Resist

A very basic seduction but well drawn out. Poem richly captions the picture that expresses best 'a woman's smouldering surrender'.

Thanks Solomon. I appreciate the read and comment.

there's unsated hunger for you

Oh, I like this word "Unsated".  I wish I was aware of it, I could have worked that into the poem.  Well need to use in the future. Thanks for the informative comment.

inexaustibly informative

That has to be the most erogenous tender spot to a woman's libido...mmm... when his hot breath is a wisp away for the earlobe, a little dip of the tongue inside the ear, and whispered promises.. this is a soft mental serenade my wandering poet

I shall remember that is a "sweet spot".  Always enjoy a comment from my butter-rum princess. A whisper was added.

Aww.. on that soft receptive sentiment... please enjoy your weekend as well my wandering poet

To resist would definitely be futile.

Thanks for the comment Ms. Shannon.   It may be futile but trying can be enhancing.

Oh, this one gives tingles. trail ascends to the back of an ear.. yes please! ;) Going to stop before I start getting graphic. lol Resistance is definitely futile.

Got the tingles - then I've done my job.  : )

Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the like.

Excellent, a real quick creator of an UP. Hugs and peace, oral

UP always good. Thanks TO.

Futile, but oh so fun to feign :)

Yes, it is for both parties. Thanks for the comment and read.

Let them flirt!  : )

Thanks for the comment.

Very seductive, sexy and a compelling read! I loved every line and it goes on my list!

Thanks for sharing. :)

You are too kind; and must delighted you enjoyed. Thanks for adding to your list.

Your words are vividly erotic.

Thank-you for the comment, Dee.

There's an arrogance to this, telling the reader how they will feel/react, but it's an appealing sort of knowing arrogance, and it works in this piece. I particularly like that the title can be read as a command to resist leading to the end where resistance is deemed futile. Lovely play of tension in that.

I so have one small suggestion for this, and that's to eliminate the "the" at the start of the piece, so it begins straight away with "lips."

Enjoyed this. Thanks for the read :-)

Thanks for the feedback. Good suggestion on "the".

Hello Leo, luv :-) ~

This piece is truly exquisite in the feeling it elicits. Perhaps one of the most intense areas that is too oft neglected as far as I’m concerned is the neck and shoulders.

That lovely line down the side of the neck and across the shoulders to the arm is one where there must be clusters of nerves.

You elucidate so beautifully that moment of melting that takes place when one plays in that area. Thank you for the frisson of intense feeling you’ve given me today.

You have a definite gift for the evocative…

Savaja

I couldn't pay for a nicer review. Thank-you for the eloquence of your comment. Truly appreciated.