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sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
across the sea
and sacred land
where shore meets shore
and skies merge
in that recherché awareness
unique winds of exotic
blown by unshackled abandon
maybe happenstance
'tis the circulation
of honest wonder
that rises and falls—
ebbs and flows
lustrative thoughts
swirling of cleansing desires
perhaps gentle,
this zephyr
Oh, a tender kiss of breezes
smalling distances
across our sea
and fertile land
honed in imagined perfection
such is beauty in green and gold
opulent, is the reflection
of how their dream(s) will unfold
sparkling hues
dazzling of once dared
velvet in thy touches
and as time,
stills amongst pure heaven
as theirs is a message of...
love.
Yes—
of love.
and fortune found.
as this
shore.
sky.
air.
and land.
is but
simple crossed, and back
all theirs,
in a magic ease
~of knowing.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Just working through the body aches of the second covid shot....and thinking about loyalty, and friendship love. The kind that makes you feel immeasurably lucky to have those particular people only a few swipes away... despite the actual distance.
Ty for the morning coffee, C
It's so appreciated as are you.
🌹
xo
Just working through the body aches of the second covid shot....and thinking about loyalty, and friendship love. The kind that makes you feel immeasurably lucky to have those particular people only a few swipes away... despite the actual distance.
Ty for the morning coffee, C
It's so appreciated as are you.
🌹
xo
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Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 1:40am
Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 5:00am
I completely sympathize and emphasize today, my friend 🙏🏻.... Ouch!
I appreciate you reading and the generous list add.... You're extremely kind and motivational... I almost removed this because it feels wonky but it's kinda a shout out to friendship, so I am leaving it stand... lol
Much gratitude, FeNyX
🌹
xo
B
I appreciate you reading and the generous list add.... You're extremely kind and motivational... I almost removed this because it feels wonky but it's kinda a shout out to friendship, so I am leaving it stand... lol
Much gratitude, FeNyX
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 7:05am
I may unpublish stuff, but I never delete anything ... and I keep copies saved either way ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 4:57am
Ty for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts, VM. You're very kind 🙏🏻
Warmest regards ✨
🌹
xo
-B
Warmest regards ✨
🌹
xo
-B
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 5:23am
Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 7:09am
Oh Grace, thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts with me
🌹
xo
I very much appreciate it, truly.
🌹
xo
I very much appreciate it, truly.
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 5:26am
You could easily claim this all about the isles and even the luck of the Irish. There could be a leprechauns attached to and seen dancing a jig within this piece. This piece is open to magic and time immeasurable, with all the beauty of crashing waves on jagged rock and the green of possibilities. Tight work
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Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 7:08am
Ty, Me.
Your comments and feedback had me looking at this piece differently and I appreciate you reading and that viewpoint... very much.
Warmest regards and loads of thanks, my friend
🌹
xo
B
Your comments and feedback had me looking at this piece differently and I appreciate you reading and that viewpoint... very much.
Warmest regards and loads of thanks, my friend
🌹
xo
B
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
I glad you got your second shot for covid. I get my 2nd shot for covid on Friday. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 6:30am
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
This is a beautiful, dare I say lush piece. To me it evokes thoughts of Ireland and Irish ancestry. This passage makes me smile happily about kismet, serendipity, and happenstance and it's universal influence."maybe happenstance
'tis the circulation
of honest wonder"
I love this passage.
"Oh, a tender kiss of breezes
smalling distances"
Bravissima, sweet Goddess BB🌹🐻👑🐰
'tis the circulation
of honest wonder"
I love this passage.
"Oh, a tender kiss of breezes
smalling distances"
Bravissima, sweet Goddess BB🌹🐻👑🐰
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Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
23rd Apr 2021 00:05am
Ohh my goodness, BB... Your big heart and supportiveness is just the kick in butt I needed to try and get my self criticism in check. Yes!!
I wholeheartedly appreciate your encouragement.
I was thinking about what you said and I might try and record this one, it could be pretty if I can find some celtic type copyright free music to go along with the reading.... anyway.... You made me smile with your comments here and I appreciate you saying privately that it would make a good spoken word poem... sorry to out you (not sorry lol! ) ... hahaha...
All my warmest regards, tremendous hugs and respect,
🌹💙🌹
-B
I wholeheartedly appreciate your encouragement.
I was thinking about what you said and I might try and record this one, it could be pretty if I can find some celtic type copyright free music to go along with the reading.... anyway.... You made me smile with your comments here and I appreciate you saying privately that it would make a good spoken word poem... sorry to out you (not sorry lol! ) ... hahaha...
All my warmest regards, tremendous hugs and respect,
🌹💙🌹
-B
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2021 10:16am
... if that picture isn’t Scotland / North of England I will personally eat my shoe.
Yes this poem is clearly about love, but it reminds me so dearly of the land that I love, and the land that moves me and that’s the reason of the RL for me.
I’m getting goose pimply just thinking about it. And I fkn live on this island. 😂
A really lovely little ode to wishes and dreams. Thank you for sharing.
-M
Yes this poem is clearly about love, but it reminds me so dearly of the land that I love, and the land that moves me and that’s the reason of the RL for me.
I’m getting goose pimply just thinking about it. And I fkn live on this island. 😂
A really lovely little ode to wishes and dreams. Thank you for sharing.
-M
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Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
haha... It's totally Scotland... purposefully so, too!
Yes, it's about love of friendships and lands that hold them dear.
You're lucky you have such pride in Country and cherish your homeland so. I have days recently, where if someone were to ask me where I was from I'd be tempted to tell them I'm Canadian.....sheesh.... 😳
I am so grateful for your RL and my heart soars that you found a little something that resonated within.
One day I'll finally check off a bucket list item, to see where my ancestors traveled from and some of the places within England /Scotland that draw me, like a siren song.
I appreciate your visit, Missy
🌹
xo
Warmest regards ✨
-B
Yes, it's about love of friendships and lands that hold them dear.
You're lucky you have such pride in Country and cherish your homeland so. I have days recently, where if someone were to ask me where I was from I'd be tempted to tell them I'm Canadian.....sheesh.... 😳
I am so grateful for your RL and my heart soars that you found a little something that resonated within.
One day I'll finally check off a bucket list item, to see where my ancestors traveled from and some of the places within England /Scotland that draw me, like a siren song.
I appreciate your visit, Missy
🌹
xo
Warmest regards ✨
-B
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 9:37pm
Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
22nd Apr 2021 10:15pm
Thank you very much, LV
I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts.
🌹-B
x
I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts.
🌹-B
x
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
25th Apr 2021 1:53am
You put loyalty and love onto the western wind as it blew fragrant with sincerity that circumnavigates with tried and true repetition this sphere we call earth.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
25th Apr 2021 3:54am
Thank you, John
I'm all smiles you enjoyed this piece. Your thoughts describe perfectly my intentions on the page. I 'm humbled and terrifically inspired but you, my friend. I appreciate your RL add and all your lovely encouragement.
In friendship,
🌹
-Susan
I'm all smiles you enjoyed this piece. Your thoughts describe perfectly my intentions on the page. I 'm humbled and terrifically inspired but you, my friend. I appreciate your RL add and all your lovely encouragement.
In friendship,
🌹
-Susan
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
25th Apr 2021 11:44am
You get beat up from the shot too? I was pretty drained for about two days. Though 4 days and I'm living it up 😎. I got a list of things I want to do.
Awesome poem. Beautifully written.
Awesome poem. Beautifully written.
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Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
Man, DC... that second shot had me wiped! I was sooo tired that first day and sore all over. The second day was better. It only improved from there. Small price to pay, though! My pharmacist said that your body has fully produced the antibodies 14 days after your last shot, so I'm waiting on that timeline to thrown more caution to the wind than previously. I will absolutely still wear my masks but I will actually go and do stuff that I put off because of social distancing... THAT'S huge.... my list is long af, too, DC! Ha!..Thanks for checking in, my friend 🙏🏻
I'm glad you enjoyed reading.. thanks so much.. I am grateful for the RL as well ☺
🌹
xo
B
I'm glad you enjoyed reading.. thanks so much.. I am grateful for the RL as well ☺
🌹
xo
B
Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
9th Jun 2021 8:41pm
It's a very surreal and dreamy poem Blue. I really enjoyed the delivery, heightening senses and in a very soothing way.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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Re: Re. sailing upon an unmistakable and decidedly so...
9th Jun 2021 9:58pm
Hi, Walter :)
I'm glad you enjoyed reading and found a soothing sense within. It's always lovely to see you, my friend 🙏🏻
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
I'm glad you enjoyed reading and found a soothing sense within. It's always lovely to see you, my friend 🙏🏻
Warm regards,
🌹 - B