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So, a guy walks into a bar...
His laugh
is how laughter
was always
meant to sound—
A mind's eye
gently strokes memory
as their affects slowly
wash over
like a symphony
of souls
a hallowed union
known
in definitive,
darkness veering
to light
as music
of conjoined laughter
echoes and twirls
They are of curiosity
magic and song
Beings thought
to have never been
Yet, are.
two proven of existence
within every laugh.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
A good sense of humor is sexy and imperative.
pic via Pinterest
A good sense of humor is sexy and imperative.
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Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
15th May 2021 6:25am
Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 1:07am
Ohh grace, I thank you for stopping by and taking a read. It's so true, about buoying the heart... and soul!
🌹
I love seeing you 🦋
-xo
🌹
I love seeing you 🦋
-xo
Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 9:19am
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
15th May 2021 6:28am
Laughter and good tste in music and etes to drown in lips to be lost in
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 5:12am
Ohh yes, Colin! .... music, laughter add writing poetry and I'm in heaven.... lol... heh heh heh
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts....
🌹
xo
B
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts....
🌹
xo
B
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
15th May 2021 9:27am
waka! waka! waka! Haha. I love to laugh so this poem is something I can relate to.
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 5:14am
Waka Waka.... he says!!! lmao... 😂 😅🤣😆😄
Me too... nothing better, imo.
Glad you liked it, DC.
I appreciate you
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Me too... nothing better, imo.
Glad you liked it, DC.
I appreciate you
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
15th May 2021 12:03pm
Laughter the best medicine, heals all if only for a single moment, great write beautiful lady
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 5:17am
My bravest knight!! I hope you're doing well (better) It is the best medicine. Indeed it is...Making people laugh and the ability to raise spirits.... just priceless, imo.
love seeing you today, Ron 🦋
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
love seeing you today, Ron 🦋
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
15th May 2021 12:54pm
Laughter is in our hearts. The joke I've heard is who make more in a week a prostitute or a drug dealer. The prostitute because she can wash and rewash and sell her crack again.
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 5:18am
heh heh... Your joke.... lol.... dang, Francisco.... ha... I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts... 🌹
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
15th May 2021 12:58pm
Dear BV,
😂!
I couldn’t have, wouldn’t have said any of this better. You poet whisperer! There really is nothing sexier than a great sense of humor and intellect! Brava! H🌷
😂!
I couldn’t have, wouldn’t have said any of this better. You poet whisperer! There really is nothing sexier than a great sense of humor and intellect! Brava! H🌷
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
Ohh H...
I was hoping you'd comment!!
Because out of anyone, I just knew you'd get it.
NOTHING sexier... in my opinion, as well. It's just my catnip beyond all catnip... purrr.... haha.
I appreciate your perfect assessment...😂... the list add and all your kindness, H
I hope you're doing well this weekend.. 🌈
Much love,
🌹-💙
xo
B
I was hoping you'd comment!!
Because out of anyone, I just knew you'd get it.
NOTHING sexier... in my opinion, as well. It's just my catnip beyond all catnip... purrr.... haha.
I appreciate your perfect assessment...😂... the list add and all your kindness, H
I hope you're doing well this weekend.. 🌈
Much love,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
15th May 2021 2:24pm
Wonderful write ... the visuality is pleasing ... great flow ... nice personalizing touch ... a find a person's laugh ... along with their smile is part of his or her appeal to me ... you made me remember some of the more dear ones to me ... thank you ...
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 5:24am
Thanks so very much, LilD... it's so dear to me... this trait in a person.... my heart sings that I could remind you of those who impacted you in a similar fashion...
I appreciate your list add and the kind words, dear poetess.
🌹-💙
xo
B
I appreciate your list add and the kind words, dear poetess.
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
15th May 2021 11:36pm
Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 2:15am
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
16th May 2021 2:22am
Agreed, Tim!
It's a must, indeed
Relieves the pressure and brings levity.
I thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.
I always like your visits!
🌹
-B
It's a must, indeed
Relieves the pressure and brings levity.
I thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.
I always like your visits!
🌹
-B
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
18th May 2021 8:04am
Rich with the heady stuff of a life well lived. Going to bars, laughing, and enjoyed the mirth of this man sounds wonderful. And you do the scene justice with the rhythmic pulse of your poetry.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
18th May 2021 2:24pm
Your comments are lovely and much appreciated, John. Long live mirth and merriment!! 😄😅😆🤣
I'm so very appreciative of the list add and your engaging, kind insights.
Cheers 🍻!
🌹-💙
xo
-S
I'm so very appreciative of the list add and your engaging, kind insights.
Cheers 🍻!
🌹-💙
xo
-S
Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
6th Jul 2021 8:24pm
I laughed as soon as opened it and saw the image, and yet it's like you were reading our thoughts.
Creative and witty write Blue. I liked it alot.
Creative and witty write Blue. I liked it alot.
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Re: Re. So, a guy walks into a bar...
6th Jul 2021 11:36pm
lol.... I am glad you could laugh along with me!
Thanks for reading and your comments, Wally.
In these times being able to laugh is vital!
🌹 - B
Thanks for reading and your comments, Wally.
In these times being able to laugh is vital!
🌹 - B