Erotic Moment

Melting at the edge of moments, that's beautiful Kris.

Thank you so much for the comment Lj! I am really happy you think that's beautiful. :) 🌹💋

So beautiful Love your use of Roses
Love and light
Ron x

You are such a keen gardener of beautiful roses Ron so I am delighted that you love my use. Thank you so much for the comment! Love and light back at you. 🌹💋

Hey Tim! Thank you so much for the comment. Really happy you think it's well said. ;) 🌹💋

Thrills and chills

BIG LIKE

I do love thrills and chills PoetSpeak, and especially giving them! ;) and also BIG LIKEs. 🌹💋

Beautiful ... Bless and love ... ..

Hey FeN, I am really happy you think it's beautiful. :) Thank you! Bless and love back at ya. 🌹💋

Hope you enjoy orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing.

Thank you so much Francisco, I do love orgasmic bliss! I will endeavor to keep writing some blissful things for you. :) 🌹💋

delightfully lyrical embrace of words...love it

Thank you so much Bc, 'delightfully lyrical embrace of words' I love that and that you love it! :) 🌹💋

Beautifully wrought capture of love's feel!

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment Aj, that makes me really happy. I know you are well versed in the capturing of love's feel. :) 🌹💋

Hey BP! Thank you so much for the comment, I am really happy you liked it. :) 🌹💋

This is beautifully romantic.... tender & swoony... well done!
❤k

Thank you so much for the comment BT. So happy you found it beautifully romantic but I really love 'swoony'. :) 🌹💋

Beautifully composed, romantic piece, goddess Kristina🌹My two favorite line are "your sophistication of movements" oh to be in the embrace of one completely invested in the  moment and so adept at love making. The first stanza is wonderful. Brava❣🙏

Oh yes! To surrender into the embrace of someone so adept they can make you forget everything else. That's what I need. :) I am really happy you liked this one GW. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. 🌹💋

Dear K,

The longing and understanding of desire throughout this write is many things not least of which is envy for me. To have that passion, that excitement that known quantity of desire is my envy. This lovely poem is a reflection on its writer and the openness to give and know how to give- especially to the person you most want to receive it is the most profound. I guess in my melancholy state I wish I could use this as a how-to manual. It’s a fantastic and beautiful poem. H🌷

Deer in the headlights! You have such a wonderful way with words. You have expressed what I had hoped to capture so perfectly. I do think that giving can be one of the most satisfying things and when you receive that reciprocation of love and admiration it means the world. Thank you so much for the comment and I am so happy you thought it was beautiful. I am so sorry you are feeling melancholy H. Hugs and kisses! 🌹💋

A manifold of sensual impressions emerge and are emitted in every aspect of this piece, from the word selection, to the accents & emphasis, to the beautiful structure...  All feels delivered in a very composed and sublime fashion.  I like the incorporation of "stream of celestial stars".  I think this individuates the stars.  (no easy task:). And the Limitless.  Yes.  I am a fan of the Limitless.  Very nicely written...

I love your description and I am glad you could see all the different aspects; thank you so much for the wonderful feedback Cipher. I am also a fan for the limitless and breaking normal confinements. The stars show us there are infinite number of paths. We can gaze at them and dream of all of the possibilities... :)  🌹💋

Light ... fluid ... sensuous ... pulled me in ... total seduction ... great job dear poetess ...

My intent was to pull you and then totally seduce you LDF! So if I accomplished that then I am really excited. ;) X 🌹💋

Goodness, Kris!

Is there any stopping you (no one should try!)?  When tired words have gushed in abundance with the clap of chaos and thunder, you then take a whiff of eloquence and create a whisper of life that stuns and reignites the world.

For you, the melting is obviously the molding, because when concupiscence beckons mutual submission between your ego and alter ego, the growth potential becomes limitless; you melt, and you mold, and you transform, and then repeat the cycle ad infinitum.  To remain in body is limitation; to “stream outside the body” is limitless as the cosmos.

What a beautiful poem and awe-inspired concept!

Sincerely

cab

Wow, you leave me truly speechless with your gorgeous words cabcool. I absolutely adore everything you said. I wish I had the words to adequately respond.

"when concupiscence beckons mutual submission between your ego and alter ego, the growth potential becomes limitless" is really perfectly stated. I love the idea of limitless potential and growth, and sharing that with another. You have made me so happy with this absolutely amazing comment.

Thank you so much! 🌹💋
- Kristina

You are welcome; your own words could often make even a rock sing.  It's hard to read you without acknowledging the depths of meaning in your words.

I must also mention that that image continues speaking long after the words are gone to bed.

Sincerely

cab

I can melt into your words and feel the lick of your poetry. There is a timelessness here that enchants me to heaven. Love what you do to me with your verse.

XoXoXo
John

Melt with me, and get those licks in. ;) Enchanting to heaven is my goal here and I love doing it to you with verse. ;) Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback John, this really makes me happy. 🌹💋

Those "waves of silence" are the perfect moments when no words are needed, capturing all the passion and sensuality, the connection between two individuals. It's like nothing else exists in those moments, just two people.

Nicely penned Kristina.

Oh definitely!  Beautifully said Wally. You always have such great and lovely feedback. I can feel the connection with your words too. 🌹💋

Romantic and sexy. Favourite lines:

You are all in me, and I in you
So limitless ...

               ... So totally ...

'You are all in me', oh yes! I had multiple things going through my mind; mostly one thing. :p There is definitely a romantic side and a sexy side so I am really happy you see them both. Thank you so much for giving me your thoughts.  🌹💋