REALLY BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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24th May 2021 9:27pm
I am here for your total and complete erotic splendor. ;) I have been in a pretty bad place the past couple of weeks but I am trying to be here for you! I don't want to let you down. I love the BIG LIKE (Really) and thank you so much for the comment and RL Poetspeak. ✨💖💥
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Re: Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
24th May 2021 9:32pm
Hey BP! Thank you so much! I am really happy you liked it. Hopefully I can excite you with words sometimes. ;) ✨💖💥
Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
24th May 2021 9:43pm
Absolutely brilliant piece, sweetie. From start to end a seemless flow of erotica
Awesome job, super hot read
Love and light
Ron xx
Awesome job, super hot read
Love and light
Ron xx
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24th May 2021 10:04pm
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment Ron. You definitely excite me with your words. ;) I am so happy you liked it, I love super hot. Sending you lots of love and light! xx ✨💖💥
Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
24th May 2021 11:34pm
Clean up in aisle 10 as the words spill out my pen, hot breath whispered in her ear...
Great write Kristina
Great write Kristina
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24th May 2021 11:59pm
Definitely excited to see the words spilling out of your pen * cough *. lol Ah, hot breath in the ear sending tingles of exciting words no doubt and a need to clean up all the wet spill left on aisle 10 which no doubt was carried over to other aisles as well. ;p You can't take me anywhere without ... ✨💖💥
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25th May 2021 11:43am
Hey Francisco! I am here to excite you with words, so if I accomplished that then I am happy. ;) Thank you so much for the comment, I will try to keep writing. ✨💖💥
Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
25th May 2021 1:28am
This is a really steamy one with a mysterious darkness to it. We keep thinking of that succubus that comes in the middle of the night with the right words and touch. Mmmmmm, to tight Lady
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25th May 2021 11:45am
The steam and darkness follow me around I_IS_ME, perhaps I am the succubus that comes in the middle of the night... exciting with words and touch. Always striving for and loving the tight seal of approval. ;) ✨💖💥
Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
30th May 2021 00:43am
I love a girl who needs a little force here and there. And your poem was pure erotic sunshine. A delight to my erogenous senses, There is magic in your glee that took me deep in and kept me there wanting more. Love, love how you invite your man to lead you into the garden of your eden.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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30th May 2021 2:35am
Ah yes! some masculine force is truly exciting. I do love delighting the senses, especially the erogenous ones. And I love the word glee, it makes me happy! but I am really happy I could take you in and leave you wanting more. A man likes to lead, yes? More on that later... ;) ✨💖💥
Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
10th Jul 2021 6:06pm
"Naked sharp phrases"
I've always said, the brain is the first body part to be stimulated and it all goes on from there.
Incredible and edible write.
I've always said, the brain is the first body part to be stimulated and it all goes on from there.
Incredible and edible write.
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Oh definitely, the brain is always first. I am happy if I stimulated your brain Wally! And whatever else from there... ;p Incredible and edible is great! ✨💖💥
Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
14th Jul 2021 10:28pm
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14th Jul 2021 11:13pm
I am really happy you liked my words carinthian! :) Thank you so much for the comment and feedback. ✨💖💥
Re. YOU ARE EXCITING ME WITH WORDS!
28th Sep 2021 9:13pm
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28th Sep 2021 9:19pm
Those are the kinds of demands that I like very much! And if not bring out the rope and whip. :p ✨💖💥