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Your Scent is so Exciting
Nothing more than a reptile
Well fed but unsatisfied
Roaming the grounds for prey
Aroused by the hunt, by you
Your scent is so exciting
Unusual and mysterious like you
Arousing me to the depths
Viper aching to strike
Biting the occassional toy
This sport is fun for me
Easy access, just push a buttom
Access sweet and juicy flesh
Still unsatisfied, searching
For the ultimate comrade
Knowing this prey is different
Exotic and with the finest smell
You are the perfect fit
Molding around my needs
Has the hunt ended with you?
It seems there is no substitute
Well fed but unsatisfied
Roaming the grounds for prey
Aroused by the hunt, by you
Your scent is so exciting
Unusual and mysterious like you
Arousing me to the depths
Viper aching to strike
Biting the occassional toy
This sport is fun for me
Easy access, just push a buttom
Access sweet and juicy flesh
Still unsatisfied, searching
For the ultimate comrade
Knowing this prey is different
Exotic and with the finest smell
You are the perfect fit
Molding around my needs
Has the hunt ended with you?
It seems there is no substitute
Published 5th May 2021
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5th May 2021 6:54pm
5th May 2021 6:56pm
5th May 2021 8:50pm
Substitute her not
You've got
her number
did you slumber?
has she got yours?
Idk, just tired of always replying with "I enjoyed reading this" I mean, granted I do but it feels generic and I hate it. Just trying to break that up some if I can.
You've got
her number
did you slumber?
has she got yours?
Idk, just tired of always replying with "I enjoyed reading this" I mean, granted I do but it feels generic and I hate it. Just trying to break that up some if I can.
5th May 2021 9:10pm
I appreciate real comments
It pisses me off when poets just billboard their avatars and don't leave a comment
You rule Lj
X
It pisses me off when poets just billboard their avatars and don't leave a comment
You rule Lj
X
5th May 2021 10:04pm
Oh, to be the prey of savage lust is so exciting... You need that prey that can challenge you back. Beautiful, mysterious, unpredictable, a biter.. ;) And yes there is no substitute.
My whole, existence is is about finding prey,capturing it and making it my own. For I am the reptile. I glow in the dark too. It's a warning ...
If you're sweet I might just bite a little and tease you ....
Thx Kx
Appreciate the RL
If you're sweet I might just bite a little and tease you ....
Thx Kx
Appreciate the RL
6th May 2021 1:16am
6th May 2021 1:54pm
6th May 2021 1:56pm
You want to be that reptile, don't you Oral. ?
Anything for an UP i say ....
Thx O
Anything for an UP i say ....
Thx O
6th May 2021 1:59pm
6th May 2021 2:01pm
The UP is all that matters in the end
Placement is good too but first things first.....
Placement is good too but first things first.....
6th May 2021 2:05pm
6th May 2021 4:06pm
6th May 2021 6:14pm
3rd Jul 2021 10:14pm
Poet, BIG LIKE on this. It's genuine in form, written in those stanzas setting up for the next.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
3rd Jul 2021 10:32pm
This was fun to write
You ought to try it
Go on the prowl wally
Lots to choose from
Scent is everything
You ought to try it
Go on the prowl wally
Lots to choose from
Scent is everything
